Peer Review History
Original SubmissionSeptember 30, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-27079The impact of deep learning reconstruction in low dose computed tomography on the evaluation of interstitial lung diseasePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chung, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well written, well structured and technically sound article addressing an important topic in thoracic CT diagnostics. The pathophysiology of ILD-s, compared to other lung diseases, is still not very well understood and hence their early diagnosis and follow-up remain crucial. The underlying paper investigates their evaluation by means of a DL-based low-dose CT in a retrospective study. In general, I miss the overall outcome of the paper other than the fact that “DLM” could improve the image quality. I would expect that this is already known from the cited literature and am missing the point of how this is now explicitly relevant to ILDs. Apart from the improved scoring, the data does not seem to show any other benefits in using DLM, compared to the established methods, but maybe that was not the purpose of the stdy. Hence, my first major question to the authors is to iterate more deeply on the relevance of the current study and what exactly was the rationale of it? Another major point of concern, which I hope the authors can address accordingly is the fact that almost all authors (except one) have affiliation to “Samsung Medical Center”, but at the same time state that they have no competing interest. I am not familiar with Korean law (and thus completely unfamiliar with the above center), but from a science point of view, this cannot be correct: (a) If “Samsung Medical Center” is a privately owned “for-profit” company/hospital, then the authors should state that in the Competing interests statement. Likewise, if they own and/or receive shares from Samsung and/or any other for-profit institution which could be in relation to the underlying study (e.g. in the form of a gratification/bonus), to my understanding, that should be stated as well. (b) In case “Samsung Medical Center” is a “non-profit”/”public”/? medical center, then the underlying study to my understanding has been conducted as part of a public/personal funding/grant/fellowship, which should be also accordingly stated under Acknowledgement/Funding and/or Competing Interests as well. In the “Author Contributions”, I would also have expected that at least all authors have contributed to the “Writing-review & editing” part meaning all authors should have read the manuscript before submission? This was either not the case and/or omitted in the statement (Line 415). Finally, all other (minor) points are below: - Line 81 – Line 84: Again, being unfamiliar with Korean Law (and see my major point above), I wonder if the approval of the institutional review board (if that is one of a privately owned company) is enough for ethical clearance and/or does not necessitate further clearance from a University’s (public) ethical board? - Line 95 – Line 97: Please state whether the LDCT protocol is specific to the used machine and/or published elsewhere, e.g. part of a general guideline? - Line 106 – Line 114: It is unclear to me whether the three methods were part of the hardware or utilized from some other software packages and/or developed by the authors? - Line 116 – Line 119: Is it unclear to me which role exactly “ClariCT.AI” plays. Were all methods developed there, what exactly was the authors contribution in those? Does “ClariCT.AI” provide all methods out of the box and/or what development steps (for instance for the U-NET) are really necessary to be conducted by its users? Is the code open-source and/or will it be made available by the authors? - sFigure 1. has a Typo -- “Convolution” instead of “Convulution” - Line 126 – Line 129: Can the authors explain why just one Radiologist was used for the image quality (visual scoring) analysis while 2 Radiologists were used for evaluating the diagnostic efficacy? - Line 190: What is the reference to “Vienna, Austria”? “R” is an open-source programming language and is a community-edition. - Line 230: The (bottom) images in Figure 2 are either misaligned, deformed and/or some features are missing! That said, yes, the DLM-images exhibit less noise and hence have better contrast, but the images do not exhibit an identical region-of-interest (ROI) and thus cannot be compared. - This applies to all remaining figures as well. Please make sure that the enlarged regions precisely match so that they can be compared! - The discussion section misses the points mentioned above (What are the true benefits of DLM? What is the novelty of the present study?) - Conclusion section is entirely missing in the manuscript Reviewer #2: This manuscript evaluated the impact of deep learning model reconstruction (DLM) in low-dose computed tomography on the evaluation of interstitial lung disease (ILD), compared to filtered back projection (FBP), and adaptive statistical iterative reconstruction Veo (ASiR-V), using quantitative and qualitative evaluation of imaqe quality and diagnostic efficacy. Based upon a retrospective evaluation with 193 patient cases, authors concluded that DLM improved image quality and maintained diagnostic efficacy in the CT pattern diagnosis of UIP. While overall well written, a couple of study method and materials need to be clarified. 1. A blind/referenceless image spatial quality evaluator (BRISQUE) was introduced to objectively evaluate image quality. Was it a modified version or original version ? The original BRISQUE was used for natural images, and then a modified version was introduced to adapt to MRI image quality evaluation. The authors need to state the reason for choosing original / modified version and to describe its utility and limitation in the use of CT image evaluation. 2. It is a standard practice to make a tuning of IR and DLM parameters before applying to a specific clinical study. It appears that authors have made tuning of IR and determined to use ASiR-V 30% as a compromise between denoising power and sharpness preservation. However, it is not clear whether the parameter tuning was made for DLM. Which parameters were tuned and what was the criteria ? 3. Manuscript stated that two thoracic radiologists assessed CT images and determined the radiologic features of UIP. It is anticipated that the radiologists were familiar with FBP and IR images but not with DLM images. A standard practice of reader study is to have a preliminary session to let readers get familiar with image appearances. Also important is to avoid reader bias that might arise due to presentation order of certain reconstruction images. Authors did not state any of these. So it is not clear whether the discrepant diagnoses were due to the differences of image familiarity and reader bias. Authors need to clarify these issue. 4. Figures 2 to 5 were presented as examples FBP, ASiR-V, and DLM. In Figures 2, 4 and 5, images were presented in the order of FBP (A), ASiR-V (B), and DLM (C). However in case of Figure 3, the figure legend gives the order a twisted way like FBP (A), DLM (B), and ASiR-V (C). Authors should check if it is a mistake. 5. In Figure 3, which is an example of discordant diagnosis, the image (C) appear to be of a different slice unlike others. Authors should make clear if the readers made the decision based on right images and made records of reconstruction methods correctly. The lack of clarity and apparent mistakes above invoke a question about the methodological rigorousness of the study. The authors should make careful check of study methods and description in their revision works. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-22-27079R1The impact of deep learning reconstruction in low dose computed tomography on the evaluation of interstitial lung diseasePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chung, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Although the quality of the manuscript has been improved after the first-round revision, Reviewer #2 has raised some reasonable concerns which need to be addressed before this work can be published. Please take efforts to address Reviewer #2's comments point by point. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 28 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Zhentian Wang, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All comments have been adequately addressed. As far as I understand, the data is not published, but can be asked from the authors upon reasonable request. Reviewer #2: Authors stated that this study aimed to evaluate the effect of DLM method in terms of image quality and diagnostic efficacy of LDCT for ILD, and included 193 suspected ILD patient cases. While authors addressed some of the previous comments, it is hard to capture the study points regarding the definition of efficacy, how it was evaluated, and what reference standard was. 1. Conclusion states "The diagnostic efficacy was maintained in the CT pattern diagnosis of UIP in DLM". What was the study data supporting this conclusion ? Authors only presented the agreement of the diagnostic categorization of IPF between the three reconstruction methods (FBP, IR, DLM), while none of which is appropriate for reference standard. 2 How was the reference standard established for diagnostic categorization ? In Lines 303-304, reference standard was made by a consensus panel of two radiologist, which varied depending upon recon methods. And Lines 195-198 state that those readers depended on HRCT findings of the patient to make a reference standard. These are apparently discrepant and cause a confusion. 3. While Lines 331-332 states "There were no discrepant cases in the alternative diagnoses between the three reconstruction methods.", the next sentence (Lines 332-333) says "Cases with discrepant diagnoses among the three reconstruction methods are presented in Table 4." Which one is correct? Again, question arises "What was the main question of the study? Was it evaluating the diagnostic efficacy? Or simply finding agreement between different reconstructions?" 4. Figures 3-5 were used to show the discordant cases between FBP, IR, DLM, and HRCT. How the findings in these Figures relate to study purpose and conclusion ? These Figures seem to convey a contradictory message to the conclusion stating "The diagnostic efficacy was maintained in the CT pattern diagnosis of UIP in DLM". 5. Lines 302-303 states that there was a substantial agreement between the two readers (κ = 0.617). Was it a pooled agreement for the three recons? Was there a better agreement with DLM compared to other recons ? 6. Table 3 compares the diagnostic categorization among the three recon methods without using HRCT, whereas in Table 4 HRCT was used (as a reference ?) along with recon methods. Why were two different ways used ? Also 'Final diagnosis' appears only in Table 4. Does it mean there was no final diagnosis for the rest 186 cases ? If it was true, then what was reference standard for them and how the diagnostic efficacy was made ? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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