Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-13976Sex differences in risk factors for incident peripheral artery disease hospitalization or death: cohort study of UK Biobank participantsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 24 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. Additional Editor Comments: 1- Alcohol consumption was shown in previous articles to be associated with PAD. It should be investigated in this article as well. 2- Recent UK Biobank reports showed higher risk of mortality and CVD among those with very high HDL-C (>80 mg/dL); thus, categorizing HDL-C should be considered. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In a large cohort study of 500,207 UK Biobank participants without prior hospitalization of peripheral artery disease (PAD) at baseline, the authors reported that smoking and a history of stroke or MI were more strongly associated with a higher risk of PAD in women than men. HDL-C was more strongly associated with a lower risk of PAD in women than men. The strengths of this study include its large sample size, and the manuscript is generally well written and has great scientific merit. Major Comments 1. In abstract lines 41-45, please state the comparator. For example, the smokers were compared to never smokers, not to non-current smokers. 2. In lines 115-116, the authors did the complete case analyses. How many were excluded because of missing covariates? 3. How did the authors deal with competing risk events such as other CVD or death in the survival analysis? This reviewer would recommend the additional analyses to account for the competing events. 4. Ethical approval and data availability of this study should be stated in the methods section. Reviewer #2: This prospective cohort study, which included 500,207 UK Biobank participants, aimed to investigate the association between risk factors and the risk of peripheral artery disease, specifically focusing on the potential sex differences. The large number of participants is a significant strength, ensuring a robust and reliable conclusion. The data analysis conducted in this study is comprehensive, providing detailed insights and thorough examination of the collected information. Major comments: 1. In the Introduction section, on line 53, the authors stated that "It is uncertain whether women or men exhibit a greater risk of PAD [1-3]." However, reference 1 has reported sex differences in PAD. According to the pooled odds ratio of 29 studies, the risk for peripheral artery disease is 0.74 (0.61–0.91) in males compared to females (Table 3, Risk factor 2: male sex). Additionally, previous studies have reported differences in the incidence of peripheral artery disease between sexes. The sex differences are not novel to clinicians either. So, I think that the statement "It is uncertain" is not appropriate. Hicks CW, Ding N, Kwak L, Ballew SH, Kalbaugh CA, Folsom AR, Heiss G, Coresh J, Black JH 3rd, Selvin E, Matsushita K. Risk of peripheral artery disease according to race and sex: The Atherosclerosis Risk in Communities (ARIC) study. Atherosclerosis. 2021 May;324:52-57. doi: 10.1016/j.atherosclerosis.2021.03.031. Kalbaugh CA, Kucharska-Newton A, Wruck L, Lund JL, Selvin E, Matsushita K, Bengtson LGS, Heiss G, Loehr L. Peripheral Artery Disease Prevalence and Incidence Estimated From Both Outpatient and Inpatient Settings Among Medicare Fee-for-Service Beneficiaries in the Atherosclerosis Risk in Communities (ARIC) Study. J Am Heart Assoc. 2017 May 3;6(5):e003796. doi: 10.1161/JAHA.116.003796. 2. The inconsistent results reported in previous studies and this study in the prevalence and incidence of peripheral artery disease between sexes are a matter of concern. The authors discussed this issue in the second paragraph of the Discussion section. However, the discussion is vague and lacks specific hypotheses about the cause of this discrepancy. 3. In the Discussion section, on lines 249-250, the authors stated that "However, a higher excess risk of PAD in women was not observed in any hypertension stages in our study. ". I don't quite understand this sentence, because I found that the hazard ratio (95% CI) is 1.36 (1.18-1.56) for stage 2 hypertension versus normal blood pressure in female. Besides, in the same paragraph, the authors discussed the differences in the dose-response relationship between sexes, and stated that "This reflects the controversy on whether blood pressure lowering target is “the lower, the better”. I don't quite understand why it reflects this controversy. The ideal blood pressure levels should be considered based on the specific patient's situation. For instance, in the older population or in patients with kidney disease or other serious underlying conditions, it is not necessarily true that “the lower, the better”. I do not feel that the authors' analysis reflects these backgrounds of patients. Minor comments: 1. (mean (SD)) is missing for “Pack-years among current smokers” and “Year since quitting among former smokers” in Table 1. 2. I feel that the layout of the Tables is a little messy, and it is not easy to understand its content. For example, I can't tell which is the mean value (SD) and which is N (%). Some expressions use too many brackets, such as "Systolic blood pressure (mmHg) (mean (SD))". Authors may consider incorporating some formatting or using bold subheadings to make it easier to read. For instance, "American Heart Association Hypertension Categories." Alternatively, these issues could be addressed by the publishing team? It is advisable to include more descriptive information in the supplemental tables. For instance, adding a description that clarifies the type of sensitivity analysis conducted in S5 Table and S6 Table. 3. Could the authors consider showing a forest plot for the ratios of hazard ratio for women versus men in Fig 1? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Sex differences in risk factors for incident peripheral artery disease hospitalisation or death: cohort study of UK Biobank participants PONE-D-23-13976R1 Dear Dr. Ying Xu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ahmed Arafa Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-13976R1 Sex differences in risk factors for incident peripheral artery disease hospitalisation or death: cohort study of UK Biobank participants Dear Dr. Xu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ahmed Arafa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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