Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 17, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-32426Studying the context of psychoses to improve outcomes in Ethiopia (SCOPE): protocol paperPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hanlon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it requires minor revision in order to be suitable for publication. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 25 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: First, I would like to congratulate the research team, the protocol is well written and detailed for possible replication but I would like to leave some comments: 1. In Background’s protocol, it would be important to address the multifactorial etiology of schizophrenia or psychoses, genetic and socio-environmental, to not leave the impression that psychoses or schizophrenia has only socio-environmental etiology. 2. In lines 249 and 251, bibliographies that reinforce or justify the statistical numbers presented in the protocol must be included. 3. In line 264 of the protocol, which talks about adapting situation analysis tools used in the PRIME study, in the ethical considerations is not mentioned that the request for permission to use these tools was done. 4. In line 334 about the eligibility criteria used in INTREPID, it is not clear in the protocol whether or not permission was requested, to use data from this study, or whether they are for general use. 5. In line 267, about ethnographic studies, it is not specified how many families will participate in this qualitative study and what the sampling process will be. I think it would be important to be included in the main document. It should also be specified how many researchers will be involved in this ethnographic study and what contingency measures will be taken in the event of a psychotic crisis in the patient in the family under study. 6. In line 448, in the table 2, it would be better to clarify why the patient will have to test for anemia, malaria and tuberculosis. 7. In relation to homeless people who are identified as having psychosis, it must be clear in the protocol how these patients will be monitored after the end of the study. 8. In the downloaded protocol, the figures do not appear, only the titles. 9. It is not clear how the results of the study will be made available. Reviewer #2: Reviewer’s comments for Studying the context of psychoses to improve outcomes in Ethiopia (SCOPE): protocol paper for PLOS ONE This programme of work is an important addition to several others being carried out in the Global South aimed at understanding the nature of severe mental disorders and meeting the needs of those affected by these conditions within the cultural and social context of where they reside. It builds on the rich tradition of psychosis research in Ethiopia and extends the ongoing efforts in that country to expand services for persons living with psychosis. It has the potential of providing a model on which other countries across the developing world can pattern their aspirations of increasing access to nuanced mental health services to numerous individuals affected by psychosis and their families in the different settings. Below are some areas in the manuscript requiring clarification: 1. Eligibility criteria for SCOPE epidemiological study: the authors wish to reduce the lower limit of eligibility age to 15 years. It is important that the investigators provide some reason/ explanation for this decision to extend the lower age limit of their sample to 15 years and comment on the ethical implications of this decision, and how they wish to address it, in the manuscript. 2. For the purpose of SCOPE, how do the investigators define “homelessness”? The concept of homelessness can mean different things depending on whether it is being discussed in within Western or African cultural contexts, and may also have urban-rural differences in meaning. It is important to include this definition in the manuscript, even if briefly. 3. Page 18, line 420. I suspect you mean “test-retest”, not “test-restest”. 4. Page 21, line 460-462: “Data collection will be paper based for some aspects of the semi-structured measures, but mostly electronic (using smartphones or tablets) for structured interviews and stored securely on the university server.” Which university are the authors referring to? 5. Ethical considerations (page 23). While the authors have provided extensive information on the process of obtaining consent on the field, it does happen from time to time that research staff on the field are unsure whether some potential respondents have capacity to consent or not. Could the authors comment on how this will be resolved if and when it occurs? Will senior investigators be contacted to resolve uncertainties in the capacity of potential respondents to give consent? Will another mental health practitioner unconnected with the study be employed to determine capacity to consent if the authors wish to be mindful of conflict of interest? 6. Formative qualitative study: Regarding the ethnography component of the study, entire households will be observed by the investigators. How do the authors wish to approach consent? Will this be from the head of the household or each member of the household? What happens some members of the household do not give consent for ethnographic study, when the head of the household has? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Studying the context of psychoses to improve outcomes in Ethiopia (SCOPE): protocol paper PONE-D-23-32426R1 Dear Dr. Hanlon, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In my opinion, the new version is ready to be published. I think the study will greatly help people who suffer from psychosis, who are often neglected. Reviewer #2: Dear Editor, I have reviewed the response of the authors and their revision of the manuscript and found them to be satisfactory. I recommend accepting the manuscript for publication. Regards. Olatunde O Ayinde. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Rogério Mulumba Reviewer #2: Yes: Olatunde O Ayinde **********
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