Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 12, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-29569Impact response of lightweight steel form concrete composite slabs: Experimental, numerical and analytical studiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 07 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, I believe the following suggestions could be considered to enhance the paper. Major issues: - Improving significantly the resolution of all the figures, graphics and pictures and enlarging them all. - Referring to the FE model robustness and stability. Have you checked the stability of the results against mesh refinements? time integration step? element interpolation functions? - Describing the FE model in much more detail to ensure its reproducibility, primarily if you will not provide the ABAQUS code or files as supplementary material. For example, what does the sentence mean in line 235 “The bond between the W-shaped steel plate and the foam concrete is assumed to be good” in terms of the FE boundary conditions and connection between meshes? Continuous mesh, bonded contact? - Rewriting all the conclusions by adding the numerical values that support them. Minor issues: - Can you please enlarge the font size? It is really hard to read font size 8 when printed. - Line 51-52. “It can not only […] comprehensive benefit”. It is difficult to understand. Please clarify what you mean. - Line 54. The word “reasonableness” does not seem common in this context. Do you mean “reliability”? - Line 59. Please explain what is the “grip force”. Where is that force acting on? - Section 2.1 Lines 58-65. All parameters included in Table 1 do not need to be described in such detail in the text. - Section 2.1 Table 1. If possible, please group the rows with the same value for clarity to avoid repeating numbers, especially when only one value, such as the “Impact position” or the hammer mass. - Section 2.1 Table 1. Please explain the meaning of the specimen codes in the text. If the first number beside the letter H, is the thickness of the foam concrete, why not use the whole number in mm, L-H40-#1? What is “L” standing for? Adding # to the last number would clearly indicate that it is just numbering the specimens, but you should explain that you are numbering the specimens with shared foam thickness, is this right? - Lines 105, 109. The passive impersonal voice is commonly used in technical papers, not “we plotted” or “we can assume”. - Line 139. Reference [30] does not refer to the D’Alembert principle but to an article describing the inertia effects. Therefore, please move [30] to the end of the sentence. - Line 156. Please rewrite the sentence including “…resistance will be stronger, …”. The whole sentence looks a bit redundant. - Formulae (2) and (3). Maybe it is not necessary to show the formula for the mean or specific values. - Line 195. Remove the words “to the outside world”, maybe it is not necessary. - Sections 4.1. and 5.1. “Establishment” is not appropriate to this context. Better use “Setup” - Section 5. Please, write every single word for ESDOF the first time you write it; that is in line 265, not in line 272, where you can write ESDOF. Sincerely. Reviewer #2: This study examines the low-velocity impact response of lightweight steel form concrete composite (LSFC) slabs. Tests reveal that the LSFC composite slabs experience local indentation and overall deformation. The peak impact force is positively correlated with foam concrete density and negatively correlated with foam concrete thickness on the top plate. Optimal energy absorption occurs at a 40mm thickness and 600 kg/m³ density. The study includes a validated finite element model and an equivalent-single-degree-of-freedom (ESDOF) model for initial impact resistance assessment. Despite the experimental work conducted by the authors, this article has some issues that require a rewrite: 1. The exploration and analysis of the experimental data are not sufficiently profound, which does not align with the effort invested in the experiments. 2. The numerical model used for the analysis is relatively simplistic and does not reference state-of-the-art methods. 3. The introduction of the experimental preparation is not comprehensive enough, and the corresponding figures lack detail. 4. The captions are not clear enough, especially in the inset figures, where the internal scales are entirely illegible, as in Figure 10. Reviewer #3: The manuscript presents an interesting experimental and numerical study on the impact response of lightweight steel foam concrete composite slabs. The work is technically sound with a good combination of physical testing, FE modeling, and analytical modeling. The results demonstrate the effects of foam concrete thickness and density on the slabs' impact resistance and energy absorption capability. The failure modes, force-displacement responses, and energy absorption characteristics are well characterized. The FE model shows good agreement with experiments. The ESDOF model reasonably predicts displacements. Overall the work provides useful insights into the impact behavior of this novel composite system. The manuscript is well-written and easy to follow. I have provided 18 detailed comments and suggestions aimed at strengthening the work further, clarifying some aspects, and improving the presentation quality. Addressing these should enhance the manuscript's contribution and prospects for publication. Comments: 1. In the abstract, summarize the key findings and conclusions in a concise manner. 2. In the introduction, provide more background on the limitations of traditional steel-concrete composite slabs in high-rise buildings to motivate the need for the lightweight alternative studied here. 3. In Section 2.1, provide a schematic cross-section of the slab with dimensions labeled to help visualize the geometry. 4. specify how the support conditions simulate a simply supported slab. 5. In Section 3.1, comment on whether the observed failure modes match expectations and any prior work. 6. explain the physical meaning/significance of the dip angle change rate parameter. 7. explain the cause of the small fluctuations seen in the loading portion of the force histories. 8. In Section 3.4, discuss how the displacement results compare with any prior studies on similar composite systems. 9. explain why elastic springback causes the final drop in the energy curves. 10. In Section 4.1, provide more details on the cohesive element properties used between material layers. 11. In Section 4.2, present quantitative validation metrics for the FE model rather than just a qualitative statement of good agreement. 12. define all variables when the ESDOF model is first introduced. 13. In Section 5.3.1, explain the physical meaning of the reduction factor used for foam concrete stiffness. 14. In Section 5.4, explain the selection of the amplification factor. 15. In the conclusions, highlight the major findings more clearly. 16. Carefully proofread the manuscript to fix minor grammar issues. 17. Add a table summarizing all specimen details. 18. Provide more discussion of how the findings can be utilized for design purposes. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Mahmoud Akees ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Impact response of lightweight steel foam concrete composite slabs: Experimental, numerical and analytical studies PONE-D-23-29569R1 Dear Dr. Xu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The authors have investigated substantial changes in the revised manuscript. I believe the manuscript in its current form is suitable for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Mahmoud Akeed ********** |
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