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Original SubmissionMay 8, 2023
Decision Letter - Brenda A Wilson, Editor

PONE-D-23-13858Babies, Bugs and Brains: How the early microbiome influences infant brain and behavior developmentPLOS ONE

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Both reviewers noted a number of issues that if adequately addressed would significantly improve the manuscript. Please revise the manuscript accordingly.

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Reviewer #1: Hunter S. and colleagues submitted an original manuscript describing how the microbiome in early infancy (around 4-5 months of age on average in human babies) influences the brain development and behaviour. They collected useful data from a total of 40 babies in two different centres. From their preliminary exploratory study they honestly suggest potential important aspects of the gut-microbiome-brain interactions that could impact the infant brain development and behaviours in early and potentially also later life stages. They in fact have highlighted some characteristics of the microbiota composition and functions that could be important in this phenomenon.

I have couple of questions:

1. the samples have been collected and the babies have been screened during the pandemic (the recruitment started late 2019 and finished in October 2020): could the authors comment on perhaps some effects of the pandemics on both microbiota composition (heavy usage of masks and disinfectants, day cares were closed -most likely also in Canada- so babies were exposed less to other babies/individuals outside their own family and infections in day care settings) and perhaps also on the brain development of these babies? do similar data exist on other cohorts collected perhaps not during the pandemic that could be useful to compare?

2. are data on the maternal diet available that could be cofounding effect of the babies microbiota/brain development and behaviour? if not, could the authors comment this point in the discussion?

3. maybe I missed it, but could the data being correlated also on the only breast milk feeding or mixed feeding or only solid food feeding? It was clear to me that data on the solid food introduction were available but it is not so clear to me at which extend the babies could be classified in the 3 groups I have mentioned here, if it is possible at all. If not, could the authors comment on the importance of diet in this early life stage and on the microbiota and brain development and behaviours.

The manuscript is very well written and easy to follow and it would be interesting to expand such a study in a bigger one and collect data from the same babies also later on in life to follow the trajectory of their microbiota and brain development.

Reviewer #2: The authors aimed to investigate associations between infant microbiome and early cognitive development. The authors used three measures of early cognitive development (Point and Gaze, fNIRs, and EEG) and tested its association with gut microbiome abundance and diversity, measured by sequencing of the fecal microbiome. Although the sample size is small, the authors identified some interesting associations that would be of great interest for further studies. For example, Point and Gaze test success in infants is associated with increased Actinobacteria and reduced Firmicutes. The study is well-designed and analyzed, and the authors are careful when drawing conclusions. I would recommend its publication after the below comments are addressed.

Comments

1. The title alludes to a causative influence of microbes on early brain development. I would suggest changing it to more accurately describe the data and conclusion of the current study.

2. References would be helpful for the statements on line 484 - “to Bifidobacterium was unexpected, as this genus is relevant for brain development, host immunity etc.”

3. Line 540-543. The pentose phosphate pathway identified from the pathway analysis belongs to the gut microbes, and thus should not be directly involved in brain glucose metabolism. The authors should clarify how microbial pentose phosphate pathway relate to brain.

4. Minor comment: The order of findings in the result/conclusion section is different from that described in the abstract. Maybe rearrange in abstract.

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Revision 1

The following answer is the same found in the 'Response to Reviewers' file submitted in the attached files:

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29 June 2023

Dear Editor,

We are pleased to resubmit our revised manuscript PONE-D-23-13858 entitled “Babies, Bugs and Brains: How the early microbiome associates with infant brain and behavior development” originally submitted May 6, 2023.

We are grateful for the excellent, rapid, and thorough critique provided by the Reviewers. This subsequent revised version has addressed their queries, including possible confounding effects, corrected the sample collection dates and added and corrected the bibliography. We have now addressed all the comments in the revised version which we feel has improved the manuscript. Please find attached a point-by-point response to how we addressed all their comments.

Once again, we thank the Reviewers for their thoughtful critique, editorial suggestions, as well as supportive comments. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Sebastian Hunter

Reviewers Comments:

Reviewer #1

Hunter S. and colleagues submitted an original manuscript describing how the microbiome in early infancy (around 4-5 months of age on average in human babies) influences the brain development and behaviour. They collected useful data from a total of 40 babies in two different centres. From their preliminary exploratory study they honestly suggest potential important aspects of the gut-microbiome-brain interactions that could impact the infant brain development and behaviours in early and potentially also later life stages. They in fact have highlighted some characteristics of the microbiota composition and functions that could be important in this phenomenon.

- We thank the Reviewer for this kind comment.

I have couple of questions:

1. The samples have been collected and the babies have been screened during the pandemic (the recruitment started late 2019 and finished in October 2020): could the authors comment on perhaps some effects of the pandemics on both microbiota composition (heavy usage of masks and disinfectants, day cares were closed -most likely also in Canada- so babies were exposed less to other babies/individuals outside their own family and infections in day care settings) and perhaps also on the brain development of these babies? do similar data exist on other cohorts collected perhaps not during the pandemic that could be useful to compare?

- We thank the Reviewer for this comment. The dates incorporated in the original manuscript regarding the data collection from the fecal samples were unfortunately incorrect (thanks for catching this). The correct dates were between February 15, 2019, and February 24, 2020. All data was collected prior to the pandemic (March 11, 2020, COVID-19 was declared a global pandemic) (Lines 136, 161-163, and 192-195).

2. Are data on the maternal diet available that could be cofounding effect of the babies microbiota/brain development and behaviour? if not, could the authors comment this point in the discussion?

- We thank the Reviewer for this comment. Regarding maternal diet we didn’t collect data, but we explored the possible confounding effects it could have in our results, as the mother’s diet can influence both the infant’s microbiome and its development. It was identified as an interesting factor to include in future analysis (addressed on Line 542-550).

3. Maybe I missed it, but could the data being correlated also on the only breast milk feeding or mixed feeding or only solid food feeding? It was clear to me that data on the solid food introduction were available but it is not so clear to me at which extend the babies could be classified in the 3 groups I have mentioned here, if it is possible at all. If not, could the authors comment on the importance of diet in this early life stage and on the microbiota and brain development and behaviours.

- We thank the Reviewer for this comment. Regarding infants feeding and introduction to solid foods, we included these variables in another statistical model used for the association analysis and didn’t identify any significant difference in any of the variables after FDR correction. Nevertheless, when we compared the top hits from the models before FDR correction, they were highly similar (with over 80% overlap) for the BEAT_FL and BEAT_ALL variables (the only variables with statistically significant variables in the first model). This indicates that due to small sample sizes the statistical test didn’t have enough power after FDR correction, but the tendencies were mostly the same. This observation has been added to the discussion (addressed on Line 532-541).

The manuscript is very well written and easy to follow and it would be interesting to expand such a study in a bigger one and collect data from the same babies also later on in life to follow the trajectory of their microbiota and brain development.

- We thank the Reviewer for this kind comment.

Reviewer #2

The authors aimed to investigate associations between infant microbiome and early cognitive development. The authors used three measures of early cognitive development (Point and Gaze, fNIRs, and EEG) and tested its association with gut microbiome abundance and diversity, measured by sequencing of the fecal microbiome. Although the sample size is small, the authors identified some interesting associations that would be of great interest for further studies. For example, Point and Gaze test success in infants is associated with increased Actinobacteria and reduced Firmicutes. The study is well-designed and analyzed, and the authors are careful when drawing conclusions.

- We thank the Reviewer for this kind comment.

I would recommend its publication after the below comments are addressed.

1. The title alludes to a causative influence of microbes on early brain development. I would suggest changing it to more accurately describe the data and conclusion of the current study.

- We thank the Reviewer for this comment. We changed the title to ‘Babies, Bugs and Brains: How the early microbiome associates with infant brain and behavior development', to not allude to a causative influence of the microbiome, but to the observed associations between the microbiome and brain development (Line 1-2).

2. References would be helpful for the statements on line 484 - “to Bifidobacterium was unexpected, as this genus is relevant for brain development, host immunity etc.”

- We thank the Reviewer for this comment. We added references as suggested, to reinforce the beneficial properties this genus has for brain development and host immunity (Line 486-489).

3. Line 540-543. The pentose phosphate pathway identified from the pathway analysis belongs to the gut microbes, and thus should not be directly involved in brain glucose metabolism. The authors should clarify how microbial pentose phosphate pathway relate to brain.

- We thank the Reviewer for this comment. We removed the previous statement of the importance of pentose phosphate pathway that was related to the brain glucose metabolism and replaced it with the microbial importance. In the gut this pathway is important due to the metabolism of pentose sugars from diet fibers, which end as short chain fatty acids (SCFA), metabolites with neuroactive active properties that can modulate the brain and the blood brain barrier (Line 567-571).

4. Minor comment: The order of findings in the result/conclusion section is different from that described in the abstract. Maybe rearrange in abstract.

- We thank the Reviewer for this comment. The abstract was rearranged to follow the same order as the one presented in the results.

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- We thank the Academic Editor for this comment. We would like to change the Acknowledgement and Funding section, as there was funding information in the Acknowledgement section that should be in the Funding section. The current version of the Acknowledgement and Funding sections are as follow:

o Acknowledgements: We thank Nicole Sugden for her leadership role in collecting the fNIRS data. We also thank the families for their participation in this study. B.B.F. is a CIFAR Senior Fellow and a University of British Columbia Peter Wall Distinguished Professor. J.F.W is on the advisory committee of the Brain Mind and Consciousness CIFAR program and a University of British Columbia Killam Professor. L.J.T. is a CIFAR Senior Fellow and a McMaster Distinguished University Fellow. S.H. is supported by the International Tuition Award at UBC. E.F. was supported by a Canadian graduate scholarship from SSHRC, an Ontario Graduate Scholarship, as well as an NSERC CREATE award in Complex Dynamics.

o Funding Statement: This research was funded by grants to JFW, LJT and BBF from the Canadian Institute for Advanced Research (CIFAR, https://cifar.ca/) (FL-000981-CF, FL-000982-CF, & FL-000983-CF). Work in B.B.F.’s lab is also supported by a Canadian Institute for Health Research (CIHR) Foundation Grant, in J.F.W.’s lab by a Natural Sciences and Engineering Research Council of Canada (NSERC) Discovery Grant and a Social Sciences and Humanities Research Council of Canada (SSHRC) Insight Grant, and in L.J.T.’s lab by grants from CIHR, NSERC and SSHRC. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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- We thank the Academic Editor for this comment. The repository information of our data will be provided at acceptance of the manuscript.

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- We thank the Academic Editor for this comment. The ethics statement was added as an item in the Methods of the manuscript with the full name of the ethics committee and the identification number (Line 148-151).

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- We thank the Academic Editor for this comment. The reference list was updated with new entries that were added in the extended discussion section in the correct style (Vancouver). The reference list was modified to follow PLOS guidelines, including only the first six authors followed by et al. The added or modified references are the following:

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Babies, Bugs and Brains: How the early microbiome associates with infant brain and behavior development

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