Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 14, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-29546Development of peptides for targeting cell ablation agents concurrently to the Sertoli and Leydig cell populations of the testes: an approach to non-surgical sterilizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Aitken, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The study is quite interesting, especially in the methods to target specific types of cells in the testis. There are many concerns, especially the rationale as to how this methodology is superior to the already existing ones. Further, detailed methodology should be provided for better understanding of the experimental procedures. Bibliography should be up to date with all details. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 01 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Development of peptides for targeting cell insertion agents coincidentally to the Sertoli and Leydig cell populations of the tests: an approach to non-surgical sterilization, this is a valuable study. The design of this article is reasonable. There are only some minor issues, and the language needs further modification. The pictures in the text need to be replaced, especially Figure 5a. Figure 3a needs to be replaced. Reviewer #2: The manuscript „Development of peptides for targeting cell ablation agents concurrently to the Sertoli and Leydig cell populations of the testes: an approach to non-surgical sterilization” describes pre-experiments for the development of a new non-surgical sterilization method for dogs and cats. Stray animals are a growing problem in many countries and existing hormonal sterilizations methods as well as conventional surgery are not always available/feasible in all circumstances. The authors created and used recombinant proteins targeting the LH receptor present on Leydig cells (either cell culture or in vivo in mice) to administer Auristatin, a anti-cancer drug, to Leydig cells. By disturbing/disrupting Leydig cell function, germ cell apoptosis was detected. It was made clear, that LH2Auristatin alone had less effect than a combinantion of LH2Auristatin/FSH2Menadione. The manuscript is well-written and experiments performed to develop LH2Auristatin are sound. Nevertheless, there is a main issue in my opinion: The experiments on FSH2Menadione rely on ref. 24, which is described as “to be submitted, 2021” in the reference list. I tried to find the paper on Pubmed (in case the reference software was making a mistake) but didn’t find it. So, at least half of the manuscript is based on a not publically available manuscript which is not suitable. Please comment/revise this. Moreover, I would like the authors to comment on the advantages of their approach over existing hormonal contraceptives such as GnRH implants; the authors discuss that this method requires an injection and is not “long-lasting”. But their LH2Auristatin/FSH2Menadione approach also requires two injections (both peptides 16 hours apart) and there a no data on long-time effects. Also, the peptides are administerd by IP injection – what would be the route of administration in dogs and cats? Additionally, the data shown on germ cell apoptosis are not sufficient, the pictures are too small to see which germ cells undergo apoptosis. As there ARE sperm produced and pups generated, the methods doesn’t seem efficient enough. Embryos are generated, and embryonic resorption happens. Are the treated sires completely sterile or are also pups born? If so, your methods stands behind GnRH analoga. There are also other (partly minor) issues that have to be addressed. Detailed comments can be taken from the attached PDF. Here are some points to take care about: 1) References: Ref. 4 seems to be incorrect. Please check and revise. As mentioned above, Ref. 24 cites a not publically available manuscript that has (or has not?) been submitted but not published. Please also check the reference list for formatting, sometimes brackets are there but not closed. Two references in the text are cited with “name, YOP” (Sipilä et al., 2004 and Hendrickson, 2005). For sperm analysis, please cite the recent WHO manual. 2) qPCR: Please provide more information on a) primers, b) qPCR procedure, and c) evaluation of data. Follow MIQUE guidelines (Bustin et al. 2009) for reference. Missing information is e.g. Ref Seq, amplicon length, annealing temperature, melt curve data, primer efficiency etc. 3) IHC, page 10: Please add more information on antibody dilution, host species etc. How thick were the sections used for IHC? 4) Figures: Please add reference “Fig. 4A” to line 544. Did I miss reference or figures for other organs’ weights (ines 544ff)? Fig. 4B is too small to see apoptotic germ cells; it would be interesting to know, WHICH germ cells are affected. Is it only spermatogonia or also developed germ cells? Also S5 Fig. B is very small; stained Sertoli cells can be imagined, but not really seen. Did the authors also check for Leydig cell numbers, e.g. using CYP11A1 as marker? You cite S7 Fig. before S6 Fig., please revise. 5) Leydig cell function: The authors state, that disturbed Leydig cell function is responsible for germ cell disruption without adverse effects; have they checked for systemic testosterone levels and their impact on muscle mass etc? 6) ROS/DNA damage: The authors conclude that embryonic loss is due to DNA damage in sperm; I don't understand and agree with this conclusion. Embryonic loss means that there were sperm present to fertilize the egg. A later disruption of embryonic development not neccessarily is connected to germ cell disruption; have the authors checked the developing embryos for any cellular disorganization/malformations? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Development of peptides for targeting cell ablation agents concurrently to the Sertoli and Leydig cell populations of the testes: an approach to non-surgical sterilization PONE-D-23-29546R1 Dear Dr. Aitken, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Suresh Yenugu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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