Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 8, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-13858Babies, Bugs and Brains: How the early microbiome influences infant brain and behavior developmentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hunter, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Both reviewers noted a number of issues that if adequately addressed would significantly improve the manuscript. Please revise the manuscript accordingly. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Hunter S. and colleagues submitted an original manuscript describing how the microbiome in early infancy (around 4-5 months of age on average in human babies) influences the brain development and behaviour. They collected useful data from a total of 40 babies in two different centres. From their preliminary exploratory study they honestly suggest potential important aspects of the gut-microbiome-brain interactions that could impact the infant brain development and behaviours in early and potentially also later life stages. They in fact have highlighted some characteristics of the microbiota composition and functions that could be important in this phenomenon. I have couple of questions: 1. the samples have been collected and the babies have been screened during the pandemic (the recruitment started late 2019 and finished in October 2020): could the authors comment on perhaps some effects of the pandemics on both microbiota composition (heavy usage of masks and disinfectants, day cares were closed -most likely also in Canada- so babies were exposed less to other babies/individuals outside their own family and infections in day care settings) and perhaps also on the brain development of these babies? do similar data exist on other cohorts collected perhaps not during the pandemic that could be useful to compare? 2. are data on the maternal diet available that could be cofounding effect of the babies microbiota/brain development and behaviour? if not, could the authors comment this point in the discussion? 3. maybe I missed it, but could the data being correlated also on the only breast milk feeding or mixed feeding or only solid food feeding? It was clear to me that data on the solid food introduction were available but it is not so clear to me at which extend the babies could be classified in the 3 groups I have mentioned here, if it is possible at all. If not, could the authors comment on the importance of diet in this early life stage and on the microbiota and brain development and behaviours. The manuscript is very well written and easy to follow and it would be interesting to expand such a study in a bigger one and collect data from the same babies also later on in life to follow the trajectory of their microbiota and brain development. Reviewer #2: The authors aimed to investigate associations between infant microbiome and early cognitive development. The authors used three measures of early cognitive development (Point and Gaze, fNIRs, and EEG) and tested its association with gut microbiome abundance and diversity, measured by sequencing of the fecal microbiome. Although the sample size is small, the authors identified some interesting associations that would be of great interest for further studies. For example, Point and Gaze test success in infants is associated with increased Actinobacteria and reduced Firmicutes. The study is well-designed and analyzed, and the authors are careful when drawing conclusions. I would recommend its publication after the below comments are addressed. Comments 1. The title alludes to a causative influence of microbes on early brain development. I would suggest changing it to more accurately describe the data and conclusion of the current study. 2. References would be helpful for the statements on line 484 - “to Bifidobacterium was unexpected, as this genus is relevant for brain development, host immunity etc.” 3. Line 540-543. The pentose phosphate pathway identified from the pathway analysis belongs to the gut microbes, and thus should not be directly involved in brain glucose metabolism. The authors should clarify how microbial pentose phosphate pathway relate to brain. 4. Minor comment: The order of findings in the result/conclusion section is different from that described in the abstract. Maybe rearrange in abstract. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Francesca Ronchi Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Babies, Bugs and Brains: How the early microbiome associates with infant brain and behavior development PONE-D-23-13858R1 Dear Dr. Hunter, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Brenda A Wilson, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): It appears that all previous reviewer concerns have been adequately addressed. |
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PONE-D-23-13858R1 Babies, Bugs and Brains: How the early microbiome associates with infant brain and behavior development Dear Dr. Hunter: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Brenda A Wilson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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