Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 27, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-02456Cytokine induced inflammatory bowel disease model using organ-on-a-chip technologyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tataru, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your updated Competing Interests statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting your study to PLOS ONE. Reviewers have some critical comments. So I will require more adequate discussion in revised manuscript. And authors need submit an appropriate format. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, Tataru et al designed in vitro co-culture models of separated (by microporous membrane) epithelial and endothelial cell layers ("gut-on-a-chip)" treated with various concentrations of cytokines (TNF-a and IFN-g) to model intestinal inflammation in inflammatory bowel disease (IBD). Their outcomes included cytokine production (measured by ELSIAs) and intestinal barrier integrity (measured by permeability tracers). They demonstrate various cytokine concentrations and exposure conditions (top vs bottom channels) associated with specific cytokine production and that treatment of bottom channel (endothelial layer) with 100 ng/mL of proinflammatory cytokines decreased intestinal barrier integrity. The authors conclude that "induction of inflammation using only pro-inflammatory cytokines TNF-α and IFN-γ can create a simple and more accurate model of the cytokine secretion and barrier integrity aspects of IBD..." This is an interesting study that aims to provide a simplified, reductionist approach to study epithelial and endothelial dysfunction (cytokine production and barrier integrity) in inflammatory bowel disease (IBD). I have the following critiques and recommendations: 1. Abstract: "Our results indicate that this model consistently induces well-known IBD phenotypes." The authors should clarify what they mean by phenotype. Are they referring to the different IBD subtypes (ulcerative colitis vs Crohn's disease) or IBD phenotype behavior (stricturing vs inflammatory vs fistulizing/penetrating disease)? If they are referring to molecular phenotypes, they do not actually provide any transcriptomic/gene expression data to show that cytokine treatment of their epithelial/endothelial co-cultures recapitulates transcriptomics of epithelial and endothelial cells from biopsies from patients with IBD. 2. Introduction: "Despite the availability of multiple palliative drug options such as amino salicylates, glucocorticoid (GC), immunosuppressive (such as azathioprine methotrexate), and TNF-α monoclonal antibodies, a large proportion of patients either do not respond or lose response to therapy.." Would avoid the use of "palliative" as the IBD therapies mentioned above are effective treatments in attenuating intestinal inflammation in patients with IBD as opposed to providing only symptomatic relief/comfort. 3. Methods: The authors should clarify if their in vitro gut-on-a-chip model utilized the commercially available Emulate models. If so, this should be clearly stated in the methods section. Furthermore, they should report any financial disclosures and conflicts of interest and clarify role of the company in this manuscript. 4. Discussion: The authors should discuss the the strengths and limitations of their study. Cytokine treatment of epithelial and endothelial cells in vitro is not a novel concept. How does this particular study differ from prior studies (novelty)? Epithelial barrier dysfunction is only one aspect of IBD pathogenesis. 5. Discussion: How do the concentrations of TNF-a and IFN-g used in this in vitro model compare to in vivo tissue levels from animal models (e.g. DSS colitis) or human patients with IBD? Are these levels physiologic (and hence mimic IBD) and hence recapitulate intestinal inflammation in vivo? 6. Discussion: The authors should discuss the significance of their findings with regards to the different layer effects (epithelial layer-aspical/luminal vs endothelial-basolateral) with what is known from the literature. Presumably, cytokines from the bottom channel (in contact with endothelial layer) simulate cytokines derived from circulating/systematic immune cells, whereas cytokines from the top channel (in contact with epithelial cell layer) simulate apical/luminal-derived cytokines (from tissue resident immune cells). The spatial considerations of their model should be addressed with regards to what is known physiologically. 7. Results/Discussion: It is interesting that the authors are able to decrease intestinal barrier integrity. The authors should clarify in their results which barrier integrity (epithelial vs endothelial layer) was altered. Furthermore, the mechanism of decreased barrier integrity should be clarified. Was this mediated through loss of tight junction proteins? Was this mediated through apoptosis of epithelial and/or endothelial cells? The latter is an especially important point as IBD is characterized by erosions (resulting in death of epithelial cells) and ulcerations of the gastrointestinal tract. Reviewer #2: In the present study Tataru et al. established and presented a gut-on-a-chip in vitro co-culture models enabling the study of factors and mechanisms of the non-immune inflammatory response of IBD. The data is clear and informative. However, there are some issues as described below. Minor point 1. The authors described that currently existing experimental in vitro models can not examine factors that interrupt or decrease the “magnitude” of the non-immune inflammatory response characteristic of IBD in a part of “in vitro models of non-immune cell inflammatory response” in Introduction section. What is the magnitude? In the text that follows, the authors described that “we present a gut-on-a-chip co-culture model that stimulates non-immune cells with T-cell originating pro-inflammatory cytokines to simulate the non-immune inflammatory response.” The authors should describe not only the new experimental system, but also the magnitudes that could not be considered until now. 2. The authors cited paper number 18 in several places. However, the #18 paper is a review of experimental models of IBD, but not of an in vitro experimental system of IBD. Therefore, it is better to reconsider the cited papers for the places where the #18 paper is cited. 3. There are two nearly identical paragraphs in Conclusion section. There are slight differences, but do these differences mean anything? Authors need to clean up and rewrite the text of this section. 4. On page 3, line 76, “Ussing” is misspelled. 5. The markers of “Control” and “25 ng/ml top and bottom” are similar in color and difficult to distinguish in Fig. 2 and 3. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Cytokine induced inflammatory bowel disease model using organ-on-a-chip technology PONE-D-23-02456R1 Dear Dr. Christine Andrea Tataru, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Masanori A. Murayama Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for submitting revised manuscript. In this time, I will decide your paper "Accept". Congratulations. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have adequately addressed my critiques. I appreciate the insightful responses and additional experiments performed. Reviewer #2: The authors carefully responded to comments and questions from reviewers. As a result, the content of this paper is acceptable. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: John Gubatan, MD Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-23-02456R1 Cytokine induced inflammatory bowel disease model using organ-on-a-chip technology Dear Dr. Tataru: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Masanori A. Murayama Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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