Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJanuary 10, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-00794Preliminary validity of the BNSSS-20 in Arabic: Exploratory study on basic needs satisfaction in sport for a sample of Tunisian athletesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mohamed, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 23 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We wish you a meaningful day. Yours Sincerely [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: ID: PONE-D-23-00794 Title: Preliminary validity of the BNSSS-20 in Arabic: Exploratory study on basic needs satisfaction in sport for a sample of Tunisian athletes Thank you for providing a chance to review this manuscript. Comment: Major revision. Detailed information: Abstract Line 39~43, Page 8: There are several issues here: (1) You give very detailed information about the scale here, and this part should be moved to the introduction section; (2) In fact, this section includes two aspects, the background part on the one hand and the aim aspect on the other, and I suggest to separate the two aspects into two subtitles. Line 44~47, Page 8: I think the presentation of your method section is incomplete, did you only do exploratory and confirmatory factor analyses? Besides, I suggest you supplement the sample sizes of EFA and CFA with the gender ratio expressed as a percentage and the age distribution. Introduction Line 64, Page 9: “SDT indicates that an intrinsically motivated individual is always seeking to satisfy three basic and universal needs”, which sub-theory speaks to this? I suggest you state this more precisely. Line 72~75, Page 9: I suggest that the description of the need for autonomy can also be integrated with the thematic physical activity of this study. Line 92~93, Page 10: “This instrument consists of 12 subscales, four items for each of three dimensions”, aren't there some problems here, the scale has three dimensions with four items each, why are there twelve subscales in total? Line 87~101, Page 10: What is the significance of the description in this paragraph? I do not think this section is closely related to this study, and I suggest you shorten the background description of this section. Line 129, Page 12: “Research on basic needs in sports is currently limited in Arabic-speaking countries”, I suggest you expand this section’s literature review and add a description of why Arabic-speaking countries need a scale in terms of sports needs. Methods and equipment Line 139~147, Page 12: Did your study have exact inclusion and exclusion criteria when including the sample population? Line 148~150, Page 12: One thing I’m confused about: what method was used to draw these 37 athletes from the 516 athletes? Wouldn't the gender composition of these 37 athletes, which is quite different from the baseline sample, have an impact on the test-retest reliability values? Line 151~154, Page 13: This section gives too little explanation: you should at least give the number of this scale’s items, what it measures, the range of total scores, and what higher scores represent. Line 187~188, Page 14: “Internal consistency indicates the degree of intercorrelation between items on the BNSSS-20”, I think there is some problems with the order of sentences here. You should give the definition of internal consistency first, and then the indicators of internal consistency. Line 196~206, Page 15: I propose you to account for the cutoff values of these fitted indicators. Results Overall: I suggest you add a table to describe the basic characteristics of the sample population. Overall: How are you grouped? Why are 294 athletes included in the EFA and the others in the CFA? I don’t see the explanation you related. Table 7: This table is missing an explanation of the abbreviations, please add the relevant content. Discussion Line 297~301, Page 16: I suggest that you start the discussion section with a brief summary of the main findings of your study. As it stands, your summary of the results section is not comprehensive. Line 319~329, Page 17~18: This section should be organized more in the results section than in the discussion section. Overall: Your results section speaks to: “Some exceptions occurred between the correlations of item 2 and item 1, and item 2 and item 10, where there was no apparent correlation. Item 2 refers to autonomy-volition”, I think there needs to be more discussion on this section. Overall: I'm glad to see you mentioned the limitations of the study at the moment, and would also like to know more about what the future outlook of this study is? Overall: A general remark that I have is that the discussion lacks more in-depth conclusions. Instead, it is rich in data repeated from the Results sections. It was a pleasure to read this paper. This study is committed to discuss The Basic Needs Satisfaction in Sport Scale (BNSSS)’s factorial structure, internal reliability, construct validity, and sensitivity, which has strong application values in the behavioral traits yield. The care taken in delivering and evaluating the program is very apparent. However, there are still some minor and major issues, please refer to published literature with high quality and revised it. Thank you and my best, Your reviewer Reviewer #2: Strengths: The methodology used in the research is sound, and the statistical analyses used are appropriate to some extent. The references used are also appropriate. Areas for Improvement: - The theoretical background needs more depth. - It is important to review and correct any errors or mistakes in the manuscript - It is unclear on what basis the authors selected the 516 participants out of 530 who participated in the study. - It's also unclear whether these participants represent all athletes or a subset of the population. - The authors did not specify how they identified the sample. - Additionally, the discussion of the tool's reliability through testing should be included under the instrument instead of population and sample section. - It's unclear whether participants who underwent test - retest procedure were excluded from the total sample or not. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-23-00794R1Preliminary validity of the BNSSS-20 in Arabic: Exploratory study on basic needs satisfaction in sport for a sample of Tunisian athletesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mohamed, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 02 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Boshra Ismael Ahmed Arnout Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: ID: PONE-D-23-00794 Title: Preliminary validity of the BNSSS-20 in Arabic: Exploratory study on basic needs satisfaction in sport for a sample of Tunisian athletes Thank you for providing a chance to review this manuscript. Comment: Major revision. Detailed information: Abstract Line 39~43, Page 12: I still don’t think the Abstract needs to describe the scale characteristics in such detail, could you shorten this section to two sentences? Line 44~47, Page 12: Aren’t tests for internal consistency and temporal stability part of your research methodology? Line 48~53, Page 12: This is an illogical statement, why do you account for the EFA results at the very beginning but not the CFA results until the very end? Introduction Line 62~81, Page 3~4: What is the basis for the segmentation here? Line 87~88, Page 4: How did you come to that conclusion? I don't see any references to support it. Overall: For several of the scales you listed: why did you describe several others in detail? Is there a rationale for this? Overall: I still think you need to shorten the introduction, many parts don't need to be described in such detail. Methods Line 148~150, Page 6: How was the four-week retest interval determined? Is it supported by references? Page 6: Are there no inclusion and exclusion criteria? Line 153~154, Page 7: The introduction to the scale is too brief and I suggest you read some quality literature to reorganize the language. Line 163~165, Page 7: What changes have been made to the completed version compared to the original version? Overall: For the sampling method of respondents, I think it needs to be expressed. Line 177~179, Page 8: You used three pieces of statistical software, please describe what investigation each of these three pieces of software were used for? Results Table 1~2: What is the presentation of each of these two tables trying to convey? Please write the corresponding results in the body of the text at the same time. Overall: You show a lot of tables, and I suggest you merge some of the tables that provide less information. Discussion Overall: Is it possible to do some side-by-side comparisons with similar literature based on the results obtained? Overall: I suggest you merge the limitations into the discussion and add a description of strengths and future research directions. After reading your post again, I still think it needs a larger revision. Firstly, some of the suggestions that have been mentioned before are not better addressed that I can see; secondly, many of the key elements that should be expressed are not present within your article, while some of the expressions are cumbersome and it needs to be shortened; lastly, it seems to me that your analysis of the data is still relatively simple and it has room for further exploration. For these reasons, I look forward to your revisions again. Thank you and my best, Your reviewer Reviewer #2: - The authors adequately addressed the comments and suggestions I raised in the previous round of review. - I believe it would be highly beneficial to include the validated Arabic version of the BNSSS-20 scale in the manuscript. This addition will not only contribute to the comprehensiveness of the study but also facilitate the understanding and applicability of your findings for Arabic-speaking populations. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Kashef Zayed ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: ID: PONE-D-23-00794 Title: Preliminary validity of the BNSSS-20 in Arabic: Exploratory study on basic needs satisfaction in sport for a sample of Tunisian athletes Thank you for providing a chance to review this manuscript. Comment: Accept. The author has made careful revisions and responses, and the quality of the article has improved considerably. I think the paper is publishable. Congratulations! Thank you and my best, Your reviewer Reviewer #2: (ω = 0.43) for the "fatalistic" subscale suggests a relatively weak level of internal consistency. This implies that the items within this specific subscale may not be effectively measuring a singular and coherent construct. It may be advisable to either provide a rationale for this finding or consider assessing internal consistency using Cronbach's Alpha as an additional measure. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Kashef Zayed ********** |
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PONE-D-23-00794R2 Preliminary validity of the BNSSS-20 in Arabic: Exploratory study on basic needs satisfaction in sport for a sample of Tunisian athletes Dear Dr. Baaziz: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chung-Ying Lin Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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