Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 20, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-33249Differential effects of follicle-stimulating hormone glycoforms on the transcriptome profile of cultured rat granulosa cells as disclosed by RNA-seqPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ulloa-Aguirre, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: There are multiple concerns that the authors need to address. Lines 48-50: It is easier for readers to understand if the FSH glycoforms are numbered. Though it is clear in Methods that four glycoforms were used, with the use of “and” and commas in this sentence it is not obvious how many different glycoforms, that is groups of treatment, are used in this study. Lines 129-130: FSH is glycosylated at 2 Ns in alpha and beta chains each. Why is FSH-beta is identified as tetra- and tri-glycosylated? Shouldn’t it be mono- and di-glycosylated FSH-beta? Line 166: diverssignaling should be changed to “diverse signaling”. Line 174: It should be FSH18/21 Line 199-209: How many rats were used? How many granulosa cells were obtained from each rat? Were granulosa cells from all rats pooled before seeding to plates? Granulosa cells were seeded at 1M per well and cultured for 48h before FSH treatment. Did this culture increase the cell number? Line 213: What is triplicate incubation? Was each FSH prep for each time-point added to three wells? Was each biological replicate run on different day? How were technical and biological replications considered? Line 227-228: If only samples with >8 RIN were used, how many samples per treatment per time-point reached this quality threshold? With only 3 replicates, how many ended up being sequenced for each group? How was statistical analysis considered if the number was too low? Line 231: 10-15 million reads doesn’t appear to be deep. What is the rationale for this depth? Line 237: how did authors test if the biological processes were indeed active? Mere enrichment of a process among DEGs doesn’t mean active. Lines 320-350: These two sections are confusing and not well justified. Why did authors run these comparisons? What physiological relevance do these comparisons address? While the first section title suggests “contrast between 6 and 12h”, the text seems to describe contrasts among FSH glycoforms at each time-point! The second section title suggests contrasts among each FSH glycoforms, but the text seems to describe how one glycoform is different from others. Lines 357-358: It is not recommended to separate up and downregulated genes to discover enriched BPs and pathways as some of the genes involved in a particular pathway may be upregulated while other of that pathway may be down regulated (as in Lines 514-515). Lines 496-556 : Each of the FSH glycoform appears to have regulated dramatically different set of biological processes. FSH18/21 induced steroid biosynthetic process; FSH24 did not but response to cAMP was both up and down-regulated; eqFSH stimulated processes like ovulation as well as ECM organization that is mostly associated with ovulation; recFSH induced angiogenesis and ECM remodeling processes. Of these, only FSH18/21 appears to have regulated biologically relevant process for follicular granulosa cells. Therefore, it is important for authors to first check which glycoform regulates the usual suspects of granulosa cell genes (Cyp19, Lhcgr, Ccnd2) first before starting to compare different glycoforms. Authors should first prove that all FSH treatment stimulated Cyp19a1 and Lhcgr in granulosa cells, to ensure that results obtained using the cell culture model of this study are relevant to in vivo biology. Reviewer #2: In this study the authors have addressed an important question has to how variations in glycosylation of glycoprotein hormones may impart distinct biological features which is largely ignored on studies on signaling effects of hormones on the target tissues. The paper is potential useful because glycosylation variants of hormone is produced in pituitary and which in turn can vary with age leading to possible differential effects. The approach they have used to get to this problem is by a doing global RNA seq analysis on rat granulosa cells after treating them with four different glycoforms of FSH. Furthermore, they relate the differentially expressed genes to intracellular signaling by carrying extensive pathway analysis. The study is very strong in RNA seq analysis and validation of the key genes that are differentially expressed and at times rather heavy technically. The methodology in the paper is well detailed for replication of the study. The results are supported by figures that are clear although with rather wordy legends. The paper is discussed well and futher supported by relevant references. However, I must say that manuscript is not organized well because the figure legends and tables that describe are embedded within text which makes it hard for the reader. Overall the paper is a significant contribution to our understanding of glycoprotein variation and their physiological effects. I have the following comments 1) The author’s observer a rather robust change in the number of the differentially expressed genes between 6hrs and 12hrs. What is the logic in choosing the 6 and 12hrs time period? How is the effect of non-synchronized target cells ruled as cause of this difference? 2) It not clear in the discussion as to what is cause of these changed glycoforms with age? 3) Do the different glycoform have similar affinity to the cognate receptor? Affinity measurements data would have clarified it. ********** 6. 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Differential effects of follicle-stimulating hormone glycoforms on the transcriptome profile of cultured rat granulosa cells as disclosed by RNA-seq PONE-D-23-33249R1 Dear Dr. Alfredo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All my comments have been adequately addressed. The revised manuscript reads well. The conclusions are sound based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: In This work, Alfredo and colleagues have presented the data to provide information regarding the Importance of glycosylation/ glycoforms of the glycoprotein harmones through Next generation RNA sequencing analysis. The study was well designed and executed. The most important finding of the study include 1. Analysis of the effect of FSH glycoforms in all three possible ways like variations in gene expression, variations in the biological processes and the pathways affected. As these are the 3 most important parameters to delineate any pathways or ligand-receptor interactions of a biological molecules. Authors are succeeded in these by the design of the experiment. 2. This study provides a useful information for further investigation of the therapeutic molecules effecting the signaling pathways in various diseases. 3. Authors are provided the sufficient scientific explanation for the methodology and the results obtained. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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