Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJune 21, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-18858Exploring running styles in the field through cadence and duty factor modulationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nijs, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process, that pointed weaknesses on both the substance and the forme. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 29 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The aim of this study was to measure the effectiveness of a training program (changing either cadence or duty factor). There were several other objectives involved, although these were a little confusing. There is merit in the paper, but it could be made a lot simpler so that the main findings were clear and so that practical applications were discussed in more detail. The paper is well written overall with some occasional writing errors. It was unfortunate that the authors did not include line numbering throughout the submission as this made it more difficult to highlight areas for improvement. Line 9 – I don’t think you need the definite article before “cadence”, in that you can remove “the”. Should you include a citation in this line? You have made other statements in the abstract that could conceivably use a citation so it is not clear why you do this for just the first statement. Line 32 – please change “may” to “could”. This applies to many other sentences in the manuscript. Line 38 – please use more formal language and rewrite “lab” as “laboratory”. Line 41 – note that van Oeveren et al. (2021) state that, “more experienced and faster runners are just as likely, if not more so, to run with lower SF’s instead of higher SF’s.” Line 45 – when you use the term “in the open field”, do you simply mean “outdoors”? Line 50 – I think you could come up with a better description of duty factor here. Why not something like “ratio of stance time relative to stride time”, with an earlier explanation that stride time is the time taken for two successive steps? In line 56, it appears that you relate it to a single step time, which is not the same thing. Line 51 – you do not explain here whether duty factor should be high or low for these factors. For example, it is possible that a low duty factor is beneficial for a lower running economy, but also it is possible that a high duty factor is beneficial for some runners. Lines 56-61 – it would be useful to know here how you would intend to change cadence or duty factor: would this be by changing stance time, flight time, or both? Lines 64-76 – so where would particular types of runners lie in this model? For example, you state that the “average” runner would be the ‘sit’ type, but where would we expect sprinters to be, or marathon runners? Women have higher cadences than men, on average, so are they generally ‘hop’ runners? Are any of these running styles better or worse for runners? Lines 78-95 – the aims are written in quite an unwieldly way. I think you could remove a lot of the discursive parts and state these more clearly. It is quite strange, for example, to make a statement like that in the last sentence – why would you predict that user experience would be relatively good, but that there would be room for improvement? What evidence was this based on? Line 105 – even with non-parametric statistics, is your sample size still too small for this kind of analysis? Lines 116-121 – do you have any information about the accuracy or precision of this instrument? Line 176 – what qualitative methodology was employed in this part of the study? Line 191 – this appears to be the last time that line numbering is used in the paper, which has made it much harder to provide feedback to you. Please included line numbering for the whole document. Page 12 – you mention here “marginally” higher values – what is your definition of “marginally”? On the next line, you need to move “only” to after “2” to make it clearer what this sentence means. Tables – why have you not provided the p-values where these were not below 0.05? It is much better to provide the values rather than simply write “ns”. Page 14 – you mention at the bottom of this page that “The participants appreciated the scales differently” – could you explain whether this means they interpreted the meaning of the scales differently, or simply rated the apparatus differently? Page 16 – please change “less changes” to “fewer changes”. Discussion overall – you need to spend less time repeating the results and more on discussing what they mean. You could try to point out the relevant practical implications at the end of each paragraph. Page 17 (top part) – it isn’t clear here what the participants are rating; is it the device that was used or the instructions provided? Page 17 (about line 8) – please include an apostrophe at the end of “participants”. Page 17 - if there are no population reference values for these “styles”, then how can you allocate people to them? I am not totally sure that using this model helps you in this paper, partly because you have so few participants, but also because it isn’t needed to explain how you can change cadence or duty factor with an audio device. You might want to remove references to the model and make the process simpler for yourself. Page 17 – please explain to the reader why a ‘bounce’ runner might find it more difficult to decrease duty factor. This is not obvious from your paper. Page 18 – I don’t know what you mean by “upcoming variables”. Page 18 – the concluding paragraph is confusing as it isn’t clear whether the point was to see whether the athletes could fit the running styles in the model, or whether it was to see whether the training was beneficial (including from the perspective of using the audio device). Figures – I think the colored figures are very helpful in seeing the individual responses. Reviewer #2: The authors aimed at analyzing the effects of modulating cadence and duty factor by using acoustic and verbal instructions. The novelty of the study is basically the overground running condition. The authors used the previously introduced dual- axis model to describe the running style. The aim of the study is plausible. However, the study has some drawbacks: Very low number of participants (1 female, 4 male), non-validated method (?) for stance time detection, lack of effect sizes in the statistics, „sit“ as the preferred running style. My detailed comments are below. Line 9: It is untypical to cite a paper in abstract. Line 45: The reference [15] cited and in the following sentence it is written that in these studies possible changes in speed as a result of the cadence manipulation were not specifically analyzed. In the sentence after this sentence it is written that [15] reported an increase in cadence combined with a reduction in speed. Please revise to avoid confusion. Line 78ff: After the sentence „This study had three aims“, the first two aims are explained with numbering (1-2) and at the end of the introduction the third aim appears. It is hard to follow. Line 91: It is not clear what you actually mean by the combined and individual instructions. In order to understand, one should first read the whole manuscript. Please revise acordingly. Line 95: Please define „relatively good“ in terms of your methods. Line 118: Please provide information or references to prove the validity of the algorithms used within MoveMetrics. Table 1: The first participant is outlier in terms of the age and the gender. It is understandable that you already have problems with finding participants, however it is not so plausible to write that you searched for 6 months and could only find 5 participants. Maybe to give participants wearable sensors and collect data for 6 months would have also been an alternative. Line 138-139: „We then calculated the median speed, cadence and duty factor for each instruction, to reduce the effect of possible outliers due to the environment.“ It is not clear how you reduced the effect the possible outliers due to the environment and what you mean by „environment“. Line 140ff: Please give the effect sizes and consider corrections for multiple comparisons (e.g. Bonferroni-Holm). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Exploring running styles in the field through cadence and duty factor modulation PONE-D-23-18858R1 Dear Dr. Nijs, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Laurent Mourot Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for making the recommended changes. Your paper reads much better now and has some interesting findings for practitioners. Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing all my comments. Please make sure you are consistent in british/american english (e.g. analysed/analyzed) before your final submission. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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