Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 19, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-01726HIV Testing Dropped Significantly among Female Sex Workers in Iran in 2020PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sharifi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 13 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include a caption for figure 1. Additional Editor Comments: This is an important report for HIV control not only in Iran but in similar places around the globe. The authors conducted an RDS-based survey among female sex workers (FSW) to assess the prevalence/coverage of HIV testing in the last 12 months. However, the authors did a poor job of documenting critical methodologic RDS details to understand and appreciate the report as the reviewer points out below. Specific issues: 1. As the reviewer indicate below please use the STROBE-RDS to improve the report. 2. The study design and setting currently fail to describe any setting. In the current citation number 12 there are details that are relevant to include. 3. About the independent variables why age and income are just analysed as binary variables? At least, univariate of these variables should also include them as continuous so we can learn about their mean, standard deviation, quartiles and range. Line 103 speaks of an aggregation. Please provide details on such an aggregation was done. 4. Lines 110 to 112 speak of a procedure to select variables to adjust for. The problem here is how these p-values were calculated. Are the authors using RDS accounting procedures to get these p-values? 5. Tables 2 and 3 are these results based on an RDS-aware procedure? What software was used for the analysis? Please include that information in the statical considerations section. 6. Also, please revise the title. According to this report, this is the first RDS-based study for HIV testing among Iran women. Although it may be true that there was a drop, the previous data is based on non-comparable sampling procedures. Therefore it is misleading to speak of "dropping" here. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors used an appropriate quasi-probabilistic method to recruit a large sample of hard-to-reach population of female sex workers in eight cities in Iran. The data are not shared because of confidentiality reasons, which I find appropriate for this highly stigmatised population. The authors present findings related to HIV testing, explore correlates of HIV testing in the last 12 months and discuss the relevance of their results for the prevention effort in a comprehensive way. The importance of data on HIV testing in this population in Iran is highlighted in an appropriate way it the Introduction section. However, the overall reporting in this interesting work could be improved and aligned with the reporting standards for this study design, in particular the Methods and the Results section, so that the details of the authors’ approach and possible limitations can be better understood. The authors should also check the manuscript carefully and correct typographical and grammatical errors. 1. It would be helpful for the readers if the report included items in line with the STROBE-RDS Statement checklist (R.G. White et al. / Journal of Clinical Epidemiology 68 (2015) 1463e1471), details possibly also as a supplementary material. The overall reporting is somewhat unclear. 2. Title should explicitly include the study design: e.g. “HIV testing…Iran in 2020: findings from a respondent driven sampling surveys” and be more aligned with the content of the abstract 3. Abstract - Details of methods - biological samples + face-to-face interviews should also be stated. HIV-prevalence is usually explored in RDS, so HIV testing was probably one of the primary outcomes, and not the only one, so I suggest deleting that sentence and replacing it with “We used multivariable logistic regression to explore correlates of HIV testing in the last 12 months” to reflect the statistical approach explicitly. 4. The language of the abstract should be revised carefully and rewritten 5. Although authors cite an article where details of the methods were reported, more detail should be added in line with RDS—STROBE requirements which are relevant for the readers to better understand and interpret the multivariate analysis the authors present (e.g. formative research basic findings, potential sources of bias and efforts to address them, groupings of variables) 6. P4L72 “For the current analysis, participants were excluded if they were HIV-positive, had unknown HIV status, or did not report their HIV testing history or the time of HIV testing.” – Why were these participants excluded? All HIV positive, or only HIV positive who were aware of their HIV status? What were the proportions of these subgroups in the sample (to be presented in the results). This is confusing when read with lines 82-90, consider presenting the process of exclusion and coding in a flow diagram for it to be clearer 7. P5L92 – there seems to be a typo for age groups, both are <29 8. The concept of “sigheh” should be briefly explained for international readership 9. P5L96-97 “age at first drug use (<18 vs. ≥18), injection drug use (ever) (yes vs. no)”, this is confusing 10. Please check that the statistical analysis section is written in line with STROBE-RDS Statement item 12 11. P6L118 Please state reasons for exclusion from the analysis (and %) 12. Table 1 Sufficient/Insufficient knowledge should be defined more precisely (in the Methods section) 13. “Self-perceived risk of HIV” – reword to perceives personal risk as high? 14. Consider merging and simplifying Table 2 and 3 15. It should be stated what was the number of participants included in the final model in multivariate analysis presented in Table 3 and in footnotes also what was controlled for 16. Why were differences across cities not explored, would you expect them and reasons for that? 17. L149 typo 56.5% 18. Figure 1 Unclear labelling, please revise Reviewer #2: Overall this is a clear, well-structured and easy to read paper. The analysis seems sound. I have the following minor comments: Abstract The abstract is well-structured and clear. I would suggest changing to ‘…was greater among FSWs who used a condom at last sex…’ ‘at last sex’ should be used throughout the manuscript. Introduction The introduction provides a good overview of the literature. FSW is in brackets in line 58. Remove and spell out FSW when it is first used. I suggest adding some ambiguity to the statement that 70% of FSWs tested in 2015. As you write in the Discussion, this is likely inflated due to the recruitment method. You could also add that this study is not just an an update, but also an improvement as it uses RDS. Methods Are all the sampled cities listed? If so, I suggest ‘…cities in Iran, namely Bandar-…’ I understand that the sampling is described elsewhere, but perhaps add a sentence or two on seed selection etc. Was consent requested for the interview and for tested separately? If so, were there women who didn’t consent to being tested? Typo here: (≤29 vs. <29) Results The results section is very clearly written. I suggest not reporting p-values in the text. Discussion The discussion is clear and thorough. I suggest adding a little more on the effect of the Covid outbreak on both the conduct of the study, and likely impact on testing uptake. Line 180: ‘refer’, should it be prefer? Line 182: ‘Field’ should likely be a completely different word Line 185: ‘did not knowing’, suggest ‘were not knowing’ Line 197: suggest ‘were different from any other time and conditions’ I suggest adding the interview method to the limitations. Face-to-face interviews tend to lead to more social desirability bias, and its use may have inflated reported testing. Tables and figures The tables are generally very clear. Change the N and n to be clearer. Maybe ‘Total’ instead of N. And ‘Number tested past year’ instead of n. Figure 1 needs a label on the y-axis. I suggest rounding the percentages to the nearest whole number. Decimal places suggest a level of accuracy that your sample size doesn’t provide. This applies to all percentages reported in the paper. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-23-01726R1HIV testing and its associated factors among Female Sex Workers in Iran in 2020: finding from a respondent-driven sampling surveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sharifi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 10 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This manuscript has improved since the last revision. However, some shortcomings persist. 1. The "study design and setting" now has good study design details. It lacks the study settings elements. 2. In the statistical section, please cite the software used (Stata and RDS-Analyst). 3. For tables 2 and 3, please indicate in the caption whether these are weighted or unweighted analyses. 4. Figure 1, is it possible to show both weighted and unweighted prevalence? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors seem to have addressed my comments. Overall, they added clarity to their methodological and statistical approach, which, together with additional elaboration on some points in the Discussion section increased the quality of the manuscript in my opinion. However, there are still some language unclarities in the Abstract e.g. L20 “(RDS) about”, L35 “the odds …was more” and throughout the text, so I suggest them to revise the manuscript carefully for such details and correct as appropriate. Reviewer #2: I would like to commend the authors for addressing all of my and the other reviewer's comments. The two sets of age and income variables now in the tables are confusing. I suggest using them as numerical variables only. Some minor language notes: Describe odds as 'higher' or 'lower', not 'more or 'less'. Please add any abbreiviations to the table footnotes (I see MMT, perhaps there are others). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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HIV testing and its associated factors among Female Sex Workers in Iran in 2020: finding from a respondent-driven sampling survey PONE-D-23-01726R2 Dear Dr. Sharifi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Orvalho Augusto, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-23-01726R2 HIV testing and its associated factors among Female Sex Workers in Iran in 2020: finding from a respondent-driven sampling survey Dear Dr. Sharifi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Orvalho Augusto Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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