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PONE-D-23-21541Effects of surface geometry on light exposure, photoacclimation and photosynthetic energy acquisition in zooxanthellate coralsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. López-Londoño, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. All the reviewers considered the manuscript interesting, but they provided several questions that shoud be addressed before the manuscript can be accepted (see comments below).. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 05 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review of López-Londoño This is a nice study that explores the effects of inclination of coral tissue/skeleton surface on the ability of corals to utilize sunlight. The basic message of the paper – that the ability to use sunlight is important in shallow-water corals and this need reflects their shapes and distribution – is very well known and their results will not come as a surprise to most coral biologists. Nevertheless, this is a nice study that deserves to be published. I would package my comments as “requires modest revision”. My major criticism of the work is that it seems to overlook the seminal work by Len Muscatine, Jim Porter, and Peter Davies (and their peers) that laid the foundations of modern understanding of coral nutrition. Critically, the symbiodinium algae fix CO2 into photosynthetically fixed carbon, a fraction of which is translocated to the animal host, where some fraction is metabolized through aerobic respiration to liberate ATP that is the source of metabolic energy that fuels chemical and mechanical work; the rest is stored as a food reserve (i.e., lipid) or lost from the coral as mucus or DOC. This paper conflates all these processes and does not recognize the true complexity of the biology at play. The reliance on the PUES acronym says it all and sows the seeds of confusion: biologically, I would argue that the algae are supplying carbon to the animal host and that only a fraction turns into energy after it has been respired. The whole heterotrophic side of the nutritional equation argues strongly for tempering the interpretation of the effects of inclination angle on the energy budgets of corals. Other issues to address: 1. Please provide more information on the 20 fragments. Critically, it is important to know whether these are 20 host genotypes or some combination of clone mates. 2. Line 132 – specify type of sensor (not type of meter) 3. Line 159 – describe what “constant agitation” means. I really hope there were control trials completed with seawater alone. 4. Please remove all inference and interpretation from results section. Reviewer #2: 108 – Where do these fragments come from? 20 different colonies (i.e., genotypes)? Orbicella is famous for hosting multiple symbiont species, varying from colony to colony. 115 - Why facing North? The time of year would impact the direction/aspect that the rotation should have been performed? South in the winter, North in the summer depending on the azimuth angle of the sun in the sky? Please add context by providing the dates that the experiment was conducted. 121 – Can you define reaching a steady state? The Qm values in figure 2 only appear to be steady in the 90 degree angle. The 45 degree angle could be characterised as trending upwards? 131 – Specify how the PAR sensor was positioned. I.e., matching the inclination angle with the sensor pointing in the direction of the surface normal (perpendicular?) 133 – This is an interesting approach. Can you provide a reference for this and please elaborate? What was the distance between the black panel and the sensor? 136 – Please contextualise these values. Is 06:00 dawn? 19:00 1 hr after sunset? Etc 188 – This is the section with the most limitations. Extrapolating the repair rates from a study on Porites asteroides (your ref 26) where protein synthesis inhibitors were used, to the present study, is dubious. The genetic identity and light harvesting strategies of Symbiodiniaceae among P. asteroides versus O. fav from Puerto Morelos are distinct (e.g., Hennige et al 2011 Marine Biology) and this must be caveated in this section. 315 – I would caution offering these interpretations in the results section and shift this (and similar comments in above results sections) to the discussion. 396 – Can you please characterise the components of Qm that can be derived from the equation in terms of qP versus NPQ? Does Qm explicitly tell us that the photosynthetic activity is negligible? 408 – Some discussion of this finding in the context of the many studies which have found this across depth / optical depth (e.g., Hennige et al 2008 MEPS) is warranted. 478 – Please present some discussion on how normalising O2 rates of evolution and consumption / A675 to per symbiont cell might affect your narrative. That symbiont cells were not enumerated poses strong limitations on the interpretability and as such multiple scenarios must be explored in the discussion. Both symbiont chl content and density can change across the surface of a colony or across depth / light gradients. How is this expected to alter productivity? These two differing pathways of acclimation could underpin why your inclination angle P:R rates had low correlation? Reviewer #3: The authors explain in the photoacclimation concept, concerning their research question, by describing some of the key papers in the field. When citing papers 12-15 that are on similar subject and share similar properties, it would be good for the reader to have elaborated examples of what was found in these specific studies and how this current study takes a different angle to further increase the knowledge. The authors deployed fragments of Faveolata coral (representing flat and branching morphologies) on an underwater table in different light exposure angles. They found that at shallow depth, parts of the coral that have more direct exposure may be photoinhibited during some hours of the day while shaded parts are in chronic stress of light energy deficiency. The idea of measuring photoacclimation in different angles of exposure to light has many advantages over depth depended since it excludes all other factors as spectrum, temperature, currents, etc. The results of this study to my knowledge do not reflect the photoacclimation occur with depth gradient, as some important factors as UV-B present in 3m have a vast influence over photoacclimation. The conclusion is interesting and can be in some degree concluded from the results. While a great work of integrating plenty of sources of data was done- Some notes and questions were raised while reading this MS: Methods: How was the angle of the natural colonies at 5m measured? Since not always these big corals are based on a level ground. Line 174: "were used to characterize the temporal variation of solar energy and light-driven processes according to the inclination angle of coral samples (n = 143 days)".- were there light sensors at each inclination angle during these days that measures intensity from the different angles of the sun during the day? PAM fluorometry is important and widely used, however a very sensitive and complicated tool. In order to extract yield value there is a need for Fv/Fm calculation of the raw data, small inaccuracy in measurements (which might happen under circumstances of diving and the need in such a stable hold of the sensor), can lead to a much bigger error after any other extrapolation of values calculated from Fv/Fm. Therefor we should be very caraful and criticizing in interpreting results derived from any further extrapolation. Also there is no added value in calculating additional parameters from the value given by the PAM. It is obvious that effective yield decreases corresponding to light. There are number of reasons for FV/Fm to decrease under high light intensity (like short term photoacclimation processes), which do not reflect solely pressure that leads to damage. Furthermore: line 195: "The amount of photosynthetic usable energy supplied (PUES) was calculated by subtracting the estimated costs of repair (Ca) from the photosynthetic output of the zooxanthellae (Pg)". There is a difference in making conclusions based on direct measurements rather than on assumptions based on calculation and estimations. Please explain why it is important to estimate the PUES. The reader could better rely on these numbers if it is compared to other studies that could measure similar numbers and maybe on a more direct method. I would suggest sticking as close as possible to the directly measured data. Was the excitation pressure calculated from night and day values measured at each day? Is there a measurement done prior day 1? Yield was measured for the initial 10 days, chl estimation after 10 months, photosynthesis after 12 months. How can we assimilate any connection between the parameters? This study states that its goal is to measure short and long term photoacclimation, however how can we conclude that when the short and long term methods were different? Especially when these were in different seasons. For example: photoacclimation was significant in O2 production 12 months after the experiment started, while PSII yield after a few days according to Fig 2b and average numbers in the supplementary data shows minimal differences between treatments, although the author states that this parameter is stable. Results: Is there an explanation to why in the diel cycle the yield is higher in dawn than during dusk? An important figure would be the change in effective and night PSII yield of each angle vs. acclimation days. Line280: Do these number have units? What is the calculation? are the calculations in Fig 5 correspond to the photosynthetic parameters of each angle? It is very confusing that the DLI calculation is in decimal numbers, assuming that the reader notices that it is not true hour: minute calculation then they should have to make the conversion themselves. Line 356: what are these percentages mean? How come the 90 degrees angle also spend 15% for damage if it does not attain enough light barely for compensation? Statistics is not my strongest side, however a question rises whether the right method is used? since almost in all parameters the P value was significant while the R2 is not as high. High chloropyll content and zooxanthellae doubling in low light locations in the colony requires high energy demand, it is known that the (line 42) "colony integration allows resource translocation from source to sink sites according to metabolic needs [5-7]." Would the authors suggest that the polyps located in high light exposure provides this energy for the high demand polyps although they provide much less energy to the cumulative budget of the colony even after the long term photoacclimation has completed? Can the authors summaries the calculation of the daily (day + night) energy budget of each angle, considering the DLI light availability X diurnal PSII yield? And is that in compliance with the difference in P vs E? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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