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PONE-D-23-24569Rising and Falling on the Social Ladder: The Bidimensional Social Mobility Beliefs ScalePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Matamoros Lima, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 16 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: One of our associate editors and two reviewers carefully read the manuscript. Based on their evaluations the manuscript is major revision. The associate editor provided the following reasons: The manuscript needs to be rewritten, taking into account the following main comments made by the reviewers Introduction: restructuring of the text to provide more coherent and connected ideas and sections, including relevant references for this topic. Methods: more details are needed [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The theme of the paper is potentially relevant, however, the findings advocating for a two dimensional mobility scale are unconvincing. The main problem I see is that the announced major contribution – creating a two dimensional scale of social stratification – is somewhat uncompelling. Are upward and downward social mobility really two dimensions of social stratification or are they just opposite directions on one dimension? The correlations provided within the article seem to support this view as both “dimensions” correlate with related concepts in an opposite manner, and they are also mutually negatively correlated. I do not see compelling evidence that such :”bi-dimensional” scale provides more explanatory power over “classical” / “uni-dimensional” scales of subjective social mobility. The problem is clearly visible in the claims of the authors e.g. “In Study 1, our main goal was to explore whether upward and downward social mobility are two INDEPENDENT and negatively RELATED dimensions in social mobility (Objective 1).” (p. 7, CAPS added) The two “dimensions” are hardly independent as they are strongly correlated (-0.53 or -0.44). Correlations in Tables 1 and 5 show that on most occasions the upward social mobility beliefs correlate stronger with related constructs. In this regard, I do not agree with the claim of the authors in the discussion in study 2: “From this last perspective, it could be assumed that both types of mobility (upward and downward) have the same relationship with other variables. But we have shown that they do not: Upward is positively correlated with meritocracy and economic system justification, whereas downward is negatively correlated with it; the opposite is true when considering status anxiety. As such, the fact the correlation sign is different indicated that the variables are predicting different effects.” (p. 18). Imagine a scale of happiness and unhappiness. The fact that happiness correlates positively and unhappiness negatively with overall life satisfaction does not mean that there is a need for a bi-dimensional scale of happiness. Moreover, the authors rely on data from non-random and non-representative samples. The two samples used also differ systematically. Sample 1 is basically a sample of high earning university-educated respondents, while sample 2 is notably younger and earns significantly less. Perhaps this is due to changing recruitment method which for study 2 included “institutional mail of a university in southeast Spain.” Also, based on descriptive statistics in Table S3 both samples seem to be skewed politically towards the left, which does not seem to correspond with the overall views of the Spanish population. This bias might influence the observed views on social stratification and further limits possible generalizations. Minor issues The information “Voluntary participation in the study was requested via text message.” (p. 8) is not clear. What kind of text message? Send to whom? Why are the scale items in supplement S2 only available in Spanish? References do not seem to be complete. E.g. item 4 is not a full bibliographic record as it is missing the name of the journal, volume sand issue information. Reviewer #2: This paper takes an innovative step, distinguishing between beliefs in upward societal mobility (improving status) and downward societal mobility (deteriorating status). The motivation behind this research emerges from the observable gap in measurement tools that differentiate these two trajectories. The authors conducted two studies involving the Spanish adult population. The first study (N = 164) employed Exploratory Factor Analysis (EFA) to examine the distinctness of the two types of mobility. The subsequent study (N = 400) employed Confirmatory Factor Analysis (CFA) to validate the structure derived from the EFA. The research is commendable for its approach to examine the multifaceted nature of beliefs in upward and downward mobility. However, while the paper mentions opposite direction effects with related constructs, a deeper exploration into the magnitude and nuances of these relationships and a better integration of previous research would be beneficial. (1) To my surprise the authors argue that “the subjective dimension of social mobility has been overlooked” and I think a significant concern with the paper is its apparent oversight of important preceding research in the domain of subjective social mobility (e.g., Shane, & Heckhausen, 2013; Weiss & Bloechl, 2023). (2) In a similar vein, it is crucial to know how the current work is positioned against or in alignment with existing models, theories, or empirical evidence. A deeper integration with prior work would have not only strengthened the foundation of the study but also situated its contributions more clearly within the broader discourse. In addition, it would be helpful to understand why certain constructs have been selected for validation (e.g., Meritocratic Beliefs Scale; Economic System Justification Scale; Status Anxiety Scale) but not others. (3) Another major shortfall in the paper is the absence of clear definitions for its primary constructs (e.g., social class). This omission might lead to ambiguity and potentially different interpretations of the study's findings. (4) The authors used twenty items chosen by experts but didn't clarify the criteria for expert selection, leaving questions about their qualifications. The process behind item selection remains vague, with no insight into expert deliberations or refinement of initial choices. Additionally, the reasoning for choosing certain items over others is missing. This lack of detail hinders understanding and contextualizing the study's foundations. (5) Finally, the discussion is underdeveloped and only frequently restates the differentiation between upward and downward mobility without significantly deepening the reader's understanding. The assertions about these mobility beliefs' implications, while intriguing, are presented without adequate exploration or substantiation. Unfortunately, the discussion does not robustly integrate or juxtapose its findings within the wider framework of social psychology or societal mobility literature. Shane, J., & Heckhausen, J. (2013). University students' causal conceptions about social mobility: Diverging pathways for believers in personal merit and luck. Journal of Vocational Behavior, 82(1), 10-19. Weiss, D., & Blöchl, M. (2023). Loss of Social Status and Subjective Well-Being Across the Adult Life Span: Feeling Stuck or Moving Up?. Social Psychological and Personality Science, 19485506231162405. Reviewer #3: Your research brings novelty, rigor and a new needed measure. You did a magnificent work with superb conceptual and methodological clarity. This research could be targeted as an example of elegance and simplicity within a complex topic. My congratulations ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Rising and Falling on the Social Ladder: The Bidimensional Social Mobility Beliefs Scale PONE-D-23-24569R1 Dear Dr. Matamoros Lima, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the raised issues in a thorough manner and have made efforts to revise the manuscript accordingly. However, there is still a lack of exploration and discussion on how the new measure of social mobility beliefs relates to demographic aspects such as age, gender, and socioeconomic status (SES). This aspect is crucial to understand the generalizability and applicability of the scale. For instance, previous research, such as the study by Weiss, Greve, & Kunzmann (2022), has indicated that there are significant age differences in social mobility beliefs. Understanding how individuals from different age groups respond to the new measure could provide important insights into the these beliefs. Hence, it seems necessary to consider incorporating analyses that explore and discuss how their new measures associate with demographic factors like age, gender, and SES to strengthen the robustness and comprehensiveness of their research. Weiss, D., Greve, W., & Kunzmann, U. (2022). Responses to Social Inequality Across the Life Span: The Role of Social Status and Upward Mobility Beliefs. International Journal of Behavioral Development, 1-17. Reviewer #3: I did not raise any issue before. However, with this revision and reply to other comments you display even more your competence on this research and on the topic. It was a very, very interesting discussion! Congrats, ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: José Ferreira-Alves, Ph.D. ********** |
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PONE-D-23-24569R1 Rising and Falling on the Social Ladder: The Bidimensional Social Mobility Beliefs Scale Dear Dr. Matamoros-Lima: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Juan Jesús García-Iglesias Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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