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PONE-D-23-10193Validity and reliability of an app-based medical device to empower patients in evaluating their physical capacitiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mazeas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 15 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1- General comment I congratulate the authors for their time and effort in conducting this study, with very interesting findings for clinical and research settings. Indeed, using an app to collect data is always a significant advance in our area because it is cost-effective, time- and space-efficient, easy to use, and accessible to anyone. However, although the article presents important content for the scientific community due to the relevant practical application in clinical, sports, and research settings, the main limitation is the small sample size (although the authors justify it) and the inclusion of only healthy adults, which makes these results not generalizable to other sample populations. In addition, the statistical analysis can be improved with additional tests. Below, I provide some suggestions. 2- Abstract - It should be updated based on the results obtained by the analysis recommended below. 3- Introduction - The introduction section is well-written and presents the rationale and the research problem. The readers can easily understand the need to develop the current study. I suggest adding the study hypothesis. - LL51-52: “This test measures the distance patients walk on a flat and hard surface over a six-minute period.” Please, add references. - LL57-58: “The chair sit-to-stand (STS) test involves the functional movement of rising from a seated position and is frequently used to assess lower-limb muscular strength.” Please, add references where the different variations are included. 4- Methods - LL121: How was the height of the chair controlled? Did all participants comply with the value? This factor plays an important role in the STS test. - LL164-165: One must be very careful when interpreting the results, particularly when the comparison is made with a gold standard, recently elaborated, where further studies are needed to confirm this assumption (STS test). - LL167-169: “In this context, the time between the repeated administrations should be long enough to ensure recuperation, though short enough to ensure that clinical change has not occurred.” Please, add references. - LL199: Data analysis: - What was the test used for the correlation analysis? Why? Were the assumptions met? Please, indicate it. - Besides correlation coefficients (Spearman’s rank?), please present the linear regression between both methods. Add a line of 45 degrees in the regression graph to demonstrate the equality between results. These are all measures of concurrent validity. - Please, indicate the ICC model and the ICC interpretation. You can follow this article DOI: 10.1016/j.jcm.2016.02.012. In addition, please present the 95% confidence intervals for the ICC. - In addition to the ICC analysis, please add the Lin’s concordance correlation coefficient (CCC) to assess the concurrent validity of the app and the score measured via the gold standard. For interpreting the CCC, please see DOI: 10.1002/uog.13320. -In addition to the SEM, please present the coefficient of variation (%) and interpret it adequately. - I recommend that the authors calculate the minimal detectable change (MDC) and present absolute and relative values. Please, see 10.1016/j.pmrj.2017.05.001 to support the calculations. -LL186: “100m straight line”. I believe this distance is too high when comparing the usual distances used in clinical settings (15-30 m). Why did the authors choose 100 m instead of the usual distance? Is it related to smartphone detection constraints? Please, report it in the manuscript. 5- Results The results subsection should be updated with the recommended analyses. - Table 2: Please, present the 95% CI. 6- Discussion - This subsection should be updated based on the results provided by the recommended analyses. - LL281: Comparison with previous research. This subsection needs to be improved. Although the literature might be scarce, comparing the current results with those observed with different methods is important. In addition, by including the MDC analysis, the authors can compare their results with those found for the 6MWT and the 30CST. - LL291: Please comment on the lack of generalization of the current results due to the small sample size and the health status (only healthy adults). Reviewer #2: The study aims at evaluating the reliability and validity of a novel software/mobile app MediEval. The manuscript is quite well written, and readability is also excellent. The statistical analyses are detailed and apparently appropriate. The discussion section too focuses on the strength, limitation and other stuff but it does not discuss much about the reliability and SEM things. From fitness assessment instrument points of view, the manuscript is on spot. However, this novel software/app is supposed mostly for patients or clinical purposes and therefore, some contents seem to be contradicted or can be potentially misleading. Please address these issues carefully before publication as I suppose clinicians, or some patients may potentially use this software / apps for medical purposes such as progress monitoring and making decision of subsequent treatment/rehabilitation plans. The requirement of instrument accuracy, information regarding the potential error and precautions in using this app need to be more rigorous and well informed. 1) In the introduction, please provide a bit more general and clinical applications in 6MWT and STS tests, as well as their approximate distances / scores. E.g. COPD? Hypertension? Cardiac surgery? If it can be also be used for non-clinical condition, is it also a common physical fitness test for normal adults or elderly? Now all your subjects are healthy individuals but if 6MWT and STS is not commonly used by normal adults or these tests do not provide lots of meaningful values in general fitness, the study design using healthy subjects does not match the focus of introduction and discussion section and it will become unsound as well. 2) The major weakness or limitation of the paper is that it only includes healthy subjects and most score/distance range obtained in this study (e.g. 704.55m for 6MWT) is far different from real patients. Therefore if majority of contents in the introduction or discussion are to promote this software/app for clinical use, the obtained results cannot be highly generalized to clinical populations. For example, the SEM value of 6MWT is 35.2m but quite a lot of patients with chronic disease could only walk for about 150-250m. The minimal clinically important difference in traditional 6MWT test can be just 30m as a cutoff point (PMID: 26252533). If simply reading your SEM values without careful understanding and analysis, it sounds like such a large SEM value makes this app/software unusable as the clinician or patient will have no idea if the observed changes of +30m is simply measurement error or reflecting a true improvement. Therefore, you should mention these potential discrepancies in your discussion. Moreover, from your Bland-Altman plot, although not very explicit, it seems that the observed difference becomes larger when the means score are getting larger (e.g. 750-900 vs. 600-750). Therefore, the SEM value may be substantially smaller when this test is applied on fragile individuals. 3) I prefer to also reporting the minimum/smallest detectable changes to tell the 95% confidence interval instead of just SEM values. However, the MDC value can be 97.5 m in 6MWT. Even though the author claimed good test-retest reliability (ICCs = 0.77), when it is used in a real life situation, it is very difficult to have a patient or healthy individual to achieve >97.5 m improvement in the post-test. If so, I doubt the test may not be sensitive enough to detect the real change in real life condition. Of course, when measuring the SEM or MDC values in fragile groups with substantially slower walking speed, the value should be much lower than 35.2 (SEM) or 97.5 (MDC) values. I think the author should also address these issues in the discussion instead of just saying the device reliable (interestingly, the author has lightly mentioned this in the last sentence of the abstract but nothing in the discussion part) 4) What are the instructions to subjects in performing 6MWT and STS? Walking as fast as they can? Natural pace?... 5) Why were there some outliers? The author tried referring all these outliers to Xiaomi. Can you adjust those plots to the color by phone group such that we can visualize if ALL outliers only come from Xiaomi but nothing else? This open access journal allow colorful visualization and I think col by groups can be read easily. If outliers exist in other conditions but not related to Xiaomi, while this product in the future is to be used for medical purposes, the author may need to explain a bit more why or when the large discrepancy exists....as you don't want to put extra risk on patients due to even the occasional but massive error induced in unknown situations. 6) Line 304 - lead to an overestimation.....however from your Bland-Altman plot, it seems underestimation is little bit more common. I think the author should address more on proposing the explanation of those observed discrepancies. Meanwhile if possible, compare the MDC or SEM values to previous similar studies. I suggest that the authors may consider adding the ICC, SEM and MDC value based on different subject groups (age in 2 groups if not enough subjects for each sub-group? gender or phone device) The authors have given some long paragraphs regarding the potential implications and applications in the discussion section while discussion on the potential error, accuracy issues, reliability values are much shorter and a bit lacking. It may give the impression to readers that the authors lean on selling the apps rather than keeping the discussion in neutral. I think most of the discussion is to explain the findings and compare them with previous research as well as proposing reasonable explanations on them. The practical application of findings is good to make research findings more usable in the real world. While most potential advantages should already been provided in the introduction section to justify why doing this study for this apps. 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, You did a great job in reviewing the manuscript as requested. I have no further comments. Congratulations on a very interesting study. All the best Reviewer #2: Congratulation to your great work and ready for publication. Thanks much for your detailed, rigorous and high-quality response. The manuscript is very well-written and excellent. Only 1 amendment is needed. line 382: change SDC to MDC or you may say MDC (also known as SDC) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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