Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-20412Same-day versus rapid ART initiation in HIV-positive individuals presenting with symptoms of tuberculosis: protocol for an open-label randomized non-inferiority trial in Lesotho and MalawiPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gerber, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Comments raised by 2 reviewers: Please provide more information on the rational and justification for a 10% non-inferiority margin. Additional comments from Reviewer 1 1) “Logistic regression models the probability of an outcome, such as the probability of HIV viral suppression. That may be in line with your goal of comparing proportions (line 230) but it does not agree with testing for difference in risk (line 235). Odds ratios are known to overestimate risk (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1136/bmj.316.7136.989) so if you want to compare risk differences you will need to switch to a different statistical method, such as a log binomial or Poisson model (with a modification to obtain appropriate confidence intervals; see https://doi.org/10.1093/aje/kwh090). Otherwise, the statement of risk difference will need to be changed to match the logistic model. The same approach is mentioned for secondary endpoints as well, so please modify the subsequent paragraph to match any changes.” 2) (lines 156-157) Please provide more information on the randomization process. For instance, what specific or range of block sizes are used? Were there any algorithms used or software packages used? Additional points raised by reviewer 2 1) Explain better the rationale for conducting the study on both people who were ART naïve and with ART interruption 2) Consider to introduce a stratified randomization or sensitivity analysis stratified by ART naïve vs. ART interrupted. 3) incorporate more details on trial intervention and describe the heterogeneity of HIV care practices, particularly for ART initiation. 4) the authors should consider adding more detail about how they will handle OIs, in particular in how intracranial infection was ruled out during study enrollment. 5) A better description of the standard for defining and tracing lost to follow-up patients is needed Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 18 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Odds ratios are known to overestimate risk (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1136/bmj.316.7136.989) so if you want to compare risk differences you will need to switch to a different statistical method, such as a log binomial or Poisson model (with a modification to obtain appropriate confidence intervals; see https://doi.org/10.1093/aje/kwh090). Otherwise, the statement of risk difference will need to be changed to match the logistic model. The same approach is mentioned for secondary endpoints as well, so please modify the subsequent paragraph to match any changes.” 2) (lines 156-157) Please provide more information on the randomization process. For instance, what specific or range of block sizes are used? Were there any algorithms used or software packages used? Adapted from reviewer 2 1) Explain better the rationale for conducting the study on both people who were ART naïve and with ART interruption 2) Consider to introduce a stratified randomization or sensitivity analysis stratified by ART naïve vs. ART interrupted. 3) incorporate more details on trial intervention and describe the heterogeneity of HIV care practices, particularly for ART initiation. 4) the authors should consider adding more detail about how they will handle OIs, in particular in how intracranial infection was ruled out during study enrollment. 5) A better description of the standard for defining and tracing lost to follow-up patients is needed [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: I think this protocol is generally very well written and provides a good justification for the study. The methodology appears feasible to me. The SPIRIT checklist is provided and the trial is registered. I have a few minor comments in the specific comments section below. My biggest concern that I wanted to touch on here regards the choice of statistical method. Logistic regression models the probability of an outcome, such as the probability of HIV viral suppression. That may be in line with your goal of comparing proportions (line 230) but it does not agree with testing for difference in risk (line 235). Odds ratios are known to overestimate risk (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1136/bmj.316.7136.989) so if you want to compare risk differences you will need to switch to a different statistical method, such as a log binomial or Poisson model (with a modification to obtain appropriate confidence intervals; see https://doi.org/10.1093/aje/kwh090). Otherwise, the statement of risk difference will need to be changed to match the logistic model. The same approach is mentioned for secondary endpoints as well, so please modify the subsequent paragraph to match any changes. Specific comments: 1. (lines 156-157) I think it would be good to provide a little more information on the randomization process. For instance, what specific or range of block sizes are used? Were there any algorithms used or software packages used? 2. (lines 174, 175, 202) "is" should be "are". I didn't notice any other subject verb disagreement, but I may have missed something. it might be worth just checking this over before resubmitting since PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts. 3. Somewhere in the manuscript, I think it would be good to provide more information on why a 10% non-inferiority margin is appropriate. In any non-inferiority test, the choice of margin is key, so I think some justification for this choice is really important. Reviewer #2: The findings of this study will be impactful in providing clarity to the HIV care provider communities following the WHO guidelines to timely and safely start people living with HIV on treatment, bringing out both personal and public health benefits. The study has clinical equipoise to conduct a randomized controlled trial, and the study methods is appropriate and feasible. Several suggestions for minor revision and study planning: - One of the eligibility criteria is ART naïve or interruption for 90 days or more. I am concerned whether people who have interrupted their ART could have developed drug resistance, which might result in failure to achieve viral suppression (primary endpoint). If drug resistance test needed to be conducted before ART initiation, it could result in delayed in ART initiation and affect time to ART initiation (secondary endpoint). The authors should clarify whether the drug resistance test was conducted and provide the rationale for conducting the study on both people who were ART naïve and with ART interruption. The authors should also consider conducting a sensitivity analysis stratified by ART naïve vs. ART interrupted. - While I recognize that the research team did not intervene in routine care and the procedures were not standardized between study sites, the authors should incorporate more details on trial intervention and describe the heterogeneity of HIV care practices, particularly for ART initiation, which is currently missing in the manuscript. The authors should also clarify what they meant by routine ART initiation procedure, as “routine” can be interpreted differently by different readers, especially since differentiated service models are common in Malawi and Lesotho. Additionally, the authors should consider adding more detail about how intracranial infection was ruled out during study enrollment. - The author mentioned in line 182 that “the study team … documents the routine procedures and results.” The authors should consider disseminating these documents in future research finding publications. Sharing the components of the trial interventions and how they were implemented will provide readily available information to help other providers/implementers adapt the trial interventions to their settings. - In line 219, the authors described the tracing procedure. The authors should include how many attempts the research team would make to trace the participants before classifying them as being lost to follow-up. - In line 235, the authors should provide the rationale behind using non-inferiority margin of 10%. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Same-day versus rapid ART initiation in HIV-positive individuals presenting with symptoms of tuberculosis: protocol for an open-label randomized non-inferiority trial in Lesotho and Malawi PONE-D-23-20412R1 Dear Dr. Gerber, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Omar Sued, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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