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PONE-D-23-03979Similar functional composition of fish assemblages despite contrasting levels of habitat degradation on shallow Caribbean coral reefsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alvarez-Filip, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 03 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The main claims of the paper and their significance for the discipline The paper compares several measures of the functional composition of fish communities between two coral reef sites. The two sites differ in habitat “degradation”. The premise of the paper is that, at larger spatial domains, fish communities are functionally similar across sites that differ in habitat metrics. The paper is set up as a test of whether this pattern is preserved at a smaller spatial domain. I think the authors characterization of the literature is fair and, as such, the objective of the paper is worthwhile. The contribution of the paper to the discipline would be much enhanced by a theory-based explanation of WHY the large-scale pattern should be observed at a finer spatial extent. The conceptual underpinning is the difference between habitat-specialists and habitat-generalists and the prediction that generalists will fare better when habitat is lost/degraded. I think the authors could do a better job of operationalizing the various verbal concepts they invoke. They discuss “habitat”, “niche”, “degradation”, “functional traits”, and other related terms without clear definitions of each, and how they are operationalized. I am not being frivolous, there is a substantive literature surrounding each of these terms (see for example Hall et al 1997 and Morrison and Hall 2002 for essays about the definitions of “habitat”) and, at minimum, the authors could benefit from stating (1) whose definition they are using and (2) how that is translated to the variables they measure. Do the data and analyses fully support the claims? If not, what other evidence is required? I think there are some weaknesses to the study that diminish support in the authors claims. I summarize my suggestions for improvement below, in roughly descending order of importance. i. No replication of treatment The authors compare two sites, one degraded and one not. The treatment is, therefore, not replicated and there is very limited basis for assigning differences between the two sites to “degradation”. This is basic study design and ought to be acknowledged clearly. A related, by less important comment. The main difference in coral composition between the two sites appeared to be due to one species (A. palmata). The authors could comment on how this affects the generality of their study. ii. Confounding of degradation and tourist visitation The authors state that the sites differ in two ways: Bonanza = degraded habitat and open to tourists, Linomes = “pristine” habitat and closed to tourists. In addition to the lack of replication, any effect of degradation is confounded with effects of tourism. Tourists have various impacts ion coral refs, e.g. boat anchoring (e.g. Flynn & Forrester 2019) and diving (e.g. Giglio et al 2019) so this is not a hypothetical confounding. iii. Functional traits could be better-related to “habitat” and its degradation, and are also likely to be strongly affected by the census technique Fish functional traits could be better justified as relating to habitat or resource use. Diet is clearly relevant, but other variables give the impression of being measured for convenience rather than because of their actual value as indices that are functionally related to habitat use. The functional characterization of the community is also limited and skewed by the method. The visual census method used is highly biased towards counting diurnal, medium-sized, mid-water fishes and the counting biases should be acknowledged when interpreting the results. Specifically:- a) Period of activity. The fish counts were made in the daytime, so it is hard to justify using this variable. Diurnal species were 83% of the total, which is to be expected simply because counts were made during the daylight when most nocturnal species are not reliable countable. b) Mobility: Most species were classified as “mobile”, but absolute home range figures were not provided. If species classified as “mobile” are not actually resident at the two sites, it is probably inappropriate to match site features (habitat) to counts of their “abundance”. c) Body size. Medium-sized species were 40% of the total. This may be simply because they are most amenable to counting using the visual transect method. Small fish are hard to see, and big fish are often skittish (scared if divers) Statistics, and other analyses The paper is prepared to a high professional standard. It is well-organized, well-written, and the analyses are appropriate. Figures A minor comment on the composition of Fig. 1A. The fleshy algal interpolation is clear, but it is difficult to visually judge differences in A. palmata cover. Perhaps consider a different color scheme, larger points, or even a separate paired plot for the A. palmata data. Data availability The preliminary forms say there will be some restrictions on data availability. Then, the authors say all data is available with the MS. I could not find a link to the data? Reviewer #2: 1. Summary of the research and your overall impression The authors characterize and compare the functional structure of reef fish assemblages at two sites: a highly degraded site and a relatively healthy site. They hypothesized that the relatively healthy site would host a more diverse fish trait composition and exhibit a higher functional diversity compared to the degraded site. They characterized different aspects of functional diversity including functional richness, functional evenness, functional dispersion, and functional originality based on six functional traits. The composition and diversity of fish functional traits was similar between the reefs suggesting that habitat condition does not influence trait composition at small-spatial scales. However, they observed significant differences in functional richness evenness between the reefs. The suggest that the complex microhabitats in the healthy contribute to higher functional richness in the healthy reef, while higher functional evenness may be because of the reduced abundance of fish trait combinations in the degraded reef. They argue that functional redundancy in degraded coral reefs may act insures against habitat disturbances in the short-term. The authors conclude that widespread degradation can lead to functional homogenization of fish communities even at local scales. 2. Overall impression of the manuscript I wish to congratulate the authors on a very well hypothesized and researched study. It was enjoyable to read being clear, concise, and easy to follow. The methods are clearly described and repeatable. The data is also well analyzed and presented using relevant statistics and multivariate approaches. The findings are well supported by existing and current literature. The discussion is comprehensive and conclusion is well supported by the evidence provided in the results. I therefore have no major concerns and endorse acceptance of the manuscript following minor corrections: Abstract L37 interchange the order from broad to specific as follows: type of traits, variety and range Results L43 The phrase…decrease in biodiversity is not ‘hitting the nail on the head’)…suggested edit….Habitat loss and degradation are leading drivers of declining biodiversity and alteration of ecosystem processes and functioning…. L268 Check use of the term ‘Fish body size’ vs ‘body size’…’Fish body size’ is mentioned for the first time here, you can do this on the first mention in L179 Discussion L359 I find the term 'reef condition' to be broad. I suggest being specific to 'habitat condition'. Then adjust the next sentence. Despite notable differences in hard coral cover, algae cover, habitat complexity as well as the number of species, density..... L368 Delete ‘because’…it is redundant L458 - 463 Consider breaking this sentence into two smaller sentences. It is a bit long and windy ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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