Peer Review History
Original SubmissionNovember 29, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-32314The use of artificial intelligence tools in cancer detection compared to the traditional diagnostic imaging methods: an overviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. SILVA, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 03 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you wish to make changes to your Data Availability statement, please describe these changes in your cover letter and we will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide. Additional Editor Comments: This paper reviews the application of different artificial intelligence (AI) technologies in cancer detection and then they compared them to the traditional diagnostic imaging methods. I think this is a very important and very big domain to be covered. According to comments from three reviews as well as the review by myself, a major revision for this manuscript is required. Please carefully addressed the concerns proposed by the reviewers, and prepare a point-to-point response as well. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper reviews the application of different artificial intelligence (AI) technologies in cancer detection and then they compared them to the traditional diagnostic imaging methods. I think this is a very important and very big domain to be covered. However, I feel the paper has several serious issues which makes it difficult to follow it. So, I strongly suggest addressing the following points carefully: 1. How is this review paper different from other recently published articles (2021 and 2022)? 2. What do you mean by the traditional diagnostic imaging methods? Where did you provide the comparison? 3. There are lots of missed studies in cancer detection/prediction by ML/DL methods such as: >>> A new nested ensemble technique for automated diagnosis of breast cancer >>> A performance based study on deep learning algorithms in the effective prediction of breast cancer >>> Pathologist-level interpretable whole-slide cancer diagnosis with deep learning >>> High-accuracy prostate cancer pathology using deep learning >>> CWV-BANN-SVM ensemble learning classifier for an accurate diagnosis of breast cancer >>> Uncertainty quantification in skin cancer classification using three-way decision-based Bayesian deep learning >>> MCUa: Multi-level context and uncertainty aware dynamic deep ensemble for breast cancer histology image classification >>> Dermatologist-level classification of skin cancer with deep neural networks >>> Survey on machine learning and deep learning applications in breast cancer diagnosis >>> The application of deep learning in cancer prognosis prediction >>> Personalized deep learning of individual immunopeptidomes to identify neoantigens for cancer vaccines >>> A new era: artificial intelligence and machine learning in prostate cancer >>> An enhanced deep learning approach for brain cancer MRI images classification using residual networks Could the authors explain why these studies are not reviewed? 4. Please discuss the most important existing cancer databases. 5. As this paper aims to highlight the impact of Machine Learning (ML) and Deep Learning (DL) methods in cancer detection, it is highly recommended that the authors provide more results and discussions on the proposed ML/DL methods (theoretical) and not just providing their names in general. 6. Discussion: Which Machine Learning (ML) and Deep Learning (DL) methods are best in detecting cancers? 7. Please list and discuss the major limitations in the domain and literature. 8. The authors are highly encouraged to provide a new section including main research gaps and future ML/DL research directions. 9. The authors could discuss several important topics in the application of ML/DL methods in cancer detection. This means that discussions on uncertainty quantification and explainability (Explainable Artificial Intelligence (XAI)) of such methods should be considered. For more information the authors can use the following fully related studies: >>> A review of uncertainty quantification in deep learning: Techniques, applications and challenges >>> The need for quantification of uncertainty in artificial intelligence for clinical data analysis: increasing the level of trust in the decision-making process >>> Quantifying uncertainty in machine learning classifiers for medical imaging >>> XAI—Explainable artificial intelligence >>> Second opinion needed: communicating uncertainty in medical machine learning >>> Explainable Artificial Intelligence (XAI): Concepts, taxonomies, opportunities and challenges toward responsible AI >>> Hercules: Deep Hierarchical Attentive Multilevel Fusion Model With Uncertainty Quantification for Medical Image Classification >>> Explanation in artificial intelligence: Insights from the social sciences >>> Explainable AI: Beware of inmates running the asylum or: How I learnt to stop worrying and love the social and behavioural sciences Reviewer #2: The authors present their comprehensive overview of systematic reviews of applications of AI tools as applied to medical imaging of diagnosing malignant tumors in clinic, which is a very important topic. I have a few comments for the authors: 1. In this review, the three terms, AI, radiomics, and CAD were used interchangeably somehow. I would suggest the author to explain the definitions and relationships of these three terms in the Introduction section, and avoid to mix these concepts. 2. In the Conclusions of the Abstract section, it reads: " When compared to standard diagnostic imaging, AI applications for cancer detection may be more accurate in adult patients". I understand this point was the aim for this overview. However, in the discussion and conclusion section of this review, I could not find similar and supporting statements for this point. Please add more discussions on this. 3. As the authors stated in the manuscript, the meta-analysis of the data was unfeasible because of the high methodological heterogeneity of these secondary research, I would suggest the authors to consider to summarize the primary studies on this topic for a meta-analysis. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-22-32314R1The use of artificial intelligence tools in cancer detection compared to the traditional diagnostic imaging methods: an overview of the systematic reviewsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. SILVA, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 14 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Yuchen Qiu, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In my view, the authors have improved the paper considerably and have addressed all my previous concerns carefully. I therefore think that the paper can be accepted. Reviewer #2: As suggested by my previous comment 3, I think the authors should take more time to carry out the meta-analysis of systematic reviews that present complete data on this important topic. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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