Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 6, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-31225Atrial Fibrillation in Middle-Aged Athletes: Impact on Left Atrial, Ventricular and Exercise PerformancePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Goodman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Vecchiarelli et al. is a research paper aiming to characterize left atrial phasic function at rest and during exercise in middle-aged endurance athletes with paroxysmal AF, and to determine its impact on exercise performance. The Authors conclude that exercise testing in athletes with AF unmasks evidence of adverse functional cardiac remodelling that may contribute to impaired exercise performance. The topic is original and interesting. The paper is well written, the data are well collected, the results and conclusions are clear. However, the paper shows some critical points: Main points -The presence of paroxysmal atrial fibrillation in athletes has previously been verified by clinical diagnosis using Holter or loop ECG. However, it is not described whether the presence of asymptomatic AF was tested in the control group, for example with ECG Holter. if it has not been done, it must be indicated in the methods and represents a limitation of the study. -Four athletes with AF were treated with negative inotropic drugs and this may have influenced the value of ventricular stroke volume during exercise. It would be useful to evaluate the data only from athletes without therapy and discuss this aspect, also including it in the limitations of the study. -Differences in VO2 peak between the two study groups (p 0,05) is not discussed in the text. Furthermore, it is not indicated how many patients performed a maximal test and therefore VO2 peak was assessed. -Table 1: EA-AF have a higher BMI, this could be a relevant aspect and deserves a discussion. -Table 3: LA pre-A is significantly lower in EA-AF athletes only in the mild exercise group. Is there a possible explanation for this data? Minor points: -Page 8: Inter-AEMD was defined as (lateral-tricuspid PA), intra-right as (septal PA-tricuspid PA), and intra-left as (lateral PA-septal PA). There's probably a typo, the brackets are not needed. -Abstract: the AEMD acronym is missing. Reviewer #2: Congratulations to the authors for the very interesting idea of the manuscript. The characterization of AF in athletes is an hot topic and deserves numerous studies to be explored. However I have many concerns about this study: The only difference in baseline characteristics between the two groups is represented by the BMI; for athletes it would be more appropriate to describe the percentage of muscle mass and fat mass, because we know that an elevated BMI, in non athlete population, is associated with an enhanced risk of developing AF, but an elevated BMI in athletes could be addressed to a relevant muscle mass and not to a overweight condition due to fat excess. In addittion to a critical mass which is necessary as a substrate to initiate AF, atrial cardiomyopathy is required, and all the CHADVACS score components are a determinant of atrial cardiomyopathy; so you should add the CHADVASC Score for the group of partecipants; Considering the characteristic of athlete population and their high rate of spontaneous AF cardioversion, you should include a reference about this topic, such as: “Mariani MV, Pierucci N, Piro A, Trivigno S, Chimenti C, Galardo G, Miraldi F, Vizza CD. Incidence and Determinants of Spontaneous Cardioversion of Early Onset Symptomatic Atrial Fibrillation. Medicina (Kaunas). 2022 Oct 24;58(11):1513. doi: 10.3390/medicina58111513.” Moreover you should specify if any of them were on antiarrhythmic drugs. All in all I believe this article fits for publication, after minor revisions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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