Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 27, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-05707Microbial Gene Ontology informed deep neural network for microbe functionality discovery in human diseasesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Liu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please revise by considering both reviewers comments thoroughly. Please pay particular attention to comments on comparison with other state-of-the-art methods and biological interpretation of results. Also please make your tool available on github or other code repositories with detailed documentation to benefit the user community. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 05 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This article presents an algorithm for inferring gene function based on gene abundance, which bears a striking resemblance to the P-Net algorithm published in Nature in 2021. While the algorithm is innovative, the lack of many methodological details in the article raises doubts about its value. Here are a few questions I am concerned about. 1. In the left side of Figure 1, the process for obtaining the abundance of each gene is shown. Therefore, the text "Metagenome sequence" should be corrected to "sequencing reads" instead of "genome"." 2. How does the author obtain the GO annotation for each UHGG gene? The author only mentions “The GO annotation information is obtained by referring to the UniProt database”. Using blastp? What parameters are used? 3. The author claims “We prepare a gene set where the genes exist in more than 1% of 67 UHGG samples as commonly existing genes”. What is the detail? How many reads or TPM are regards as “exist in a sample”. As we know, some low abundance genes may be due to the sequencing error. 4. Figure 1 shows the depth of the GO-informed neural network is 4 layers (exclude input layer). However, in line 95-97, the authors mention “The second layer to the seventh layer”. So, how many layers are used? The author should correct the error in the figure 1. 5. Formula: y = f[(M ∗W)T xlayer_i +b] (i = 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1) shows how the connection between layers. M is the mask matrix is dependent on the GO annotation of the genes, which can’t be trained. The trainable parameters should be W and b. The author should add more sentences to illustrate the GO network. 6. What is the y0? How did the author prepare the target? 7. How did the network train? Which Loss function, optimization algorithm? The author should provide a figure to show the training process (Loss vs epoch). 8. The author should make the source code to open access. Reviewer #2: I have reviewed your paper and found it to be interesting and informative. However, there are several issues that need to be addressed before the paper can be accepted for publication. 1. The arrangement of the figure caption and table caption is in a mess. Please rearrange them. 2. Regarding your evaluation protocol, it would be helpful to know how you divided the training+validation and testing sets. Did you do this randomly or intentionally? If you swap the training+validation and testing, what would be the resulting performance? 3. Why did you use a 9:1 split ratio? Additionally, besides the evaluation metrics provided, could you provide a biological interpretation to help illustrate the reliability of your model? 4. For the SVM kernel, did you try using the RBF kernel? If so, how did its performance compare to your method? Also, have you tried using XGBoost? As it is known to achieve state-of-the-art performance compared to other machine learning methods. 5. Could you please provide information on your beta and lambda grid search settings for your elastic net model? 6. AutoNN achieves worse performance than other methods. Have you tried combining GO with other machine learning or statistical learning methods that you benchmarked? It may not be necessary to use a deep learning model like AutoNN. 7. The precision of 0.522 to 0.698 are relatively low, indicating a high number of false positives in the classification of T2D. Could you explain why this may be the case? 8. I recommend using DeepLift to calculate the feature importance of your model. I want to see the shap values comparison from the feature of your AutoNN. Also, please apply SHAP method to explain those machine learning and statistical learning methods that you benchmarked. 9. Could you please provide the data URL in your Github? I was unable to locate it, and why did you only provide T2D and LC data loader codes? Where are the IBD and CRC data? 10. Please included a comparison with other state-of-the-art methods that predict human disease from microbiota, such as those presented in "Multimodal deep learning applied to classify healthy and disease states of human microbiome" (https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-022-04773-3) and "DeepMicro: deep representation learning for disease prediction based on microbiome data" (https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-020-63159-5). It would provide a more comprehensive understanding of the performance of the proposed method in comparison to other relevant approaches. Please address these issues in a revised version of your manuscript. I look forward to reviewing the updated version. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-23-05707R1Microbial Gene Ontology informed deep neural network for microbe functionality discovery in human diseasesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Liu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing my previous comments. I appreciate your efforts in resolving the majority of my concerns. However, there are a couple of points that still need further addressing: Regarding my 4th question, I recommended employing SVM with an RBF kernel, given it frequently demonstrated superiority over its linear and polynomial counterparts. Regrettably, I remain unconvinced by your rationale for not adopting this approach. Similarly, XGBoost is widespread use and notable effectiveness across numerous studies, often exceeding Random Forests (RF), make it a worthwhile comparator to your method. However, your explanation for its exclusion lacks persuasive power. Both SVM with an RBF kernel and XGBoost are relatively simple to implement, and I would strongly encourage you to contemplate these comparisons. Moving on to my 6th question, it appears that your model built from Gene Ontology (GO) and Neural Networks (NN) primarily benefits from the GO input, rather than the deep learning methodology or the NN model itself. In your comparison result (AUC in Table 3) among AutoNN (a representative of NN), SVM, RF, and Logistic Regression (LR), AutoNN does not emerge as the top performer, except for within your GO-informed model. Thus, I recommend you design a GO-informed Random Forest or a GO-informed SVM. If it is time-consuming, alternatively, you could simply acknowledge that your model derives more benefit from the GO input rather than the deep learning process. Finally, concerning your supplementary figures, it would be more consistent and visually appealing to place the captions below the images, rather than above. Please make this amendment accordingly. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Microbial Gene Ontology informed deep neural network for microbe functionality discovery in human diseases PONE-D-23-05707R2 Dear Dr. Liu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yanbin Yin Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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