Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 27, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-02420Situational assessment of empathy and compassion: Predicting prosociality using a video-based taskPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Górska, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 16 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Now I have received the comments from two authors and both of them agreed that this work is valuable for future research on compassion and recommended Accept with Minor Revision. At the same time, they also provided some suggestions to improve the quality of the article. Please response to each comment from reviewers. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall: This project is more difficult to carry out, so the Social Emotional Video Task (SoVT) is used as an alternative approach to study. Although psychological questionnaires and love scales for empathy are helpful for the investigation of prosocial attitudes, SoVT ratings are not more accurate. Overall, they are generally consistent with the reliability of supporting results and empathic processes, and the situational assessment is more accurate, which has reference significance. Topic Content: Empathy and compassion are often hard to tell apart, and this study focused on compassion, which was difficult to identify during the study period. In addition, since theoretical models and experience cannot agree on the prediction of empathy for prosociety, it is important to test the validity of both. Abstract questionnaire items may lead to defects in the completeness and transmissibility of questions and expressions. participant The participants were concentrated in Israeli education students, and the test sample had certain limitations and chance. The sample of 79 participants is not convincing enough and should be increased appropriately. Certain cultural backgrounds and circumstances may lead to unexpected results, as well as social tensions arising from Israel's complex and volatile environment. Measurement method: Video-based measures of instantaneous responses to a range of stimuli may not be accurate for specific emotional expression; Participants' understanding of compassion ratings may still be relatively abstract and vague, which makes it difficult to relate to the momentary feelings evoked by the video. Conceptualization and experiential compassion often diverge. The habitual cultural memory and expression make the research of cross-cultural scholars have certain obstacles. Hypothesis and experimental process: In addition, hypothetical possibilities may tilt the outcome toward positive feedback, since the helping situation is more likely to be weakened in the real world due to various factors. Of course, the willingness to help is just an idea, and has not yet been translated into action. There are many models, data and hypotheses involved in the experiment, and it is also difficult to analyze and process the data. The reliability of the theory should be repeatedly verified and reasonably verified. Whether the calculated index is consistent with actual emotional expression and psychological status needs further consideration. Increasing predictive power fidelity methods have not been tested before, so the potential for error and inaccuracy is large. They did not rate compassion due to ambivalence, indirectly through the experience of positive emotions (as in the original version) The nature of compassion, including negative and positive emotional components, is also uncertain in the description and expression of emotions. Experimental results and future research: The empathy index deviates from the original study by calculating the difference in negative impact scores between negative and positive videos. It is not clear to what extent observed and experienced emotions are isomorphic and the nature of this measure should be further examined. Since the ratings used in the two studies do not match, the comparison cannot be made. Therefore, more attention should be paid to cultural ratings and unified rating standards to make the comparison more accurate. The rating methods of each scale are different, so it is difficult to compare them horizontally. Typical differences between relevant empathy and prosocial behavior range from weak to moderate, and it is important and essential to explore the ability of SoVT and similar video-based measures to predict prosocial orientation and behavioral ecology. In short, the significance of this experiment is relatively important and has certain reference value. The research on prosociety is relatively innovative, and I believe that the revised version will be better and better. Reviewer #2: This is a well-written manuscript on a study exploring correlations between a video-based empathy task, and self-report measures of empathy, as well as hypothetical and mock helping behaviour. I was unable to access the supplementary data (the provided link led to a single page with a data availability statement only). As such, I’m unable to comment on some important aspects of the methods, such as which questions / emotions participants were asked in response to the videos, what type of content was depicted in the videos, etc.. As far as described in the main text, the methods employed are sound, and the conclusions drawn from them valid. On key limitation is that while participants were asked to indicate willingness to help a charity, in essence this was still a hypothetical measure. Firstly, it is not clear in how participants believed the request was real. Even if they did, they might still have expected to be able to withdraw from the request once it was put to them. As such, an actual, direct measure of helping behaviour is missing (e.g. measuring in how far participants voluntarily assist with an unrelated task during the session). This limits some of the conclusions that can be drawn from this data. In terms of the observed effects, the authors report their analyses as they were pre-registered, which is good. However, the lack of their predicted correlation between video empathy measure & personal distress scale is not surprising: the PD scale generally is considered to include more maladaptive dysregulated emotional responses, and can be negatively related to prosociality. As such, their findings of correlations between their video empathy measure and empathic concern / perspective taking are to be expected. Data is not publicly available. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Situational assessment of empathy and compassion: Predicting prosociality using a video-based task PONE-D-23-02420R1 Dear Dr. Górska, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Xianglong Zeng Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear authors: Thanks for your efforts in revision. I have red your response letter and mansucript. Considering the both of two reviewers gave "minor revision" in the first round and you have well answered their comments. Now I recommend an "accept" and transform this manuscript to editorial office. I think this should go in line with the journal policy, and I will pay attention to whether editorial office require further confirmation by reviewers. Sincerely Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-02420R1 Situational assessment of empathy and compassion: Predicting prosociality using a video-based task Dear Dr. Górska: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Xianglong Zeng Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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