Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 22, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-11388Married women decision-making autonomy on health care utilization in high fertility sub-Saharan African countries: a multilevel analysis of recent Demographic and Health SurveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Negash, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kindly revise the manuscript in line with the reviewers’ comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General Comment: Although the paper is well written paper, there are a lot of grammatical errors that need to be attended to. I have pointed out a few to the authors, there are many to be attended to. Generally revision should be needed.The authors have done a good work. Also, the authors need to be consistent with their decimal separator. Abstract Authors need to indicate the lowest and highest prevalent countries Introduction Line 58: it should be depend not depends Line 60: Authors need to support this statement Line 61: Authors indicate findings implied that. Can authors state the region of these findings Line 69: Is education status not a component of socioeconomic position. Authors can say "Women’s decision with regard to the use of healthcare services may depend on their economic position, perception towards modern healthcare treatment, educational status, family size, perceived severity of illness, and previous experience of illness" Line 72: the aforementioned factors "have" frequently demarcated Line 73: Authors indicate "Additionally, various findings......but state only a source Line 78: Authors can add "most" to .....in the countries of SSA Line 84: Statement not clear Methods Study settings Line 98: delete "was" Line 101: replace Africa with SSA unless authors want to refocus their study area to Africa Line 130: Authors should introduce "On" not on Line 130-131: It's confusing Lines 224-226: should be relooked at The authors did not indicate if all the variables were statistically significant for the regression analysis. The p-values for the variables were not stated. This can be added to Table 2 Authors should mention the mathematical formula how to compute ICC and others? Discussion What are the implications of the prevalence in this study? The discussion section needs to be more focused on the implications Authors need to get literature that do not support their findings as well Line 284: What is the justification for the comprehensive nature of this study? Line 294: were should be deleted Recommendation Please minimize your recommendation hence the current one is too long Reviewer #2: First, I would like to appreciation for studying this interesting topic. Overall, the manuscript is good but I would like to forward my concerns and suggestions as follows, The authors should improve the quality of the writing throughout their manuscript. The manuscript would benefit from proof-reading for grammatical and typographical errors. The authors should provide some details on the justification of the study in terms of the study area (why you include high fertility sub-Saharan African countries and the implication of the problem) In the discussion section line 282-285, the author compared the findings with previous studies in terms of similarity or difference. However, the underlying causes for the discrepancies between studies need to be elaborated to increase the depth of the discussion and to allow readers to know more about the situation. Also, the authors should mention the public health importance of in the finding. The study claimed to take a multi-level approach in its statistical analysis. However, the idea of a ‘multi-level’ model in the paper seems somewhat different from classical multi-level models in the statistics literature. The fixed and random effects models required a more detailed concept about the model for better clarity. Line 182-184 , the authors write about terms like ICC, MOR in which the readers may not be familiar to readers who did not have a technical background. It is important to provide a simple and intuitive definition of such technical terms before they are applied. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Married women decision making autonomy on health care utilization in high fertility sub-Saharan African countries: a multilevel analysis of recent Demographic and Health Survey PONE-D-23-11388R1 Dear Dr. Wubshet, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have done a good job. However, I still think that it will need another round of English editing as there are some few mistakes. Reviewer #2: “Married women decision making autonomy on health care utilization in high fertility sub-Saharan African countries: a multilevel analysis of recent Demographic and Health Survey” Review decision: Accept The paper is based on a good broad study of married women decision making autonomy on health care utilization in high fertility sub-Saharan African countries: a multilevel analysis of recent Demographic and Health Survey Review decision: Accept The authors address my comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Fantu Mamo Aragaw ********** |
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PONE-D-23-11388R1 Married women decision making autonomy on health care utilization in high fertility sub-Saharan African countries: a multilevel analysis of recent Demographic and Health Survey Dear Dr. Negash: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Obasanjo Afolabi Bolarinwa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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