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PONE-D-23-32997Are change of direction speed and reactive agility different abilities from time and coordinative perspectives?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gonzalo-Skok, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 22 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study aimed to examine the independence of reactive agility (RA) and change of direction speed (CoD) utilizing the same movement pattern. Basic agility assessment metrics included completion time and entropy. The authors applied an ecological validity approach in measuring agility. While the paper is well-prepared, the chosen topic lacks novelty, given prior studies establishing the independence of CoD and RA (e.g., see Young, W. B., Dawson, B., & Henry, G. J. (2015). Agility and Change-of-Direction Speed are Independent Skills: Implications for Training for Agility in Invasion Sports. International Journal of Sports Science & Coaching, 10(1), 159–169). Moreover, kinematic distinctions in knee joint mechanics during running have been noted between RA and CoD tasks (Spiteri et al., 2015a; Thomas et al., 2020). Additionally, CoD plays a mediating role between sports discipline and RA (Domaradzki et al., 2021). The rationale for the study lacks persuasiveness in light of these earlier findings. If controversies exist concerning the CoD and RA relationship, the authors should emphasize them in the introduction, providing a clear justification. It is crucial to emphasize the new contributions to the existing literature, especially considering the established relationship between CoDs and RA, which is also confirmed under ecological validity conditions (Spiteri et al.) The introduction requires further development. Some terms are poorly explained and challenging to follow. The literature review is inadequate. • Line 64: "growing number of studies" – specify the studies for clarity. • Lines 71–73: The sentence is unclear. Provide sources and rationale. • Lines 88–89: The hypothesis formulated in the paper should align with prior literature. • Line 92: I suggest using the term “Participants” instead of “Subjects”. • Line 97: The choice of a large effect size (0.9) for sample size calculation seems questionable. A sample size of 17 appears small to ensure measurement reliability. • Lines 126, 138 – The titles of the figures should be more specific. The discussion lacks a coherent narrative. • Line 329: "reduces the degrees of freedom of the player?" - Clarify if it means that the reaction to a stimulus in the task limits the degrees of freedom of the player's sensorimotor system. • Lines 331-332: The sentence, “To the best of our knowledge, no other studies have investigated the influence of including decision-making on movement variability (i.e., entropy) during CoD motor tasks,” seems unsupported in the context of the specified study limitations - Lines 382-383, “Lastly, decision-making speed was not examined, which could provide valuable insights into perceptual-cognitive abilities.” • The limitations section should be broader, particularly addressing the small sample size issue. Reviewer #2: This study aimed to test whether reactive agility and change of direction (COD) are related or independent capacities in terms of completion time and entropy. The study is well-written, easy to read, and provides new insights into the field of field testing for soccer, considering two aspects of particular actuality in the literature of this field, such as COD and agility. This also has the merit of including for the first time (to the best of the Authors knowledge) the use of IMU systems (and the related entropy calculation) in the COD/agility assessment. The research methodology is well-structured and clear and results are presented with clarity. However, I would suggest to consider the use of some Figures instead of Tables, thus allowing the readers an immediate comprehension of the data behaviours. Discussion is clear and provides and in-depth analysis of the findings in light of the literature. Overall, I would like to congratulate the Authors for their work that certainly deserves publication. I have only a couple of minor suggestion that I hope can contribute to complete the overall quality of the manuscript. Line 72-73. Not clear. Ok, this is useful to introduce the concept of entropy but it seems a connection with the previous paragraph is lacking. Please rephrase or make it clearer. Consider to dedicate also more space to address this concept. Line 313-325. This paragraph is very well-written and addresses the peculiarities of aspects related to the agility test proposed (cognitive load, more than two options, human stimuli), that contributes to a better ecological validity. However, for intellectual honesty, it is also important to highlight evidences on the importance of cognitive performance (tested using computer based cognitive tasks, i.e., with low ecological validity) for team sport performance. Please consider to dedicated space addressing this aspect. Here a couple of references on the issue to cite: Scharfen, H.-E., Memmert, D., 2019. Measurement of cognitive functions in experts and elite athletes: A meta-analytic review. Appl. Cogn. Psychol. 33, 843–860. https://doi.org/10.1002/acp.3526 Trecroci, A., Cavaggioni, L., Rossi, A., Moriondo, A., Merati, G., Nobari, H., Ardigò, L.P., Formenti, D., 2022. Effects of speed, agility and quickness training programme on cognitive and physical performance in preadolescent soccer players. PLOS ONE 17, e0277683. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0277683 Line 371. Have the Authors considered to test COD tasks (pre-planned and reactive) with the control of the ball? Is it possible to expect different behaviours as compared to those presented? This certainly would have imposed a more cognitive demands on the players, increasing the complexity of the task. Please elaborate. I do believe that enlarge the possible practical applications derived from these findings might be helpful for the readers and also for practitioners working with athletes directly on the field. Reviewer #3: General comments The purpose of this study is interesting. However, there are several concerns and suggestions that warrant the authors' attention before reaching any decisions. Title I have a reservation about the use of the term "reactive" with agility. The reactive character is an inherent feature of agility Abstract I suggest to simply use agility and omit the term reactive Line 44: reads awkward. Please, rephrase Introduction This study addressed a topic which has already been investigated. However, the authors aimed to control for entropy, a factor that hasn't been taken into account in the earlier studies. Therefore, I think that this study is based on a sound rationale and that the main purpose complement previous findings. However, the choice of female players as well as the sport discipline is not justified. I suggest to simply use agility and delete the word "reactive" throughout the manuscript Line 67-71: It is not that straightforward to grasp the main idea of this statement. Please reword and try to make it easier to understand. I always prefer using short and clear sentences. Line 74: More details about linear and non-linear techniques analysis are required. Line 79: I'm not accustomed to the concept of "entropy" but I'm looking forward to the methods section and how the authors approached this. Line 88: I would add the appropriate literature references that guided you to such a hypothesis Methods Line 93: As this is a cross-sectional study, I'm concerned about the very small size, making study underpowered. I’m interested to hear from the authors about this crucial aspect. I know that conducted a priori power analysis is not a very strong approach to justify the choice of the sample size. In other words, the process can be adapted to make it in line with the number of the participants available. This would mean that it is not "a priori" anymore but just used to somehow justify the sample size. With this in mind, could you please justify the choice of large diff (ES = 0.09) and the 95% power instead of the most common 80% power? Line 124: "of the exist gates to avoid?" Line 134-136: This unclear to me. Does it mean that each of the three preplanned and three reaction run need to be performed four times, meaning 12 preplanned and 12 reactive runs in total? 182: is this correct? ensuring or not ensuring? 188: I would appreciate more details related to the determination of entropy. I don't think that the current description makes it easy for someone to replicate the process. Overall, how entropy was quantified is unclear. 198: why the Kolmogorov-Smirnov and not the Shapiro-Wilk which is know as relatively more conservative? 200: The other alternative would be to log transform the data a consistently run parametric tests. It is just an idea. 205: The term interpretation was repeated twice in the same statement. Please, rephrase. Results 224: As reliability analysis was conducted between the trials within the same session, I suggest to speak of "within session reliability" Table 1: I'm wondering what the reason of calculating the CV expressed as %of TEM and TEM. As far as I know, the common approach is the calculate the TEM and express it as CV. Table 2: “N=204” This value is unclear. Beneath the table you mentioned that N refers to sample but this is not clear. The sample included 17 subjects 244: I thought that this would be the other way around, that is more entropy in agility compared to CoD speed. As the ES values are negative, do you actually mean "significantly lower entropy"? 282: space is missing Fig 4: Panel A of the figure: There are a number of outliers that could have affected the association. Have you checked that? Discussion 312-318: These statements would better serve the rationale than the discussion. As such, I suggest to use them in the introduction. 27-331: This seems to me counter-intuitive but I may be wrong. Interested to hear further from the authors. 332: typo. should be "during" 355-359: This sentence is unclear to me. 376: There is a typo here (standardised) Conclusion 389-392: Too long sentence and reads somehow awkward ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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