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| Original SubmissionJuly 27, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-23784Does the 11-Year Solar Cycle Affect Lake and River Ice Phenology?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schmidt, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 17 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript predominantly relies on raw data, lacking necessary corrections or adjustments. One notable instance is the ice phenology data, which exhibits disparities in both spatial and temporal resolution. To ensure the credibility of this information, it necessitates validation through either on-site field observations or the integration of high-resolution remote sensing data. Similarly, the utilization of ECMWF data with a resolution one degree, with a lack of validation, raises concerns about its reliability for accurate assessment. Consequently, I find myself skeptical about the overall data quality as presented in its unprocessed state by the authors. Further efforts to refine and validate the data are imperative to bolster the manuscript's scientific rigor and integrity. Reviewer #2: Potential link between the 11-year sunspot cycle and Lake and River Ice Phenology was investigated. The study showed no strong impact of the solar cycle and ice phenology. The topic is very interesting, and the text was written very well, but the figures suffer from low quality. My suggestions to improve this manuscript are listed below. - No need to the given abbreviations in the Abstract. - Line 107-110. Some these cited studies are suggested to be reviewed before talking about third possible driver of ice phenology. - Introduction could be wider reviewing more recent studies. Some suggestions are: ** Pourderogar, H., et al. "Modeling and technical analysis of solar tracking system to find optimal angle for maximum power generation using MOPSO algorithm." Renewable Energy Research and Applications 1.2 (2020): 211-222 ** Beiranvand, A., et al. "Energy, exergy, and economic analyses and optimization of solar organic Rankine cycle with multi-objective particle swarm algorithm." Renewable Energy Research and Applications 2.1 (2021): 9-23 ** Zhou, J., Wang, L., Zhong, X., Yao, T., Qi, J., Wang, Y.,... Xue, Y. (2022). Quantifying the major drivers for the expanding lakes in the interior Tibetan Plateau. Science Bulletin, 67(5), 474-478. doi: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.scib.2021.11.010 - line 168: The way used to de-trend the values should be described. - If the years in which a lake or river did not freeze included in your study, how your results may change? - Figure 2 and 3 need legend and color bar. - What kind of correlation was calculated? linear or nonlinear? justify. How about MI and lagged MI? see: Danandeh Mehr, A. (2023). A Gene-Random Forest Model for Meteorological Drought Prediction. Pure and Applied Geophysics, 1-11. Reviewer #3: Using statistical methods such as the Fourier Transform and simple correlation coefficient, the authors investigate whether there is a connection between solar cycle and lake and river ice phenology over the Northern Hemisphere. However, I have several concerns that I would like to address: - In addition to temperature, it's essential to consider the role of precipitation in ice cover dynamics. I recommend that the authors include precipitation data in their sensitivity analyses, alongside temperature. - A dedicated Discussion section is necessary to contextualize the findings within the context of prior research. While some comparisons with previous work have been made, further discussion is warranted. It is recommended that the authors place a stronger emphasis on the key findings derived from the analyses conducted in this study. This would involve providing a more detailed and comprehensive discussion of the results obtained. By highlighting the specific outcomes and insights gained from their research, the authors can effectively underscore the significance of their work within the broader context of lake and river ice phenology and its potential relationship with solar cycle variations. This will help readers better understand the novel contributions of this study and its implications for our understanding of environmental and climatic dynamics. - It would be interesting to explore the importance of the solar cycle on ice-off variability in comparison to other primary variables, such as temperature and precipitation. The authors should provide an explanation for the weak correlation between solar cycles and ice-off time series. - In the Conclusions section (lines 386-399), the authors mention ocean-atmosphere circulations like PDO, NAO, AMO, ENSO, etc. as primary drivers of ice phenology, but the analysis and discussion related to these features and their correlation with ice variability are not presented in the manuscript. I also suggest they should improve the conclusions section by focusing on the findings obtained by the analyses made in the current work. - For Figures 1 and 4, it's crucial to conduct significant analyses to determine the significance of the dominant periodicities that have been identified. - For Figures 2 and 3, it's advisable to incorporate statistical tests to indicate where the correlations are statistically significant. One approach could be to mark points with significant correlations using cross-marks on the maps. - Regarding Figure 4, it would be beneficial to display the upper and lower bounds of the power spectrum surrounding the averaged curve by considering the curves from all the ice recording points. - In Figure 4, it would be helpful to provide additional explanations regarding the primary drivers of the observed dominant periodicities. Notably, there is a dominant mode at around 4.7 years in the ice-on data and approximately 15 years in the ice-off data. Exploring why these dominant modes differ and whether they have distinct drivers should be addressed. - In Figure 4: Addressing the discrepancy in dominant patterns between ice formation (ice-on) and ice melting (ice-off) periods is crucial. It's worth considering whether distinct factors drive each of these phases, and if so, how it is possible for the primary influencing factors of ice-on and ice-off processes to vary, despite both occurring within the same hydrological system. - The resolution of Figures 2 and 3 appears to be low and should be improved for better clarity. - Including several examples of ice-on and ice-off time series would enhance the presentation of the data and help illustrate key points. - Lines 217-218: The abbreviations NDJ and MAM should be defined to ensure clarity for readers. - Lines 316-330 should be relocated to the methodology section for better organization and clarity. ********** 6. 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Does the 11-Year Solar Cycle Affect Lake and River Ice Phenology? PONE-D-23-23784R1 Dear Dr. Schmidt, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rafael Duarte Coelho dos Santos, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I've read the response to the reviewers and am satisfied with it. I suggest the approval of the paper to the editors. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-23784R1 Does the 11-Year Solar Cycle Affect Lake and River Ice Phenology? Dear Dr. Schmidt: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rafael Duarte Coelho dos Santos Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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