Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-15982Does the introduction of a cobot change the posture and the quality of interaction during a collaborative task at work?PLOS ONE Dear Dr Bouillet, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by 27/04/2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study on the use of a cobot during a collaborative task. The manuscript is well written, the methods and results are clearly described. The conclusion is supported by the results of the study. I have small comments: 1. The figures have low resolution; 2. Describe the characteristics of the participants (sex, experience and familiarity with the task); 3. Check lines 313-314; 4. Exclude the term "tendency to significance"; 5. Avoid distinguishing P<0.05; P<0.01 and P<0.001. Reviewer #2: Comments: 1. some works are exploiting user's preference to tune the robot behavior or task. These works can be mentioned in the introduction of the paper, such as [1]; 2. questionnaires for the perceived usefulness, effort, etc., could have been provided; 3. check the English.it would have been interesting to perform the same task with different (bigger) robots (e.g., a UR10). [1] Roveda, Loris, et al. "Pairwise preferences-based optimization of a path-based velocity planner in robotic sealing tasks." IEEE Robotics and Automation Letters 6.4 (2021): 6632-6639. Reviewer #3: Thanks for giving me the opportunity for reviewing this well-carried out study. However, I have following suggestions as pointed out below: 1. The interaction between workers is described properly. However, any work (especially manual work) depends upon several factors such as type of posture, force (grip, push, pull, etc.), body part used (single or multiple), type of operation (manual or mechanical), experience of workers, complexity of the operation, etc.? I think these factors need to be reflected in literature and discussion section of the paper appropriately. 2. The author(s) seem to left out this important link of theory/model in relation to the issue being examined. Perhaps theories/models such as Karsh (2006), Sauter and Swanson (1996), and other relevant models/theories should be included in the appropriate sections to highlight the importance of the theories/models in guiding the study. 3. The results are of some interest but the authors could elaborate further on the practical implications of their findings in the discussion section. 4. Some papers related to posture and forces should also be cited and reviewed, such as: https://doi.org/10.1080/10803548.2014.11077039, https://doi.org/10.1080/10803548.2018.1501972, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ergon.2004.07.002, https://doi.org/10.1080/10803548.2022.2041300 Reviewer #4: The paper studies the use of a collaborative robot (cobot) during a collaborative work of type assembly of parts on the number of products manufactured in four minutes, operators’ posture and quality of the interactions. They compared a motor task and an auditory task assisted by either the cobot or a human. The subject is interesting and relevant for the research community, however there are a number of aspects that the authors need to address before the paper can be published. The title of the paper is misleading since the authors are analyzing the “posture and quality” of the interaction but rather the level or quantifying the length of interactions of the participant with the cobot, and its effect on activity and RULA scores. I recommend that the authors change the title to clarify their objective. The authors should indicate the choice in sample size, since they indicate that 34 volunteers were the number. I would expect a pilot analysis and with that determining the sample size. Please look at the work by Baguley (2004). This is a very important point since if not addressed adequately it can invalidate the results obtained. I do not understand the introduction of the auditory task in the experiment. What´s the purpose? What should be the interaction with the motor task? If the role is to evaluate cognitive load, shouldn’t the authors increase the number of tasks and their complexity to the participants? The video motion categorization is interesting along with the use of sensors. Also, the experiment structure is also interesting, but it is not clear how the cobot assists in the process and if a longer interaction (longer than 4 minutes) or learning curves would benefit the cobot. The authors should eliminate the part where they indicate the implementation of the Tobii Pro Glasses, sinceit does not add to the paper. The results are interesting however the production results are shown in aggregate (For all 4 minutes). It would be interesting to show if there is any time effect or learning curve between the interaction of the cobot and the human, and analyze if the production rate is stable along the time period of the experiment. In the discussion, the production difference is attributed mostly to the working time, but there could be an interaction learning curve between the human and the cobot. The results and discussion of the auditory tasks do not add to the main focus of the paper and I recommend to be taken out. If the cognitive load is a factor that is to be analyzed, I recommend that the complexity or number of tasks should be increased. The chapter related the quality of interactions really looks at the amount of interaction, this should be addressed. The results regarding the MSDs indicate that the cobot has less score. However, since the amount of time active and productive rate was more for the human than the cobot that could be an explanation. The authors could control for the number of units produced and compare the rula scores for equal number of units produced. Baguley, T. (2004). Understanding statistical power in the context of applied research. Applied ergonomics, 35(2), 73-80. Reviewer #5: The paper aims to present part of the results of extensive and complex research. However, the authors failed to highlight the segment that is in focus and present it in an appropriate manner. This resulted in an overly extensive paper that is, in certain parts, confusing, imprecise and difficult to follow and read. In addition, the conclusions that the authors generate (primarily related to productivity parameters) refer to the design of a specific experiment and cannot in any way represent conclusions of a general nature. The recommendation to the authors is to shorten the paper and to focus as much as possible on the defined topic ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-22-15982R1Does the introduction of a cobot change the productivity and posture of the operators in a collaborative task?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bouillet, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 06 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Reviewer#4 has made comments which require you to make "minor revisions" to your manuscript. Therefore, I would like to invite you to make minor revisions to your manuscript based on the reviewer's comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The paper can be now accepted. All the concerns have been properly addressed in the revised paper and in the reply to review file. Reviewer #3: Thanks for making changes. All the comments raised by reviewer are addressed by the authors in this version. Reviewer #4: The paper studies the use of a collaborative robot (cobot) during a collaborative work of type assembly of parts on the number of products manufactured in four minutes, operators’ posture, and quality of the interactions. The authors have addressed my concerns in the content of the paper. Some aspects arise from the corrected version. The authors should send the paper to a native editor to edit the English. In Table 1, it’s not clear what the authors mean by “a the condition with the highest value.”, “b the condition with lower value than a.”… This is not clear at all. The same is in table 2, 3 and 4. The added chapter “A theorical method to apply to a more ecological context” does add nothing significant to the paper and only points out one limitation. Instead, the authors should add a part in which comment on the limitations of the study they performed and point out further research directions. There are only minor aspects: 1.- Line 67: There are no examples of users’ preferences, only three dots. 2.- Line 92: Correct the English in the phrase: “To our knowledge, no study interested to compare a human-human collaboration and a human-robot collaboration for the same task about the production performance or the operators’ health or quality of the interactions”. 3.- Line 95. Correct the English of the last paragraph. 4.- Line 104: Correct the English: “Thirty-four volunteers participated to (in) the study,” I’m going to stop pointing out problems in the English. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Does the introduction of a cobot change the productivity and posture of the operators in a collaborative task? PONE-D-22-15982R2 Dear Kévin Bouillet We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pooya Sareh, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: Thank you to the authors. They have addressed all my concerns and the paper is much better. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-15982R2 Does the introduction of a cobot change the productivity and posture of the operators in a collaborative task? Dear Dr. Bouillet: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pooya Sareh Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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