Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 14, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-04272Improving continence management for people with dementia in the community in Aotearoa, New Zealand: Protocol for a mixed methods studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Burholt, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have outlined a series of minor revisions and points that require clarification. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 14 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper describes a comprehensive programme of work in a hugely important, but under-explored area. I have a few minor comments/suggestions for the authors: • Please expand on how the work in Ref 16 provides a theoretical framework (line 190). • For objective 1 – please explain why this is limited to people receiving homecare. Presumably for pragmatic data availability reasons? • In Phase 2, the analysis of the focus groups focuses on identifying shared group understanding of policy ideals & language. Will it also specifically identify perceptions of effective strategies for promoting continence & managing incontinence (Aim ii)? • Consider using the word ‘toilet-use’ rather than ‘toileting’ – toileting is considered by some to be pejorative (although this might be cultural). Reviewer #2: Reviewer’s report: Improving continence management for people with dementia in the community in Aotearoa, New Zealand: Protocol for a mixed methods study This protocol paper proposes a study which seeks to examine the nature and extent of challenges and practices which are in operation in terms of continence care with the aim of improving confidence related outcomes for adults with dementia in Aotearoa, NZ. Is this a mixed methods study? The proposal looks like a sequential qualitative – quantitative design – is there a planned synthesis of the two methods planned? Introduction. The sentence on line 75 seems a little redundant or out of sequence. Id omit it having prespecified the local issue The statement at line 82-83 would benefit from a qualifying reference. Continence services & support: Is ref 16 specific to the proposed setting – in some jurisdictions there are systematized continence services and planned care delivery. Reference 29 is a little old more recent research is more contradictory. There seems to be consistency around FI & dementia -perhaps update this, particularly in light of the profound change in institutionalised older adult populations and the impact of aging in place? Are there data on incontinence on Maori attitudes, beliefs, understanding of incontinence and current management etc? Summary Line 145 – a generic or local statement? Ref 46 – has also been updated – particularly in the evaluation section. Phase 1: Please detail the frequency of RAI-HC assessment? In our system it is yearly – and this severely limits the ability to calculate incidence Have the accuracy of the continence variables been validated locally? Who collects the data? Sex, rather than gender – is gender collected in RAI-HC? Should mobility status not be included as a single variable? Phase 1 makes no mention of how incidence will be calculated or expressed Phase 2: this certainly “feels” like a mixed methods phase – please could the authors articulate how the quantitative policy review will aid the qual portion and how the synthesis will be approached? To what end will the product be put? Phase 3: this combines a secondary analysis of existing data combined with primary data collection. I wasn’t sure whether the primary data will be collected form PLWD with incontinence (and their carepartners) Have the proposed interview guides been tested for cultural appropriateness and meaning? On line 338 – I got confused as to the nature of the quant data in this phase – other than the detailed questionnaires and how these data might be used to construct participant profiles. Phase 4: how will the researchers ensure that the voice of the end users (PLWD / care partners Maori / non Maori) are not lost in the process? How will evidence informed interventions be promoted and preserved in the guidance? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Improving continence management for people with dementia in the community in Aotearoa, New Zealand: Protocol for a mixed methods study PONE-D-23-04272R1 Dear Dr. Burholt, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Andrew Harding, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for taking the time to revise and resubmit your manuscript based on the reviews. After reviewing your response to reviewer comments, and the revised manuscript, I am happy to recommend your manuscript for publication. This is important and robust research, and I look forward to seeing the findings once they are published. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-04272R1 Improving continence management for people with dementia in the community in Aotearoa, New Zealand: Protocol for a mixed methods study Dear Dr. Burholt: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Andrew Harding Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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