Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 1, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-00005Unintended Pregnancy and Contraception Use among African women living with HIV: baseline analysis of the multi-country US PEPFAR PROMOTE cohortPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Aizire, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== In addition to reviewer #1 comments, please address the following comments: Academic Editor Comments: Please carefully re-read your submission and check for grammatical errors as there are several throughout including sentences that do not make sense/seem to be missing punctuation splitting them into multiple sentences. Please double check IUCD vs IUD and use the more acronym. Also spell out at first use (in introduction). Include eligibility criteria Define criteria to be included in "biological potential to become pregnant" How did you determine that mistimed pregnancies were unwanted, that doesn't seem to necessarily relate. If someone was trying to conceive, but it occured earlier or later than planned, it doesn't seem that it was an unwanted pregnancy. Please rephrase unacceptably high as that implies judgment (page 12). Not all women have access to more reliable forms of contraceptives, whether because of availability in country, cost, consent requirements, etc. Please remove unacceptably low language on page 12. It's not realistic to assume that all women in these countries have access to their desired or a more reliable form of birth control. Even if they do, gender roles can directly influence access and women may not have the power to use their preferred form of birth control. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 03 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2.One of the noted authors is a group or consortium "US-PEPFAR PROMOTE Cohort Study team". In addition to naming the author group, please list the individual authors and affiliations within this group in the acknowledgments section of your manuscript. Please also indicate clearly a lead author for this group along with a contact email address. 3. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract – • Please separate the methods and results sections • Methods: Cohort “at” enrolment? • It’s not clear in the abstract if the Poisson regression was conducted with the enrolment cohort, or later after an intervention with this cohort. Perhaps clarify that you used it on the enrolment data only, and what period of recall was included (if relevant) • Your methods need to reflect that enrolment was of women with >5 years on ART • Findings: Close brackets after p=0.054. (and use ‘=’ and not ‘<’ since you’re being precise with the 0.054) • Conclusions: the final sentence is grammatically incorrect – please separate the final segment of the sentence into its own sentence – looks like it’s meant to be a recommendation statement. Introduction – • “S&RH” or SRH? Please confirm norms for acronym in the literature • Half of WLHIV pregnancies or half of all pregnancies are unintended? • Read carefully for grammatical correctness. • In the paragraph starting with ‘unfortunately’, I think the language needs to be revised. The clear implication as it’s currently stated is that we should reduce the number of babies that WLHIV should have – this is very politically incorrect. I suggest restructuring the sentence so the second reason comes first (maternal health), and then reframe it that even in a context of highly effective PMTCT, the more babies that are born to WLHIV will equate to a higher absolute number of vertical transmissions. Methods – • Study procedures – you need to mention the >5 years on ART. This is mentioned at the end of the intro, but should be clear here that it was an eligibility criterium • Analysis – correct ‘a prior’ to ‘a priori’ • (as in the abstract comments) It’s not clear if the Poisson regression was conducted with the enrolment cohort, or later after an intervention with this cohort. Perhaps clarify that you used it on the enrolment data only, and what period of recall was included (if relevant). As most readers will be familiar with Poisson regression only being used for analysis over time, this could be confusing as it’s currently written. Results - • You present median duration as 5 years, but the final introductory sentence says “on ART for more than 5 years” and your methods doesn’t indicate anything about ART duration as enrolment criteria. Suggest you clarify across all sections. • Where describing VL, please add percentages • How do you define “pregnancy potential” and “a biological potential to be come pregnant”? Usually would be ‘of reproductive age’, but your language choice implies additional criteria – please ensure that definition is included in your methods if so. And if not, consider changing wording • Marriage/Sex/wanting children – please remove the words “while” and “only” – this implies the addition of your personal opinion, rather than purely reporting the findings. Note – this is a very interesting finding, and perhaps worth a mention in the discussion. Quantitative findings give the “what” and it would be helpful if qualitative research could assist with answering the “why” in future studies. Discussion - • P15 – it’s not clear *why* your cohort has such a small age range (28-35) – if this is a function of them being a continuing cohort from a previous study, it would be helpful to describe that in the methods, and as a limitation. • As a limitation – the limited age range leaves out the younger ages who may have much higher rates of unintended pregnancy, and the older ages, who may have lower rates of unintended pregnancy. Therefore your study has selection bias and can’t be generalized to all women of reproductive age in these countries. Conclusion – • Consider how the comments on choice/options could be interpreted by those in severely resource-constrained governments, and what message you’re trying to leave with the reader – in most of these settings, it’s not a realistic expectation that all women “are availed the whole spectrum of effective contraception options” – national health systems can’t afford this. But they should provide options for each of the main categories of contraceptive methods at least at the district hospital level (since it won’t be possible to always decentralize further). • Variation in choice may also be influenced a lot by the health system – you can only access what’s been ordered and what’s in stock, whether it’s your preferred method or not. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Unintended Pregnancy and Contraception Use among African women living with HIV: baseline analysis of the multi-country US PEPFAR PROMOTE cohort PONE-D-23-00005R1 Dear Dr. %Aizire%, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ouma Simple Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your careful revisions and responsiveness to the reviewers. We appreciate the improvements to the paper. Reviewer #2: the revised version resolves all of the issues from the first review. well put together study and will be helpful in future reproductive health strategies in countries involved ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Beth A Tippett Barr Reviewer #2: Yes: no ********** |
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