Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 9, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-09299A lightweight YOLOv7 insulator defect detection algorithm based on DSC-SE PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 22 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study proposed a lightweight YOLOv7 for defect detection of insulator, which is a very interesting topic. The paper shows some state-of-the-art results in the application of computer vision. However, the paper should be polished and some descriptions should be more understandable. To be concrete, following are the comments for the authors: 1. The sentence “Unfortunately, manual inspection techniques are ineffective due to the constraints of the distribution range and environment of overhead transmission lines, and it is hardly feasible to satisfy the demands of insulator inspection by manual inspection alone.” is not easily understood. What is the situation of “environment of overhead transmission lines” in the way of manual inspection? 2. It is suggested to enrich the big picture of using YOLO detectors in defect detection. Many latest papers are recommended to be added as the references: (1) Rui Zhang, Chuanbo Wen, SOD-YOLO: A Small Target Defect Detection Algorithm for Wind Turbine Blades Based on Improved YOLOv5, Advanced Theory and Simulations, 5, 2100631, 2022 (2) Qiwen Qiu, Denvid Lau, Real-time detection of cracks in tiled sidewalks using YOLO-based method applied to unmanned aerial vehicle (UAV) images, Automation in Construction, 147, 104745, 2023. (3) Andrei-Alexandru Tulbure, Adrian-Alexandru Tulbure, Eva-Henrietta Dulf, A review on modern defect detection models using DCNNs – Deep convolutional neural networks, Journal of Advanced Research, 35, 33-48, 2022. 3. The introduction does not review the feasibility and advantages of YOLOv7-tiny when using in UAV. A lot of terms such as “high model computational complexity”, “DSC-SE module”, “VOVGSCSP module” should be explained. For a reader from other fields, these technical expressions may be not easily understood. 4. In section 2.1, please mention the functionalities of “ELAN and MP structures”. Besides, details of YOLOv5 should be included to clearly show the improvements from YOLOv7. 5. The number of sub-section titles is wrongly organized. 6. Is it needed to place a reference for In Fig. 1? 7. For sentence “In addition, the feature map processed by the backbone network contains a large amount of target information, but the shallow network has a small perceptual field, limited extraction capability, and tends to view local information, making it difficult to perceive and extract the input image information comprehensively”, please demonstrate the limitations of backbone network technically in a graph. 8. How come the initial learning rate of 0.01 for training is set? 9. Increase the size of fonts in Fig. 6 as they are too small. 10. In Fig. 8, please describe more details of the defects under evaluation. How is the situation of cable can be defined as defect? 11. Suggest a note of the proposed model in Fig. 7, not just writing “Ours”. Regarding this comparison, why not train more previous YOLO versions and compare them all together in this graph. So the data would be more convincing and informative. 12. In Table 4, it is suggested to show the deviation of testing results for each model. 13. In Fig. 8, how do you collect the complex background images? Using UAV or other devices. 14. May be important to discuss the detectability of defect. How small the defect can be found by YOLOv7-tiny? Reviewer #2: This paper proposes a lightweight YOLOv7 insulator defect detection algorithm to address the defect detection speed and high model complexity, which designs a lightweight DCS-SE module and uses GSConv for feature fusion. Generally, this work achieves speed and accuracy improvements. 1. English expression in this paper needs better polishing. 2. There are two sections 2 please check it. 3. Many abbreviations are used in this paper, complete spellings should be given in the first mention. 4. In experimental parts, it is better to compare with more insulator defect detection methods. 5. Please show computational complexity analysis on the proposed method. 6. Recently, some insulator detection methods based on YOLO, which should be introduce in this paper. D. Sadykova, D. Pernebayeva, M. Bagheri and A. James, "IN-YOLO: Real-Time Detection of Outdoor High Voltage Insulators Using UAV Imaging," IEEE Transactions on Power Delivery, vol. 35, no. 3, pp. 1599-1601, 2020. Y. Li, M. Ni, Y. Lu. Insulator defect detection for power grid based on light correction enhancement and YOLOv5 model, Energy Reports, 2022, 13(8): 807-814. Z. Yang, Z. Xu and Y. Wang, "Bidirection-Fusion-YOLOv3: An Improved Method for Insulator Defect Detection Using UAV Image," IEEE Transactions on Instrumentation and Measurement, vol. 71, pp. 1-8, 2022. Reviewer #3: The author presents an algorithm for detecting insulator defects using YOLOV7 and attention mechanism, which was a popular approach three or four years ago. The paper’s primary objective was to reduce the model’s complexity while maintaining detection accuracy. Real-time model performance was evaluated on a resource-limited platform (Nano), which supports the conclusion of the paper. To improve the manuscript’s quality, the author is advised to make modifications in the following areas. 1. DSC, SE, GSConv, and EIoU are all mature and successful modules/loss, and that are also frequently used to improve the YOLO structure. However, the author needs to explain the applicability of these modules and the EIoU loss to the specific insulator detection task and how they can improve detection performance while reducing computational complexity. In other words, what makes insulator detection different from other generic object detection tasks that necessitates the use of these particular technologies? 2. The algorithm evaluated in the experiment is too traditional, such as Faster RCNN. The author should compare newer lightweight networks developed within the past three years, particularly those that have been designed for insulator detection. Furthermore, I have reservations regarding the efficacy of Faster RCNN in the context of insulator detection. 3. The conducted ablation experiment is insufficient in shedding light on the significance of the VOVGSCSP module. It would be interesting to see the results of a model trained without the VOVGSCSP module to ascertain the module’s contribution to the overall results. 4. In the experiment, the author employed data augmentation to augment the dataset. However, there was a lack of proper data isolation during the division of training and verification sets, resulting in the possibility of duplicated images from the same original image in both sets. Such an experiment lacks persuasiveness. Additionally, the study did not include a test set, and all the reported results were based on the verification set, which indicates a relatively lax experimental design. 5.The introduction section has less content on insulator defect detection. There are several issues with the article that need to be addressed: 1. There are several grammatical and spelling errors throughout the text, such as “pychar,” which the author should carefully review. 2. Some of the formulas in the text are not centered properly, and the length of some tables extends beyond the page width. 3. Many of the characters in the experimental results are difficult to read, especially in Figure 6. 4. The best results should be highlighted to provide clarity. 5. The source of the data set should be referenced. 6. The format of the references is messy. Reviewer #4: I believe that this work deals with a relevant and current theme and has good potential for publication. It presents some points of originality, especially regarding the adaptation of the architecture of the YOLOv7 model. In addition, the author managed to reduce the computational cost of the referred model and obtained better results than other works present in the literature, with an accuracy of insulator defect detection of 95.2% for the presented dataset (CPLID). It was even possible to use the Jetson Nano computer to evaluate the results. In my evaluation, the weakness of the paper lies in the superficial way in which the author of the paper presented the results very much. It is necessary to reevaluate the writing of the whole chapter 4. Figures 6 and 7, for example, are practically illegible and the description of the results is not adequate. For Figure 8, I believe it would be interesting to present a larger number of images and demonstrate examples that the model did not perform well. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Qiwen Qiu Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-23-09299R1 A lightweight YOLOv7 insulator defect detection algorithm based on DSC-SE PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 11 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study makes improvements in the lightweight YOLOv7 for defect detection, which is acceptable for publication. From the revised paper, some presentation typos can be avoided: 1. Please give descriptions of “(a), (b), (c), and (d)” in Fig. 10. 2. Journal names in some references [3, 27, …] are missing. Please also check the spelling of author names in some references [22, 27, …] Reviewer #2: Based on the revision, this paper is improved. However, the reference format should be re-phrased further. Reviewer #3: All my problems have been addressed well in this revised manuscript and response letter, and I have no more comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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