Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-22064Stated Preferences for New HIV Prevention Technologies among Men Who have Sex with Men in India: A Discrete Choice ExperimentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Newman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 21 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review to PONE-D-23-22064: Stated Preferences for New HIV Prevention Technologies among MSM in India The paper focuses on the (hypothetical) willingness to use three HIV prevention technologies among men who have sex with men in India. It represents a comprehensive and methodologically sound study with relevant findings, such as the variability of preferences based on sociodemographic and risk behavior factors. However, some aspects could benefit from refinement for enhanced clarity: Comment 1: The current presentation of the study design is difficult to follow. While it seems that all necessary details regarding recruitment, study design, and the DCE are included, they are not presented in a cohesive and comprehensible manner. For example, one may wonder how the respondents were sampled or how the DCE was designed, only to get an explanation in later sections. This limits the flow of reading considerably. I recommend fundamentally rewriting and reorganizing the sections on study design, sample and data collection, and DCE development to improve clarity and coherence. Comment 2: The description of the process for assigning individuals to one of the three products is ambiguous and requires further explanation. It remains unclear whether the three products are linked to the three different versions of the questionnaire. Comment 3: The use of chain-referral sampling raises concerns about the potential for selection bias and survey falsification. I recommend that the authors discuss any quality control measures implemented to ensure that respondents genuinely met the inclusion criteria. To my understanding, there's a risk that participants might falsely have identified as part of the target group to access the study incentives. Addressing this concern helps validating the study's findings as well as strength the paper. Comment 4: The burden of eight choice scenarios, each including five cards with different attribute level combinations, seems considerable and could lead to participation fatigue. This fatigue might affect the reliability of responses. I suggest that the authors control for effects of survey fatigue, possibly by focusing on a smaller set of decisions made by each respondent, such as only the first 3-4 decisions, as a robustness check. Comment 5: Ideally, the authors would make their Stata code and the choice scenarios created in Ngene available as part of the supplement so that other researchers can build on their work. Reviewer #2: This manuscript presents the results of a DCE in India (two Indian cities) to elicit willingness to use a HIV prevention technology, described using different levels of five attributes. Three technologies were analysed, through three different questionnaire versions and samples: 1) HIV pre-exposure prophylaxis (PrEP), (2) rectal microbiocides and (3) HIV vaccines. Strengths: The attempt to quantify preference intensity (WTP) about the attributes (characteristics) to obtain relevant information to guide public health decisions and improve their effectiveness. Weaknesses: (1) Results about preferences for the three products are not comparable. Results can support only conclusions about the preferences for attributes and levels for each product. (2) There is no literature revision about published articles regarding DCE use in HIV prevention technologies, despite the high amount of literature on the issue (there is a systematic review of 2021 in the Patient-patient centered outcomes research Journal, and in many others like the Journal of International Aids Society or more general like the Journal of Choice Modelling). Methods and results must be compared and discussed taking into account previous literature. (3) Selection of attributes and their levels is not enough explained. Major issues to be addressed: 1) Improve manuscript to present a review of economic valuation literature regarding DCE and HIV prevention.There is a systematic review of 2021 in the Patient-patient centered outcomes research Journal, and in many others like the Journal of International Aids Society or more general like the Journal of Choice Modelling. Methods and results must be compared and discussed taking into account previous literature. 2) Authors must explain the process followed to select attributes and levels. Levels of some crucial attributes (like efficacy, 50%, 99%; side effects, none, minor) may have conditioned their high significance in the analysis. Also, it would be important to see the information provided before the choice, to check the scenario and previous information, which could be crucial for respondents to fully understand the task. Recommendation: Major revisions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Stated Preferences for New HIV Prevention Technologies among Men Who have Sex with Men in India: A Discrete Choice Experiment PONE-D-23-22064R1 Dear Dr. Newman, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mario Soliño Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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