Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJune 15, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-16181Using Fatherhood to engage men in HIV services via Maternal, Neonatal and Child Health entry points in South AfricaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chinyandura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== In addition to some of the comments raised by the reviewers, please also address the following in your revision: 1. In your Study Setting section, you mentioned that the study was conducted in South Africa from June-July 2021. In the section that follows, you mentioned that data was collected between May and June 2021. It is not clear why you have such inconsistency in your reporting of dates. 2. The inclusion and exclusion criteria for the FGD participants in not clearly spelt out. Please provide a clear inclusion criteria that was use to recruit participants. 3. How many FGDs were held? 4. In the data analysis section, you mentioned that the NVivo 12 software was used for "coding, categorization, and identification of themes". Further down in the same section, you also mentioned "Each member of the first team independently generated initial codes through open coding." Given that two independent individuals had done this exercise separately, what was the reasoning behind having the second team to re-do the same exercise including re-naming, re-coding, and re-categorizing? 5. By definition, a theme is a central unifying idea or the bigger issue that that emerges from your data. In the results section, you mentioned that fatherhood was one of the key themes identified. How does fatherhood emerge as a theme when in fact it is one of the characteristics used for inclusion into the study? Check the last line in the Results section. How were the themes identified? 6. Please make sure to follow all PLOS ONE guidelines when submitting your paper. For example, you did not include line numbers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 06 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Title: Using Fatherhood to engage men in HIV services via Maternal, Neonatal and Child Health entry points in South Africa. COMMENTS: Introduction: Paragraph 3: first, second and third lines say repeated message in the different ways. Paragraph 4: third sentence too long looses meaning on the way. Methods Study setting Paragraph 1: first sentence does not concur with what is in the abstract. When was this study conducted? Second sentence: sounds incomplete.. “aged between 15+ years are estimated” Whole paragraph 1: fatherhood and age “15+ years” sound incompatible?? Study design and participants Paragraph 1: fifth sentence: when was the study conducted? “May and June 2021” there seems to be no consistency. Sentence 8: does not align with the age 15 years participants. Sentence 9: does not align with the age 15 years participants. Ethical approval Paragraph 1: “Written informed consent was obtained from all participants.” Participants underage (aged 15 under methodology above) cannot give consent. Data analysis Paragraph 1: sentences 5&6: Concord, revise. Level of involvement Concord: Double check whether the noun is singular or plural Culture and gender norms Concord: Double check whether the noun is singular or plural Results Paragraph 2: ages of 15+ and The age range of the participants was 23-67 years.’ Please check consistency. My final Comment: This study has vital inconsistencies in it: 1. Very important and legal issue of participants’ age to take part in the study has been overlooked when the study involved age 15+ participants. Towards the end the study changes from age 15+ to 23-67 years. There was no mention of steps taken to with regard to ages under 18. For minors younger than 18 years of age to participate in a research study, parental or guardian permission must be obtained. For minors a youth assent form is required. 2. the period of data collection varies from May to June and June to July in other sections. 3. the results report the information not in line with age 15 years participants. The experiences related by the participants are not those of a 15 year old male person and later it was mentioned to be of a 23-67 years. 4. concord: the agreement of the verb and the noun is an issue: data was instead of data were. Language editing might help for this study. Reviewer #2: This is an interesting study. However, there are a few minor issues that need to be addressed. 1. The study sample needs to be described more elaborately. How many participants were fathers and how many were not? This has important implications on transferability of the findings since the experiences of fathers may be different from that of those who are not fathers. 2. One of the findings of the study was that: "Participants highlighted that socio-cultural norms on gender roles deterred men from actively engaging in childcare and MNCH services." Cultures are not homogenous. They tend to be influenced by ethnicities. South Africa is a very diverse society. For that reason it is even more important to describe the research sample more completely. Were there any Afrikaner men in the sample? Were there non-black men in the sample? The cultures of white male South Africans may differ from those of black males. In the same vein the barriers that men face may differ depending on race. A more elaborate description of the demographic composition of participants is important in contextualizing the research. 3. The limitation of the study is described as follows: "The study was conducted with both men engaged and not engaged with HIV services in Johannesburg district, so may not be generalizable." Since this study is purely qualitative it is more appropriate to speak of transferability rather than generalizability. Generalizability is a concept that is associated with quantitative studies which put premium on the statistical aspects of the studies. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Using Fatherhood to engage men in HIV services via Maternal, Neonatal and Child Health entry points in South Africa PONE-D-23-16181R1 Dear Dr. Chinyandura, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Edward Chiyaka, Ph.D., MSc Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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