Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 2, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-03072The impact of the early COVID-19 pandemic on health care system resource use and costs in two provinces in Canada: An interrupted time series analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cheung, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 24 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Co-editor I am pleased to share my comment for title: The impact of the early COVID-19 pandemic on health care system resource use and costs in two provinces in Canada: An interrupted time series analysis. The study can be made more attractive and rich by making some of the mentioned corrections. *It seems that the importance and necessity of the study has not been described correctly. There are many studies regarding the use of health system resources and its costs during epidemics. *At the end of the introduction section, mention what innovation and new knowledge the current study provides for better understanding to health policymakers regarding child development. *In the study method section: explain how the data collection. Describe in detail (DATASETS). *Has the data analysis been done under the supervision of a statistician? *In table one, the method of classifying the variables into several groups is explained. *It seems that the way of presenting the results of the study is not coherent *It seems that in the discussion section of the study, a small number of studies have been used for comparison, and also the results of the studies have been used for confirmation. First, a comparison should be made with the results of other studies, and then the reasons for conformity and non-conformity of the results with other studies should be mentioned. *Regarding the reduction in the number of doctors' visits and the admission of patients in the hospital during the period of Covid19, as well as the lack of reduction in the number of patients in the dialysis department, sufficient explanations should be added. *The conclusion of the study is one of the main parts. The final conclusion based on the findings of the study should be mentioned - in this section, explain what practical benefits the findings of the present study have for the health system. *Acknowledgements: a paragraph is enough, it is too long and redundant. *After studying the references: it can be seen that the majority of the references are related to Canadian studies and other studies in other countries have not been used. *Very important question: Did the level of communication between doctors and patients, as well as the level of communication between other health personnel and patients, not change during the period of the Covid19 epidemic? (Keeping distance of health personnel from patients, fewer patient visits, fear of covid19 and conflict with this disease) these confounding variables did not have an effect on the amount of use of health services as well as costs??? Reviewer #2: The manuscript was well presented from title to recommendations, it has clear lines to flow. They have separared the costs' decline due to the mitigation measures and again the covid related costs, which directly answers the aim of the research. Generally fine with statistical methods used, as the data used was available, starting from descriptive to autocorrelations was typical measure to use in such data, but due to the huge magnitude of the data some errors can be detected (which I did't focus that much). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The impact of the early COVID-19 pandemic on healthcare system resource use and costs in two provinces in Canada: An interrupted time series analysis PONE-D-23-03072R1 Dear Dr. Cheung, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Masoud Behzadifar Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: Title was interesting, which was explained in SMART way. Introduction part; Clearly mentions magnitude, severity, gaps and solution for identified gap. Method section; study setting and source of data were clearly mentioned,and also the analysis were wonderful for the study design you used and also mentioned in relevant way. My Comments is the Acknowledgements were too long and redundant. And it did not clearly mention Data Collection procedures. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Belayneh Jejaw Abate ********** |
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PONE-D-23-03072R1 The impact of the early COVID-19 pandemic on healthcare system resource use and costs in two provinces in Canada: An interrupted time series analysis Dear Dr. Cheung: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Masoud Behzadifar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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