Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 24, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-12397The association between bullous pemphigoid and cognitive outcomes in middle-aged and older adults: A systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 25 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Search Strategy • To improve the search strategy, it would be beneficial to explain the reasoning behind selecting specific search concepts and aligning them with the PICO components. Additionally, providing clear definitions for search terms, particularly those related to middle-age and older adults, will help evaluate how well the strategy covers the intended concepts. • It is currently unclear whether the search strategy underwent pilot testing. It would be valuable to know if the proposed strategy was tested against established criteria to assess its comprehensiveness and effectiveness. Obtaining this information would provide a better understanding of the search strategy's reliability. 2. Inclusion and exclusion criteria There are concerns regarding the consistency and interpretability of the criteria used during the eligibility study selection process, which can result in higher error rates, compromising the reproducibility and confidence in the screening process. To mitigate these issues, it is advisable to provide precise and clearly defined inclusion and exclusion criteria that are systematically aligned with a PICO framework. This approach will enhance clarity and enable accurate interpretation and replication of the results. 3. Quality Assessment of the Included Studies Concerns arise regarding the transparency and validity of the quality assessment approach. The scoring method employed for NOS in Table S2 lacks reasoning and judgments, undermining its reliability. Furthermore, NOS proves inadequate for assessing quality as it fails to address crucial threats to internal validity, treats all shortcomings equally, and lacks transparency in reviewer judgments. Therefore, it is recommended to explore alternative approaches to quality assessment that overcome the limitations of NOS, ensuring transparency and validity. 4. Results of data synthesis and analysis • Both Figure 4A and 4B are incomplete, with one selected study missing in each. Figure 4A contains only 2 studies, while Figure 4B has 10 studies. (i.e., which should be 3 and 13 studies in each figure) • Conflict in the " Case-control Association between Bullous Pemphigoid and Cognitive Outcomes " section: There is a conflicting statement where the authors mention " Both subgroups of BP diagnosed by ICD codes (OR=3.42,95%CI:1.26-9.31; P =0.016) and BP diagnosed by clinical, histological, and immunofluorescence criteria (OR=4.45,95%CI:3.12 -6.33; P = 0.000) had significantly higher ORs for case-control studies comparing BP and all-cause dementia." which contradicts the results shown in Figure 5B, specifically regarding the “ORs for case-control studies comparing BP and all-cause dementia is OR= 4.25, 95% CI, 2.73-6.61; P = 0.000”. • The authors should enhance the clarity of their strategy for organizing studies into meaningful groups by providing a clear description and the criteria used for evidence grouping decisions. Furthermore, it is important to justify the valid methods employed to synthesize studies within these groups and generate combined summary results. For instance, the reasons for separating dementia diagnosis methods based on ICD codes and medical records should be explained, as well as highlighting the differences in BP diagnosis methods. Additionally, the definition of "medical records" requires clarification, as it currently lacks specificity. Furthermore, the authors should address the absence of discussion regarding the results from the subgroup analysis of these two categories. Reviewer #2: General Comment: Interesting topic that is not routinely discussed/aware in daily. Research is well performed. Here are some suggestions that might improve the article. Introduction Rationale: It would be better to provide the epidemiology data of BP to report the current situation of BP and the urgency to explore it. Explain more about why highlighting the neuro-cognitive effect of BP among other comorbidities (state the burden of disease) State the novelty and the importance of the research. What would this research result be valid for? Why is it important to confirm the association between BP and cognitive outcomes? Methods Why choose middle-aged and older adults as the subject Provide the study type in the inclusion criteria Is there any comparison population (control) to compare the BP and non-BP results? Discussion Find the possible explanation for BP and worse cognitive performance. Is there any difference in BP Association to Alzheimer's dementia vs vascular dementia? State the possible risk factors based on the results and provide explanations. How does race (European and Asian) affect the result? Is there any difference? 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The association between bullous pemphigoid and cognitive outcomes in middle-aged and older adults: A systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-23-12397R1 Dear Dr. Zhou, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Shuo-Yan Gau Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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