Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-11783Transcultural Validation of the “ Revised Sport Motivation Scale ” (SMS‐II) in Arabic Language: Exploratory Study on Motivation in Sport for a Sample of Tunisian AthletesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mohamed, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ==============================A reviewer in this field has carefully reviewed the work. In general, I agree with all the reviewer's comments. Therefore, please revise your work according to these comments. However, if you feel that there are some comments do not make sense to you, kindly provide your rebuttal and justification for me to evaluate.============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 17 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: • The manuscript is fascinating as it extends our knowledge to different cultures that speak different languages. • However, the introduction is extensive, introducing relevant and irrelevant information regarding the instrument. Plenty of history was emphasized instead of emphasizing the importance of the instrument itself and its usefulness in addressing the aspects it was designed to address. Therefore, the introduction can be more precise to address and build the problem of the study. Examples would be a brief background of the instrument (not significant, but brief), then why this instrument is essential in general, and why it is crucial in specific; reporting some of the studies that used it with some results to emphasize its importance, what kind of new knowledge with this aid the end-user when translated and how it can be used in practice. • References are missing in the introduction. • The whole sentence should precede the first time an abbreviation appears in the text. • Sentences should not start with abbreviations. Methods: • Line 145: is the sample adequate to validate the study? Suggest the authors look at: https://www.mdpi.com/862272; sample size estimation. • Line 156: I would suggest removing the history and targeting the instrument. What does the instrument consist of? Is the original instrument attached to this manuscript with items in the same order they were distributed? Pointing at the instrument is highly important. • Line 185: how was the instrument distributed? Penn and paper? Electronic? What kind of software was used? How? • Line 192: before the data collection or before the beginning of analysis? • Line 193: how was the parents' permission obtained? • Line 195: what do the authors mean by The raw data obtained by the participants were analyzed to ensure maximum confidentiality? line 195-197 should be rewritten with clarity in mind. • Line 204-208: is this not part of the PCA? what was the cutoff for a good fit? Where was the goodness of fit measured? How? (model fit)? • Line 210-211: did the authors report the PCA as it was produced from the analysis? I did not see that in the results. The entire table should be presented as the software produced it. • Line 216-219: the statistical presentation is very confusing. The authors calculated everything possible instead of examining only those relevant to the study. What is the difference between lines 216-219 and 204-208? What should the reader understand exactly? • Line 244: what doe the instrument quality have to do with the descriptive statistics of the participants? • Line 258-: how relevant is this analysis to the purpose of this study? Does this mean that the instrument does not measure change from time to time? what is the difference between this analysis and the KMO and Bartlett sphericity test? what is the purpose of this study? was it to measure if participants answered similarly from one time to another time, or to validate a translated questionnaire? line 258-276 is not relevant to this study. • Line 277-281: what is the purpose of line 277-281? does this indicate that the dimensions are related? Ok, why is it important? • Line 285-300 could be changed with the rotational matrix produced by the PCA, and the eigenvalue could be reported with its graph to show the loadings of the items. • Line 327: why not present the solutions as they were produced by the software instead of grouping them? Line 361 (discussion): The discussion should be systemized to address the study's intention (i.e., validating the translated version of SMS-II). It should be presented in the same order as it was tested. 1- Discuss the methodology used to address the problem. 2- discuss the instrument's quality. 3- discuss the Composite scores and their meaning. 4- discuss EFA. 5- DISCUSS CFA 6- discuss Sensitivity analysis in a systamatic fasion. Finally and in the discussion, I would not compare to other instruments as this is not the purpose of this study. Instead, I would compare the other study's findings using the same instrument. Mainly those studies that have validated the instrument in different languages. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Transcultural Validation of the “ Revised Sport Motivation Scale ” (SMS‐II) in Arabic Language: Exploratory Study on Motivation in Sport for a Sample of Tunisian Athletes PONE-D-23-11783R1 Dear Dr. Baaziz, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chung-Ying Lin Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-11783R1 Transcultural Validation of the “Revised Sport Motivation Scale” (SMS‐II) in Arabic Language: Exploratory Study on Motivation in Sport for a Sample of Tunisian Athletes Dear Dr. Baaziz: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chung-Ying Lin Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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