Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-09453Foot placement control can be trained: Older adults learn to walk more stable, when ankle moments are constrainedPLOS ONE Dear Dr. van Leeuwen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Two reviewers viewed this work favorably and have provided comments and suggestions on the manuscript. Please be sure to provide point-by-point responses to all reviewer comments along with your revised manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 09 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study determines if foot placement control – a major gait strategy – can be trained in older adults. The training constrains the medio-lateral ML ankle moment, such that any corrections are accomplished by foot placement, rather than ML ankle moment adjustments after the foot is in stance phase. ML ankle moment is constrained by special shoes with a very narrow base under the shoe. Training occurred over three weeks, with a baseline/control week preceding training, and a post-training retention. I find this approach to training foot placement is innovative and creative. The manuscript is clear, and the study is relevant to both basic scientists and clinicians. The statistics are appropriate. Especially, the figures are very clear with shaded areas, etc. to delineate different aspects of the timeline. I have a few comments that I would like to see addressed. 1. Please clarify the conceptual differences between foot placement control and foot placement error. It appears logical to expect that if foot placement control is impaired, then foot placement error will increase, and vice versa. In the current results, there was no change in foot placement control, but foot placement error decreased. While the explanation on lines 456+ did help somewhat, I was left feeling dissatisfied with the explanation. The explanation was based on the model, but a physiological rationale was not provided. The explanation indicates that the lower magnitude of foot placement control may result from less error (i.e., less variance) in foot placement (lines 460-462). This argument seems problematic if it implies that large errors will result in large amount of control. Further clarification would be helpful. Similarly, the observation that stability changes did not persist at retention, but foot placement error did persist appears inconsistent and also left me feeling dissatisfied. 2. Please address the role of ML moments of the body besides the ankles. While the ankle ML moments were constrained, other ML moments such as trunk lateral flexors and the hips were not constrained. It seems they could take on (some of) the role of the ankle ML moments. 3. While the result was statistically significant, please address the functional consequence of a 0.5 mm change in foot placement error. For example, can the authors estimate the corrective moment/torque needed to correct for a 0.5 mm foot placement error? 4. Consider adding medio-lateral to the title and abstract for clarity (i.e., ML ankle moments) 5. Some of the observed changes may result from requiring the participants to walk at the their preferred treadmill speed (determined with flat shoes) for all conditions. I expect their preferred gait speed on the training shoes would be slower if they had the option. 6. The total duration of training was 90 minutes, which seems short relative to other training studies. Please comment, especially related to interpretations about strength enhancement (lines 469-470). 7. Line 102 – correct the spelling of ‘anonymously’ 8. Text on lines 429+ dicusses the differences in step width and stride time, but they were not significant. This text should be removed or it should be explicitly stated that these are trends when they are first discussed. It’s pointed out later, but currently the text reads as if the values are significantly different. Reviewer #2: This paper makes a valuable contribution to research that tries to unravel (impaired) mediolateral balance control during walking. Although prior research from this group uses similar paradigms I want to emphasize the their study as a very nice and original example of experimental design. The study would have benefited from a control group, mainly to account for the effects of familiarization to treadmill walking. Nevertheless, this should not hold this work from being published in its current form (set apart some comments the authors can find below), as there are many insights to be gained form the manuscript as it is. The manuscript is very well structured. 1) Explain foot placement error and control by providing some examples. An important comment that I would like to see addressed is on the explanation of foot placement error and foot placement control. These are the two most important concepts of the study and are not easy to comprehend. I like them as model of quantifying foot placement control. However, it took some time to understand exactly what these mean. I describe three scenarios below to check my understanding with the authors. If these, or a variation of these, make sense, these could be added somewhere for clarification of this model? The wording can be improved and shortened probably. • If FP varies a lot but COM motion is always the same, foot placement control is small and the foot placement error is large. Subjects are changing foot placement for no reason? • If FP variance is large and can be explained by COM motion for 90%, subjects are adequately modulating foot placement to the needs of maintaining stability as COM is variable. Foot placement error is still large as 10% of the large original variance is high and might give balance problems or require an additional mechanism to control for balance. • If FP variance is small and can be explained by COM motion for 90%, subjects are adequately adapting foot placement to the needs of maintaining stability as COM is variable. Foot placement error is small as 10% of original variance is low and should not give balance problems. I understand that these concepts might be explained in prior work of the authors. But I think the paper should stand on its own. 2) Motivate the use of foot placement error instead of foot placement variability When reading the results, I sometimes doubt whether it would be better to just look at foot placement variance instead of foot placement error. Can the authors defend their choice of choosing the placement error as they define it? 3) Can you bring the results together in one overview table/figure. I think the existing figures can stay as they are. But, since so many results are to be interpreted it would be nice to have an overview table that summarizes what is changing and not changing across week/session. The reader can during reading the discussion than easily refer to this table. Some other minor comments Figures: They are very low resolution in the manuscript we received. I assume this will be fixed. L 102: Anonumously -- > anonymously L442-446: Or gait stability as calculated here is a more subtle measure that can change for longer due to familiarization compared to foot placement control. L528: Although the discussion explains all details well it seems that the conclusion might overemphasize the foot placement errors and gait stability. Maybe change to: … decreased foot placement errors and increased gait stability during normal walking may be explained by familiarization to treadmill walking and training with the LesSchuh. The extent to which they contribute requires a control study. Limitation: Can you mention the lack of a control group as a limitation that could have alleviated the confounding effects of familiarization? Future work: The authors mention collecting full kinematics for these studies. This would be great for sure (control for and observe inertial compensation strategies). It is worth mentioning that this can be enabled by markerless mocap as I assume the choice to not collect full kinematics in this study was made because of time constraints. Just a question out of interest: Is there a high risk of spraining your ankle with the LesSchuh? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Mediolateral foot placement control can be trained: Older adults learn to walk more stable, when ankle moments are constrained PONE-D-23-09453R1 Dear Dr. van Leeuwen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ryan T. Roemmich Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all of my previous concerns. As I indicated in the first review, I find approach to training foot placement is innovative and creative. The manuscript is clear, and the study is relevant to both basic scientists and clinicians. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Tom Van Wouwe ********** |
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PONE-D-23-09453R1 Mediolateral foot placement control can be trained: Older adults learn to walk more stable, when ankle moments are constrained Dear Dr. van Leeuwen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ryan T. Roemmich Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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