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Original SubmissionJuly 13, 2023
Decision Letter - Paul Awoyera, Editor

PONE-D-23-21940Crack Control Optimization of Basement Concrete Structures Based on the Mask-RCNN and Temperature Effect AnalysisPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Partly

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

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5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: 1. “Page 1”

“However, due to the particularity of the basement concrete structure, crack control still faces some challenges[10].”

It is suggested to explain what is the particularity of the basement concrete structure.

2. “Page 2”

“2 Literature Review”

It only mentions the research status of crack identification in this paper, lacking the research status of greenhouse effect analysis methods. It is suggested to replenish accordingly.

3. “Page 3”

“Compared with traditional image processing methods, the Mask-RCNN algorithm has higher accuracy and stability, which can effectively solve the challenges in crack identification and fill the research gap.”

There are no comparisons in the text with the results of traditional method studies, so please check it or make additions.

4. “Page 3”

“The mask-RCNN model consists of three main components: Backbone Network, Region Proposal Network (RPN), and Mask Branch. The structure composition is displayed in Figure 1:”

It is recommended that the backbone, Regional Proposed Network (RPN) and masked branches be labelled on Figure 1.

5. “Page 3”

“Figure 1 signifies that Backbone Network usually uses pre-trained CNNs, such as ResNet or VGGNet, to extract image features.”

It is recommended to state whether ResNet or VGGNet was used in this study.

6. “Page 3”

“The following steps are used for preprocessing:”

It is recommended to give a more specific treatment process and provide a comparison chart of the sample before and after treatment.

7. “Page 6”

“Figure 6”

The description of Figure 6 in this study is incomplete, and it is suggested that it be supplemented. It can’t be seen in Figure 6 that with the increase of temperature in different experiments, the maximum stress of the structure presents a decreasing trend, please check it.

8. “Page 7”

“Figure 9”

It is suggested that a graphical note be given in Figure 9 to indicate which experiment 1 to 5 are respectively.

9. “Page 7”

“Figure 10”

The description of Figure 10(a) is missing from this paper, please add it.

10. “Page 7”

“References”

Although more than 30 literatures are reviewed in this paper, most of them are from the past three years. There is a lack of review of earlier literatures, and literature research needs to be improved.

Finally, there are some grammatical errors and in some cases English is not used properly. The authors should pay attention to correct these mistakes throughout the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: No

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Revision 1

Reviewer #1: 1. “Page 1”

“However, due to the particularity of the basement concrete structure, crack control still faces some challenges[10].”

It is suggested to explain what is the particularity of the basement concrete structure.

Reply: Thank you for your valuable feedback from the reviewers. There are indeed some challenges regarding the specificity of the concrete structure in the basement, and we strongly agree with this. Hence, I added an explanation in the introduction about the particularity of the concrete structure in the basement. Concrete structures in basements often face several special factors, such as the particularity of the underground environment, load and constraint conditions, and temperature effects.

2. “Page 2”

“2 Literature Review”

It only mentions the research status of crack identification in this paper, lacking the research status of greenhouse effect analysis methods. It is suggested to replenish accordingly.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's suggestion. We attach great importance to your feedback. In the article, We should supplement and clarify the research status of greenhouse effect analysis methods. In the revised manuscript, we have expanded the literature review section to include the latest research progress related to greenhouse effect analysis methods (in the past five years). This will help readers better understand the positioning and value of our research in the field of greenhouse effect analysis methods.

3. “Page 3”

“Compared with traditional image processing methods, the Mask-RCNN algorithm has higher accuracy and stability, which can effectively solve the challenges in crack identification and fill the research gap.”

There are no comparisons in the text with the results of traditional method studies, so please check it or make additions.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's suggestion. Your viewpoint is very valuable; indeed, there is no comparison with the research results of traditional methods in the article. We have added a comparison of experimental results with traditional methods in the revised manuscript (Figure 10) to support the superiority of our proposed Mask RCNN algorithm. By comparing the optimization performance with traditional image processing methods, including crack density, average crack length, average crack width, maximum stress concentration, and maximum deformation, it helps to more comprehensively demonstrate the advantages of the Mask RCNN algorithm in crack recognition.

4. “Page 3”

“The mask-RCNN model consists of three main components: Backbone Network, Region Proposal Network (RPN), and Mask Branch. The structure composition is displayed in Figure 1:”

It is recommended that the backbone, Regional Proposed Network (RPN) and masked branches be labelled on Figure 1.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's suggestion. We have added labels in Figure 1 of the article to clearly display the three main components of the Mask RCNN model: Backbone Network, Region Proposal Network (RPN), and Mask Branch, to help readers better understand the structural composition of the Mask-RCNN model. This can improve the readability and comprehension of the article.

5. “Page 3”

“Figure 1 signifies that Backbone Network usually uses pre-trained CNNs, such as ResNet or VGGNet, to extract image features.”

It is recommended to state whether ResNet or VGGNet was used in this study.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's suggestion. We have modified this sentence. Figure 1 shows that the backbone network uses pre-trained convolutional neural networks, where VGGNet is used to extract image features.

6. “Page 3”

“The following steps are used for preprocessing:”

It is recommended to give a more specific treatment process and provide a comparison chart of the sample before and after treatment.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's suggestion. In the revised draft, we provided more detailed preprocessing steps, including a specific description of the processing process, and added a comparison chart of the samples before and after processing (Figure 2) to more clearly demonstrate the effectiveness of the processing. These improvements help readers better understand our preprocessing process and the impact of processing on the samples. Thank you again for your suggestion.

7. “Page 6”

“Figure 6”

The description of Figure 6 in this study is incomplete, and it is suggested that it be supplemented. It can’t be seen in Figure 6 that with the increase of temperature in different experiments, the maximum stress of the structure presents a decreasing trend, please check it.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's suggestion. We do realize that the description of Figure 6 (now Figure 7) is incomplete, so we have revised the form of Figure 6 in the revised draft to provide more detailed trend explanations and supplementary explanations to ensure that readers can better understand the content of the figure. Regarding the relationship between temperature and maximum stress, we have provided more context and explanation to demonstrate that in different experiments, the maximum stress of the structure does indeed show a decreasing trend with increasing temperature. This key observation has been better explained and presented in the revised draft.

8. “Page 7”

“Figure 9”

It is suggested that a graphical note be given in Figure 9 to indicate which experiment 1 to 5 are respectively.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's suggestion. I have modified the format of Figure 9 (now Figure 11) and added a legend to indicate Experiment 1 to Experiment 5. This legend will include identification and corresponding color coding for each experiment to ensure the readability and comprehensibility of the diagram.

9. “Page 7”

“Figure 10”

The description of Figure 10(a) is missing from this paper, please add it.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's correction. We have added a detailed description of Figure 10 (a) (now Figure 12) in the revised draft to ensure a clear explanation and interpretation of the figure. This will include data, trends, and information related to key findings in the study in the chart.

10. “Page 7”

“References”

Although more than 30 literatures are reviewed in this paper, most of them are from the past three years. There is a lack of review of earlier literatures, and literature research needs to be improved.

Reply: Thank you for the guidance of the reviewer. We are very grateful for your valuable feedback. We fully agree with your viewpoint on the shortcomings of the literature review. In the revised manuscript, we delved into and integrated earlier literature in the literature review section to provide a more comprehensive historical background and tracking of research development. This will help readers better understand the role and value of this study and our contributions to related fields.

Finally, there are some grammatical errors and in some cases English is not used properly. The authors should pay attention to correct these mistakes throughout the manuscript.

Reply: Thank you for the reviewer's review and correction. We recognize that there are some grammar errors and inappropriate English expressions in the article. In the revised manuscript, we have carefully reviewed each section of the article, paying special attention to grammar, spelling, and expression issues, and consulted professional language editors to improve the readability and professionalism of the article, striving to ensure that it meets the standards.

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Decision Letter - Paul Awoyera, Editor

Crack Control Optimization of Basement Concrete Structures Using the Mask-RCNN and Temperature Effect Analysis

PONE-D-23-21940R1

Dear Dr. Fu,

We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.

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Paul Awoyera

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PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: The authors have adequately addressed the comments. Manuscript improved quality. Now, it is acceptable.

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Reviewer #1: No

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Paul Awoyera, Editor

PONE-D-23-21940R1

Crack Control Optimization of Basement Concrete Structures Using the Mask-RCNN and Temperature Effect Analysis

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