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PONE-D-23-06606Exploring the evolution and function of Canoe’s intrinsically disordered region in linking cell-cell junctions to the cytoskeleton during embryonic morphogenesisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Peifer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 26 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We thank Tony Perdue of the Biology Imaging Center for confocal imaging advice and support. We are grateful to Zuhayr Alam, Victoria Williams, and Anna Dibattista for technical assistance. This work was supported by NIH R35 GM118096 to M.P. Work in the Dowen lab is supported by NIH R35 GM137985. The authors declare no competing financial interests.” We note that you have provided funding information that is currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript attempts to identify the role of IDRs in Canoe and Afadin by performing an indepth structure analysis along with experiments of mutants in vivo. The work in the manuscript is carried out in a rigorous manner with good controls and enough n values along with the relevant statistics. I recommend the manuscript for publication with a few minor additions suggested below. The authors find that the IDRs diverged more rapidly as compared to the well defined domains. One caveat in the study is whether the truncated canoe protein is expressed in the mutants and that was not ascertainable due to the absence of a suitable antibody. In general the analysis of the different mutants is done well, just one analysis which would have been nice to add is the lethality of the heterozygous mutants themselves and an analysis of heteroallelic combinations to further emphasize the complementation between domains of the mutants. This is not essential but a discussion on this complementation will help understand the function of different domains. This will also help impart an important function to the IDRs. Since the orientation of the embryos is different directions, it is hard to decipher the phenotypes being described in the figures. I request the authors to as far as possible choose sample images in the same orientation. Is it possible that the severe defect seen in the canoe mutants in the IDR domain occurs due to partial dominant negative defects. Heterozygous allele embryonic lethality at different temperatures would have been useful to assess this effect. Also is it known if these mutants can all be rescued by addition of a duplication of the locus or a transgene with the endogenous promoter? This will help delineate the impact of off target mutations in the alleles on the phenotypes. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors have extensively investigated the Drosophila Canoe protein and its vertebrate ortholog Afadin using bioinformatic and genetic analyses. The paper is well written and the data are well presented. Reviewer #3: Gurley et al. investigated the evolutional conservation and function of the intrinsically disordered region (IDR) of Canoe/Afadin in this paper. Using bioinformatics, they found that each of Canoe and Afadin has multiple sequence motifs that are conserved over shorter evolutionary periods. Analysis of zygotic and maternal/zygotic mutants of canoe suggested that IDR is important for Canoe's protein function. These results shed new light on a relatively unexplored region of Canoe/Afadin and provide a new starting point of future research. Minor points and suggestions 1. Discussion pp. 37-38, lines. 850-865 The logic supporting the conclusion that IDR is important for Canoe function is not easy to follow. This section of the Discussion (and related part) should be rewritten so that the conclusion is convincingly acceptable. My understanding is as follows: Zygotic mutant data indicate that prematurely truncated proteins have a dominant-negative effect, suggesting that IDR-truncated proteins may escape from nonsense-mediate mRNA decay in the zygotic mutants. This suggests that these molecules are also expressed in the maternal/zygotic mutants but the mutants exhibit a severe phenotype comparable to that of the null mutant, strongly suggesting an essential role of IDR. 2. Figs. 9G-J, 10B, 12I-N, 14A-B It is difficult to compare differences between mutants in phenotypic severity at a glance. I would suggest that the authors use a stacked vertical bar chart (100% cumulative bar chart). 3. Fig. 6I Using AlphaFold and AlphaFold-Multimer, it is predicted that the conserved region of Afadin (1403-1455) forms an alpha-helix and interacts with alpha-E-catenin M3. Since alpha-E-catenin is an important tension transducer of adherens junctions, it would be useful to discuss whether its interaction with Afadin affects its conformation, dimerization state, and binding to other alpha-E-catenin-binding partners (such as beta-catenin, vinculin, and F-actin). Typographical error p. 26, l.582-583 seems to be repetitive. "comparing one of our putative null alleles with an early stop codon, cnoR10, with one of our alleles with the alleles with the strong phenotype, cnoR17." ********** 6. 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Exploring the evolution and function of Canoe’s intrinsically disordered region in linking cell-cell junctions to the cytoskeleton during embryonic morphogenesis PONE-D-23-06606R1 Dear Dr. Peifer Mark, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Giovanni Messina Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-06606R1 Exploring the evolution and function of Canoe’s intrinsically disordered region in linking cell-cell junctions to the cytoskeleton during embryonic morphogenesis Dear Dr. Peifer: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Giovanni Messina Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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