Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 7, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-02024Rates and Reasons for Hospital Readmission after Acute Ischemic Stroke in a US Population-Based CohortPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by June 2nd 2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. In methods section, this sentence needs to be corrected: "Secondary outcomes included readmission with 1) recurrent AIS (ICD 10 codes I63*) as the principal discharge diagnosis, and 2) readmissions due to Major Adverse Cardiovascular Events (MACE) defined as: 1) AIS, 2) transient ischemic attack (TIA) (G45*, G46*), 3) Peripheral Vascular Disease (I7*), 4) myocardial infarction (MI) (I21*, I22*) or 5) cardiac arrest (I46*) as the principal discharge diagnosis or 6) a hospital readmission ending in death with a principal discharge diagnosis starting with I (diseases of the circulatory system) to capture cardiovascular death". It is not readmission outcome with discharge diagnosis, rather it is readmission outcome with principal readmission diagnosis. Also correct in abstract and in other parts of manuscript. 2. Authors should explain in details how they got NIHSS scale in methodology. 3. In Abstract, please mention the cut off for age (older) and LOS. 4. In Abstract, please mention the comparison groups of social determinants of health. 5. ICD coding errors are major limitations of National databases and it should be mentioned in the limitations section. 6. Authors should mention the missing data in Figure-1. Reviewer #2: The manuscript is well written and highlights one major reasons for hospital readmission. A few ideas to include in the outcomes includes, the cost of readmission. Previous studies have been done on national readmission database have compared the trends over time from 2010-2025. It would be interesting to see the trends thereafter from 2016-2020, whether there was any impact of COVID-19 infection on readmission post stroke. Lastly, the tables needs to be accurately labelled and missing values needs to be updated. They can cut short the tables to include the variables relevant to the study. Reviewer #3: Overall, this peer-reviewed article provides valuable insights into the rates, causes, and risk factors associated with hospital readmissions following acute ischemic stroke in the United States. The reviewer has following concerns: 1.Multiple studies have been published on the 30-day readmission rate following acute ischemic stroke using the same database. The authors should address how their manuscript differs from the already published literature. Additionally, they should consider trend analysis in the 30-day readmission rate, as it decreased from 12% in 2013 to 9.7% in 2019. https://jamanetwork.com/journals/jamanetworkopen/fullarticle/2696869 https://www.ahajournals.org/doi/full/10.1161/STROKEAHA.116.016085 2.Can the authors include the number of patients who had hemorrhagic conversion following AIS during the index stay? 3.The NRD does not track patients beyond the calendar year. For example, patients admitted in December 2019 cannot be tracked for 30-day readmission as there is no link between the year 2019 and 2020. Therefore, December month admissions should be excluded because the 30-day readmission rate cannot be calculated. Many studies have been published using the same methodology. The authors should clarify if they have excluded December month admissions and add it to the limitations. 4.The NRD provides information regarding inter-hospital transfers. If a patient was admitted to a small hospital and transferred to a large hospital, there is a small chance that the patient might be included twice. Therefore, inter-hospital transfers must be excluded. If the authors have excluded them, please clarify in the methods section. If they have not excluded them, please provide a reason for not doing so. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Rates and Reasons for Hospital Readmission after Acute Ischemic Stroke in a US Population-Based Cohort PONE-D-23-02024R1 Dear Dr. Zhou, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Karthik Gangu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-23-02024R1 Rates and reasons for hospital readmission after acute ischemic stroke in a US population-based cohort Dear Dr. Zhou: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Karthik Gangu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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