Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 7, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-20582 Prime editing-mediated correction of the CFTR W1282X mutation in iPSCs and derived airway epithelial cells PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study “Prime editing-mediated correction of the CFTR W1282X mutation in iPSCs and derived airway epithelial cells”, by Li and colleagues is of high quality and of interest to a broad audience. The results presented in the main figures of the manuscript provide a concise and impactful study on the use of prime editing to “fix” CFTR mutation p.W1282X. The major advances presented here are the use of an “all-in-one” helper dependent Adenovirus (HDAd) to efficiently deliver all of the prime editing machinery to iPSC-derived airway epithelial cells and restore p.W1282X-CFTR function. Because of the size of the payload, this has previously not been able to be achieved. This reviewer found much of the interesting biology to be in the supplemental figures, where a good amount of optimization was performed. There are only a few comments to address. Comments: 1) The authors touted the ability of delivering all of the machinery in a helper dependent adenovirus (HDAd) system for efficient editing. However, even with a plasmid system containing all of the PE machinery and high transfection efficiency, the editing efficiency was only 0.36% in iPSCs. (Fig 1D). With the HDAd system providing ~70% transduction efficiency of differentiated airway epithelial cells only corrected 2-3% of the p.W1282X alleles. Indeed, the bottleneck for correction of p.W1282X CF mutations is the overall efficiency of prime editing, not delivery. While there is nice discussion on this issue, the technical limitations of prime editing will take time to resolve. Maybe this bottleneck would not be a significant issue if in that population of transduced cells, basal cells were effectively edited. This would lead to a repopulation of airway epithelial cells with edited alleles and rescued CFTR function, thereby amplifying the therapeutic impact of low-efficiency prime editing. Important for this study, what cell types in the differentiated airway epithelia were transduced by HDAd? Are basal cells included in this population? 2) Why was functional rescue of p.W1282X-CFTR prime edited differentiated epithelial cells not reported? It would seem that even with as low as 1.5% editing there would be measurable rescue of CFTR function by Ussing chamber assays for measurement of short circuit current (Isc). Indeed, the CFTR functional rescue is often significantly higher than the genome editing efficiency. Reviewer #2: I have reviewed the manuscript numbered PONE-D-23-20582, titled “Prime editing-mediated correction of the CFTR W1282X mutation in iPSCs and derived airway epithelial cells”, submitted by Chao L., Zhong L., et al. This article, presenting an original research, is very interesting and very clearly described. In the manuscript, the authors have developed a novel PRIME editing system for the correction of the W1282X CFTR mutation. The authors did a very good initial screening job for the components of the PRIME editing System (as reported also in supplementary information) and then, validated the best one in iPSCs generated from nasal epithelial cells of a homozygous W1282X cystic fibrosis patient. PE-iPSCs were also differentiated into airway epithelial cells and lung organoids, for testing the restored CFTR function. As a very important point to become a therapeutic modality, the Authors tested the PRIME editing system directly in differentiated airway epithelial cells, using an HDAd vector containing all the sequences needed for the prime editing system (all-in –one vector). In conclusion, the Authors demonstrated the correction of the point mutation albeit in a limited number (2.5-5%) of iPS-derived epithelial cells and, very importantly, getting no indels effect though the DNA. These results could be very useful for the development of an in-vivo PRIME editing system for stop mutation in CF. The only suggestion to the Authors could be to add a sentence in the discussion, in particular in the paragraph stating the editing efficiency, indicating (if it is known) what could hypothetically be the correction rate to be reached by PRIME-CRISPR/Cas9-based systems, in order to get a therapeutic level of CFTR for CF patients. Other specific comments: -Are Results and Conclusions presented in an appropriate fashion and are supported by the data? YES. Results are very well written, linear, and complete. The same is for the Conclusions (see my only suggestion above). -Is the article presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? YES - Does the research meet all applicable standards for the ethics of experimentation and research integrity? YES ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Prime editing-mediated correction of the CFTR W1282X mutation in iPSCs and derived airway epithelial cells PONE-D-23-20582R1 Dear Dr. Zhao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alessio Branchini Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: John D. Lueck ********** |
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PONE-D-23-20582R1 Prime editing-mediated correction of the CFTR W1282X mutation in iPSCs and derived airway epithelial cells Dear Dr. Zhao: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Alessio Branchini Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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