Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 20, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-14646 A risk scoring model of COVID-19 at hospital admission PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gomes , Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we have decided that your manuscript does not meet our criteria for publication and must therefore be rejected. Specifically: 1. The manuscript isn't organised scientifically, and the tables and figures isn't presented in academic style that are suitable for publication. 2. Lack of details re the setting and conduction of study and poor interpretation of results. I am sorry that we cannot be more positive on this occasion, but hope that you appreciate the reasons for this decision. Kind regards, Jiaxu Zeng, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-22-14646R1 A risk scoring model of COVID-19 at hospital admission PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gomes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 11/15/2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please note that Review 2 was provided by the Academic Editor, Yuyan Wang [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting well written manuscript on an important topic. In my opinion al comments have been answered so the paper can be published Reviewer #2: The authors used logistic regression to predict the death probability for inpatients diagnosed with COVID. The topic is interesting, however, the manuscript is not easy to read and the authors should refer to published articles to make the paper more rigorous not only in content but also in the presented results. Major: 1. I would suggest the authors look for some professional English editorial help to avoid grammar errors and make the manuscript fluent and easier to read. 2. Abstract: the Conclusion part is missing in Abstract. 3. The way the authors created the diagnoses score is unclear. More details (or specific example how the scores are creasted) are needed. 4. The context in the manuscript is too messy. Please refer to the published paper (from PLOS ONE or any other academic journals) to clean up the Methods and Results section. Specifically, a. Row 76 to 79: it will be good to have a data flowchart to reflect the subject number change by inclusion or exclusion creation. b. Row 90-99: it’s unnecessary to show the variable name from original dataset c. Row 101: Table 1 are unnecessary and can be moved to supplementary tables if the authors insist to keep them. d. Row 108: Table 2, there are too many facilities and it would better to use a bar plot to show the number of patients and death rate. e. Table 3, 4 and 5 can be combined as one descriptive table and should be placed in Results section. f. Row 125: Table 6 can be merged into Table 2 and presented as plot as well. g. Row 152: Table 7 isn’t presented in academic style. ORs wit CIs are better. h. Why the presented results content are different in Table 8 (Df/Deviance/Resid.Df…) and Table 9 (Estimate/Std./Error)? These results are not presented in standard way. No one should directly present formula and output results from analytical software. Please refer to the published paper to make it more rigorous. i. Row 169: could you cite reference to use “percentage by dividing each coefficient by the sum of all coefficients” to describe the variable importance? j. Row 179: Table 11 needs to be revised like Table 9, and the interpretation needs improvement. k. Row 223: Figure 5 and Figure 6 can be merged as one plot to show the difference of the boundary line between male and female. l. Row 242: Table 12 can be transformed as a plot using Age as x-axis and probability as y-axis. Then it will be easier to compare among different profile and gender groups. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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| Revision 2 |
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PONE-D-22-14646R2A risk scoring model of COVID-19 at hospital admissionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gomes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please revise. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 22 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Robert Jeenchen Chen, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: A risk scoring model of COVID-19 at hospital admission. This paper analyzed how patient baseline characteristics and healthcare units’ characteristics could impact the mortality of covid in Portugal. A scoring method was utilized before the logistic regression. Overall, this paper needs to be better written in English. I could only understand ~80% of this paper. Hence, the authors should seek professional help in the wording, grammar, and correcting the typos. The paper models the probability of survival on both patient baseline characteristics/ and the characteristics of healthcare institutes. A score transformation was used on the predictive variables. However, is it necessary? Logistic regression can model both categorical and continuous predictive variables. And with an l-1 penalty, it can further handle variable selection. Authors should explain the motivation and benefit of using this scoring pre-process method. Method section where variables were transformed into continuous scores, please add some explanations in the context. Despite citing two articles, I believe these methods are less well-known than the other statistical methods. Thus more details could help readers understand and even replicate this research. Method: the hcu beds were excluded; however, such exclusion was not well justified. Method: was modeled as categorical? In table 1, the author chose ten levels for age. Suggest keeping the level of categorical beyond 4. Otherwise, it might be more beneficial to model it as a continuous variable directly. If it was modeled as continuous, suggest reporting the mean/sd and Median(Range) for this variable in Table 1. Data- 52,400 patients but 52390 episodes? What’s the difference between the ID and patients? Data - hcu pressure(average hcu occupancy rate); what is the definition or math formula for hcu occupancy rate? Is it derived from stay duration and the number of beds? P5-R13: please define the weights-of-evidence transformation (WOE) method. It would be helpful to add more details. Table 1- only three variables were reported; what about the HCU-related two variables? It would be more straightforward to report the variable by event, i.e., two columns in the table as death or survival; cell value could be either mean/sd + median/range or percentage. Figure 1- add numbers being excluded from each step. Figure 3- Title mismatch legends. Is the blue bar number of occupation rate or healthcare unit pressure? Please reconcile; only one name is needed for one variable. Minor comments: 1. the manuscript needs to be better formatted; for example, rows 81, 85, 102, 144, and 271 are in different fonts from the rest of the paper. Please reconcile it. 3. Variables were bolded in font but not needed. 4. Variable names: hcu pressure could be replaced by a better/clear variable name. 5. It would be interesting to see how the covariates would predict the time from admission to death. Reviewer #4: This article addresses an important public health issue which continue to impact healthcare around the world, despite > 3 yaers of experience in dealing with COVID 19 pandemic. The pre-vaccination period of this study shows the factors leading to death at a pospulation level. It address the unique feature of public sector healthcare units and impact of their size & bed occpancy on a pandemic of this magnitude. It also gives important data for public health authorities in terms of prepardness for the future pandemics. There are some imporatnt short comings in the manuscript that need addressing. 1, Overall size of the manuscript is too long and the proportion of different sections isn't uniform. e.g. Discussion section is relatively small as compared methodology which is very detailed and "wordy" I would recommend to cut down the methodology section. 2. The information within each section isn't appropriate for the respective section. e.g. sentence 68-70 should be in methodology. point 72-74 should be in discussion section. point 95-96 should be in results section 3. exclusion of so called "reargard hospital" oncology units and patients receiving hemodialysis would have lead to exclusion of an important vulnerable group with high expected mortality. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: msalbur ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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A risk scoring model of COVID-19 at hospital admission PONE-D-22-14646R3 Dear Dr. Gomes, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Robert Jeenchen Chen, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: I am very pleased to see that you have made all the suggestions / recommendations from me. Also you have addressed some of the general reconfiguration of the manuscript. Reviewer #5: Manuscript is completely revised and ready to get published. All the subjects in this article is addressed appropriately and needs no more revision. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #4: Yes: M S Albur Reviewer #5: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-14646R3 A risk scoring model of COVID-19 at hospital admission Dear Dr. Gomes: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Robert Jeenchen Chen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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