Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 6, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-26436Implementing a physical activity project for people with dementia – identification of barriers and facilitator using consolidated framework for implementation research (CFIR): A qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cardona, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 29 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study that aimed to identify multilevel barriers and facilitator factors when implementing a project designed to promote physical activity participation for people with dementia in Germany. Some suggestions are listed below for the authors to consider for improvement of the paper. 1. Since this study was conducted in Germany, please indicate in the manuscript title. 2. Please talk about the knowledge gaps clearly. For example, what factors that have not been investigated by previous studies based on the CFIR domains or constructs. 3. The authors should give justifications for using the CFIR framework in this study. Why did the authors choose the CFIR, but not others (e.g., the Theoretical Domains Framework). One of the major advantages of using the CFIR is that this framework has been widely applied. There are a few systematic reviews that have used the CFIR to investigate facilitators or barriers to implementing a health intervention. Please cite such publications when talking about the reasons for using the CFIR. One example is listed below. Please cite where appropriate. Chan, P.Sf., Fang, Y., Wong, M.Cs. et al. Using Consolidated Framework for Implementation Research to investigate facilitators and barriers of implementing alcohol screening and brief intervention among primary care health professionals: a systematic review. Implementation Sci 16, 99 (2021). https://doi.org/10.1186/s13012-021-01170-8 4. For data analysis, this is a very important part. The authors should give details how the data coding of the data was performed. Any detailed approaches or procedures employed? Since the definitions of the CFIR constructs would be very different from the determinants of the study results, how were they matched? Given the current form, it is not clear about the data coding process. 5. It is expected that there should have some discussions about implementation strategies that address the determinants in order to improve physical activity among people with dementia. There are a host of implementation strategies. The authors should consider adding this section to the paper. Look forward to reading the revised version of this interesting paper. Reviewer #2: I have read and assessed the manuscript. I think the author studied a good topic about dementia patients which is a qualitative one with no needed statistical analysis. Concerning the language, it is acceptable with sound grammar and context. I think the author was able to include more interviews and participants, but the 20 is good. Reviewer #3: As a reviewer, I cannot recommend rejecting the paper solely based on the methods and results presented. However, I have some major concerns. Firstly, the study's sample size is small and may not provide a comprehensive view of the subject under study. The study only included project leaders and sport trainers from four German sports associations, which could lead to sampling bias. Secondly, the study's data collection and analysis are unclear. The study only stated that semi-structured interviews were conducted via video conference using Zoom and that the interviews were recorded and transcribed verbatim. However, the study did not mention how the interviews were analyzed or provide any specific coding methods. Finally, the study's results are not presented in a clear and organized manner. The study presents the results by CFIR domains, but the presentation is not comprehensive and may confuse the reader. It is unclear how the negative, neutral, and positive perceptions were measured or how they contribute to the results. Therefore, I recommend rejecting the paper due to the ethical concerns and the lack of clarity in the methods, data collection, and analysis. Reviewer #4: First of all, the authors said "ethical approval from a committee was not sought" and this research included a patients, even there was no interventions, this kind of research also require ethical approval. How the authors did not include participants that were patients? Dose the PwD not patients??? "After study approval, members of the steering committee informed project staff about our study, and those interested in participating could do it voluntarily." approval from who? the authors said firstly that they did not sought ethical approval, then they said after study approval. ????? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Ahmed Aljabali Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Implementing a physical activity project for people with dementia in Germany – identification of barriers and facilitator using consolidated framework for implementation research (CFIR): A qualitative study PONE-D-22-26436R1 Dear Dr. Cardona, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Eshak I Bahbah Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-26436R1 Implementing a physical activity project for people with dementia in Germany – identification of barriers and facilitator using consolidated framework for implementation research (CFIR): A qualitative study Dear Dr. Cardona: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Eshak I Bahbah Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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