Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-17586The relationships between screen exposure, parent-child interactions and comprehension in 8-month-old infants: The mediating role of shared viewing and parent conversationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Luo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 31 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for this manuscript, which investigate an interesting and timely topic in the language development literature. Unfortunately, I have to recommend that the manuscript be rejected in its current form, because of important methodological flaws. First, no information is provided about the screen exposure scales. We know nothing about the composition and validity of constructs. How is the Shared Viewing construct defined? What about the Parent Conversation construct? More details are provided on the Brigance Parent-child interactions Scale (BPCIS), but this scale does not seem to be specifically related to interactions during screen time. Also, not only we don't have information about the scale's validity, but the scale was manipulated by the authors (two items were added, and the scale was changed to 5 points). I am also concerned with the fact that background variables are not included in the analysis as control variables. The two groups — screen-exposed v non-exposed children — differ significantly in relation to the amount of time that the parent spends with the child, with parents in the screen-exposed group spending more time with their child during an average day. However, it's not really clear to me how this variable relates to the Parent Conversation, Parent-Child Interactions, and Shared Viewing variables. For what I can see, the higher CDI scores may very well be driven by the fact that parents in the screen-exposed groups are spending more time in one-to-one situations with an adult (vs. one-to-many). We may want to factor this out: Holding constant the amount of time that parents spend with their children, what is the effect of spending some of this time looking at a screen? I can't see the rationale behind the authors' decision to divide the children in two exposure groups, instead of analyzing exposure as a continuous variable. I worry whether this dichotomization may have biased the analyses. I also wonder whether the authors are aware of this new meta-analysis, based on 11,413 children aged 0-6 years, showing that screen time (including non-shared screen time) has no negative effect on vocabulary size and, if anything, it has a small positive effect? The manuscript should be reframed to have less focus on the negative effects of screen exposure. While it is true that the authors have made their data available, the variable names have not been translated to English, which makes it effectively impossible to use the data set for international researchers. Reviewer #2: Review PONE-D-23-17586 This a Chinese study reporting on screen exposure in 8 months old infants as reported by over 400 parents. The focus on a very young age group as well as being based on a non-western sample could make it an essential contribution to the field. There are however a few questions/issues that I believe needs to be explained/addressed before a possible publication. 1. Selection of sample. How many families were approached? As it reads now, not a single family denied participating. If so it needs some explanation. The only attrition mentioned is attributed to incomplete questionnaires (n=4). 2. Ethics. Was the Helsinki convention followed and were the families allowed to withdraw their consent without consequences regarding future care? 3. Method. How long time did the assessment take and was it completed at the clinic? Wad it filled in by the mother, father or conjointly? 4.Quality cntrl. What does “uniform training” entail? 5. Instruments. PCDI. Is there a Chinese validation that has been published? The reference is to a clinical study (25). The same goes for the Brigance scale (23). What was the reason changing the scale from 3- to 5-points? 6. Screen exposure questionnaire. Is it available online or by request? Or is it possible to give an example question? Also: How does it relate to the ongoing debate on how to capture screen time in families with young children (e.g., Barr, R., et al. (2020). Beyond Screen Time: A synergistic approach to a more comprehensive assessment of family media exposure during early childhood, Frontiers in Psychology. 11:1283.) 7. Comprehension score. It is maybe a bit surprising that the children not being exposed to any screens have a lower comprehension score (effect size=?). This find would benefit from one or two more sentences. Could it be that the uneven financial distribution between the groups could be an answer? There is also a near significant effect in the mother’s educational level. Or is it the case that video chat has a positive effect and that this is the effect that the study captures? 8. Content. An improvement of the paper would be to highlight content more. It is almost not mentioned in the background or in the discussion. But content matters! It is obvious from Figure 1 that the screen exposure is relatively benign: The digital media content is almost completely made up of video/voice chat plus listening to music. A rough estimate based on the figure suggests that those aspects make up about 85% of the content. This is not a clear message as the paper is currently written. 9. Limitations: I would not call N = 437 for a small sample but that is of course my subjective opinion. I would prefer “a relatively small sample”. 10. Figures: Figure legends are missing. It is unclear what the Y-axis represents in Fig 1, I have assumed minutes. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-23-17586R1The relationships between screen exposure, parent-child interactions and comprehension in 8-month-old infants: The mediating role of shared viewing and parent-child conversationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Luo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please do this major revision. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for revising and resubmitting the manuscript. Unfortunately, many of my methodological issues still stand, and going through the manuscript again has brought some new issues to my attention. Therefore, I believe that the manuscript should go through a substantial revision before being considered for publication. In the following, I will only highlight a couple of major issues in the manuscript. I am still not sure what "screen exposure", "shared viewing", and "parent-child conversations" are. I assume these are constructs exctracted from the attached questionnaire, but there are too many unanswered questions. Who developed the instrument? Has the instrument been validated? How were the constructs generated — theoretically, based on factor analysis, etc.? How valid are these constructs? What are their psychometric properties? How are the composite scores generated — are they sum scores, mean scores, factor loadings etc.? This is the most important predictor in the paper, and we know virtually nothing about it. All these questions should be answered in the text. Attaching the questionnaire does not help in figuring out how the responses were processed, unfortunately. On p. 6, the authors say: "The questionnaire covers the following main points: whether or not the infant has been exposed to an electronic screen, types of electronic screen device, content viewed, purpose of screen viewing, the age of children's first screen exposure, frequency of screen exposure, the caregiver’s behavior during viewing, the screen interactivity. Sample items of shared viewing and parent-child conversation". However, only three factors are extracted from the questionnaire. Why were some of the theoretically important constructs combined? Was it a data-driven decision? Also, I have an issue with screen exposure being coded as a yes-no variable. The questionnaire seems to allow for a much more nuanced (continuous) coding of screen exposure. I appreciate the fact that screen exposure may differ across cultures, but I find it hard to believe that there are many infants that have NO interactions whatsoever with digital media, given how ubiquitous they are. My other big concern relates to the outcome variable. No summary statistics for the PCDI are provided, but I checked myself and the mean comprehension score is around 40 words (SD = 27), which is comparable to CDI data from other languages. However, nothing seems to predict differences in PCDI scores except for parent-child interactions and screen exposure. There are no effects of gender, risk factors (which is not defined in detail), parental education, or household income. This is very unusual, given that all these variables are known predictors of language development already at such an early age. For instance, gender alone is known to explain around 8%/9% of the variance in vocabulary size; therefore, it is puzzling that a model including both background factors and data on parent-child interactions only accounts for around 5% of the variance. I am not saying that the data is incorrect, but it is hard to interpret a model in which many important predictors of language development do not show any effect. Are there other factors that have not been included in the analyses that may explain the variance that is left unexplained by the included variables? Once these issues have been dealt with, it will be easier to interpret the results (it is not possible at the moment because there are too many unknowns). Reviewer #2: Thanks for the revised version, the paper is now much clearer and in my view closer to be accepted. However I do have some remaining comments that I believe should be addressed. 1. Attrition. There is still no info in the paper re the attrition which I believe is necessary. 2. Ethics. Now ok. 3. Method. The answer is informative, but I would like some of it to be included in the paper as well, e.g., who completed the q-naire (couldn’t find it in the revised text). 4. Quality cntrl. Now ok 5. Validations. Now mostly ok but the text states“We referred to the Chinese version of the BPCIS, which was validated by Jingjing, to evaluate the quality of parent-child interactions”. A ref to Jingjing is missing (29) here. 6. Screen exposure. In your answer you write that the ref I provided (Barr et al., 2020) contributed to the discussion but I cannot see how and the reference is not added. So what do you mean with “contributed to the discussion”? 7- 10: All issues addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-23-17586R2The relationships between screen exposure, parent-child interactions and comprehension in 8-month-old infants: The mediating role of shared viewing and parent-child conversationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Luo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please revise according to the reviewers' comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 27 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors answered some of my questions and have made a relatively good case in #4 about why eg. education and child gender do not predict vocabulary development in their model. However, many of my questions are still unanswered. Reviewer #2: All of my questions have been fully answered and I the paper is publishable. I congratulate the authors to a nice paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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