Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-08921Characterization of patients receiving surgical versus non-surgical treatment for infective endocarditis in West VirginiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ruchi Bhandari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Dear authors, I would like to ask you address the comments given by the reviewers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a retrospective review of endocarditis care and outcomes in at the 4 major cardiovascular medical centers in West Virginia between 2014 and 2018. The study is a result of significant effort which included hundreds of chart reviews to gather detailed information about characteristics of patients who do and do not receive surgery for endocarditis in West Virginia. There is a huge amount of information presented but the manuscript would be strengthened with improved framing. The introduction presents fairly general information about rising rates of endocarditis but does not set up the specific questions which extends into the presentation of the results and discussion. Specifically, introduction and discussion misses some key sign-posts that will help guide readers through the data. The data is stratified by receipt of surgery, which is also the outcome, but introduction doesn’t frame the manuscript around variation in surgical decision making or tensions and challenges. The high rate of DU-IE and relatively high rate of surgery in this cohort is unique and worth exploring further. Additionally, the model selection process requires greater explanation. Finally, in-hospital opioid use disorder treatment strategy and/or at time of discharge is conspicuously absent given the frame of the paper and importance to this issue. Major: 1. Abstract: The abstract could better set up the question addressed about predicotrs of surgery. Suggest using specific terminology rather than “outcomes.” This study looks at predictors of surgery and reports on inpatient mortality and readmission. 2. Abstract: Unhealthy opioid use is vague terminology which may or may not influence risk for endocarditis. Suggest using more specific terminology – injection drug use. 3. Abstract conclusion: The conclusion is quite general and should more clearly highlight the key findings. 4. When discussing changing approaches to managing IDU, consider citing this recent scientific statemenet which highlights some of the key tensions and challenges in caring for this group of patients: Baddour et al. Management of infective endocarditis in people who inject drugs: a scientific statement from the American Heart Association. Circulation. 2022;146:e187–e201. 5. Drug use is a key covariate but the broad category seems to elide conditions which significantly increase risk of endocarditis from injection and those that do not (such as cannabis). 6. For patients categorized as having drug use (positive for buprenorphine or methadone), I presume since there is a separate category MOUD, does this mean non-prescribed use? How about benzos? 7. For the outcome surgery, is this definied exclusively as surgery during the index admission? Would someone who is admitted, leaves ama, and is readmitted and then receives surgery be included in this cohort? 8. The term substance use disorder is used in table 2 and drug use in table 1. In this data, hwo are these defined and different. 9. Results: In writing the comparison with parenthesis, the order of surgery vs non-surgery goes back and forth. For clarity, this should be consistnet. 10. Can the authors report the number of hospital days until surgery was performed? 11. For outcomes, is readmission for any reason or endocarditis related? Additionally, is the follow up time consistent across individuals or variable. For example, someone who enters the cohort at the beginning, has 4 years of potential follow up time where as someone later in the cohort could have very little follow up time. 12. Multivariable modeling. I do not fully understand the selection of variables to include in the model. There are theoretically informed and quantitative approaches, each with it’s own strengths and weaknesses. The authors seem to state that variables which were statistically significant in the bivariate models were included. However, AV and MV endocarditis are more likely to be in the surgery group but are not included. Further, there are difference by year that is not included. Based on both theoretical and quantitative approaches, it seems very important to control for left vs right-side disease and year in this data. 13. The manuscript seems to tell a story of rising endocarditis, driven by drug use, but also rising surgical rates (row percents in table 1 by year would show that clearly). I am left wondering why surgical rates are increasing in this cohort. Is there more left sided disease over time? Is surgical decision making changing – ie. have distribution of surgical indications changed? The authors should consider exploring these trends. Clinically speaking, I think these question are central and under-explored 14. Discharge status categories are confusing. AMA discharge patients are discharged alive but the categories are mutually exclusive. Is location of discharge available as well (home with services, to a facility, etc) 15. The central narrative of this manuscript is that drug use is driving endocarditis in West Virginia but how drug use is addressed in the cohort is not reported. Are patients offered MOUD in the hospital with linkage to care? If not, how is withdrawal managed? What addiction treatment resources are offered or referred? 16. Discussion: Line 301/302, the authors state that people who use drugs have higher in-hospital mortality rates but the citation reports only on 2 yr mortality. The authors should be careful when citing and generalizing. In fact, several studies actually show that among all patients with endocarditis, in-hosptial mortality is lower for people with DU-IE compared to non-DU-IE. Minor: 1. Consider editing short title to, “Characteristics of endocarditis patients in West Virginia” as the study reports on those who do and do not have surgery. 2. Introduction: page 4, line 94. The statement on repair vs replacement “minimizing the penetration of for materials” is awkwardly worded. Further, the citation does not support such a strong statement. Consider softening the language. 3. In Table 2 under valve, the aortic p-value is bolded (presumably to represent statistical significance) but mitral valve is not. Reviewer #2: This paper on Characterization of patients receiving surgical versus non-surgical treatment for infective endocarditis in West Virginia addresses an important issue with a rising prevalence in the area. It describes the surgical characteristics and outcomes of patients with IE who received medical treatment alone or those who received both medical and surgical treatment in rural centers in West Virginia and makes comparison among the groups. This article could be improved if the methods and result sections are revised and the discussion section is also addressed after that. The methodological issues that may lead to biases also need to be discussed as there are a number of baseline differences between the two comparison groups and from the design of the study. The methodology section is not sufficient. There authors did not mention whether the study conforms to any relevant guidelines. The outcome variables not clearly defined. The objective of the paper as outlined at the end of introduction section is “to characterize the outcomes among patients hospitalized with IE stratified by those who received only antimicrobial treatment versus those who received antimicrobial and surgical treatment in the four major rural centers in West Virginia.” How was that addressed in the analysis? Operational definitions are missing How was the diagnosis of infective endocarditis made? How was sample size calculated? What is the power of the study? Result Line 169-171 says “During this period, there was a 2.4-fold increase in patients who were treated non-surgically and an 18-fold increase in patients who underwent surgery as part of their management (p < 0.001)”. How or between which years was the comparison done? How did you take the reference when calculation for association (significance) was done for Table 1? The way the associations were described in the table lacks uniformity. “Total” is missing and some of the numbers (percents) do not add up to 100. It would be difficult to make any interpretation from the tables as they are now. This needs revision. Significant difference in the baseline characteristics? The same is true for table 2 Figure 1: blurred image Line 191-194: A significantly higher proportion of patients without surgery had comorbidities, including …. while a high proportion of patients with surgery were diagnosed with psychiatric disorders. Table 3: There are quite a number of patients who were discharged within short days of hospital stay. How is this explained in terms of the duration of hospitalization or antibiotic treatment for IE? What is the relevance of Table 4? Table 5 needs more description. What is explained is the presence of associations only. Discussion and conclusion need to be revised after addressing the methods and result section and has to try to answer the objectives of the study. The methodological biases or flaws that may arise from the nature of the study design or from the characteristics of the participants in the study also need to be addressed in the limitation section. Reviewer #3: Dear Ruch Bhandari et al., Thanks for bringing a paper of public health importance, infective endocarditis. Your paper highlights key issues among IE adult subjects who were treated medically and medically-surgically. Please find here comments, suggestions and questions forwarded to help improve your manuscript. Abstract: Background: page 2 line 47 ‘the purpose….is to characterize’ better if worded in past tense ‘the purpose…was to characterize’ Results: Please provide p values for univariate analysis outputs which showed difference between categories e.g., age, drug use, psychiatric disorders…etc. Same is true for death and discharge against medical advice. Conclusion: it would be good if authors could suggest some clinical recommendations based on the study findings. Background Repetition of idea: ‘West Virginia had a 681% increase in overall IE hospitalizations in the 104 state between 2014 and 2018, predominantly associated with injection drug use’. Check if one of these can be omitted or if it a must for you to keep both try rewording it. Methods Please include brief background information on the cardiovascular rural centers in the study setting. Please include operational definition for persistent sepsis/ persistent positive blood culture. Please include inclusion and exclusion criteria for this retrospective review. Please clarify or mention which variables were included in the final model and how was selection made for this. Few comments on the sample size and power of your study to bring recommendations. Results Page 11: ‘what was the reason for inclusion of the multispecialty consultation services?’ on line 08-211. If it is peculiar for the study subjects then further elaborations need to be provided. Discussion Summarized well. Please further expand and include clinical recommendations on IE management based on your study. References: appropriate Abbreviations: please check some abbreviations as some are not first written in full like AMA …. Best regards, ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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