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Original SubmissionFebruary 2, 2023
Decision Letter - Tope Michael Ipinnimo, Editor

PONE-D-23-03063Why not to pick your nose: association between nose-picking and SARS-CoV-2 incidence, a cohort study in hospital health care workersPLOS ONE

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Additional Editor Comments:

1. Please kindly proof read the work for typographical and grammatical errors

2. Is this really a prospective cohort study if the data collection regarding behavioral and facial characteristics were collected retrospectively?

3. "Participants were categorized into working in COVID-19 patient care and working in non-COVID-19 patient care or not working in patient care" (under the methods: COVID-19 Exposure - Line 109 and 110). Why did the authors categorize the cohort into these groups? The outcome measure is SARS-CoV-2 infection and the exposure/independent variables were nose-picking, nail-biting etc

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Reviewers' comments:

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Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: General feed- back

This study examined the risk to contract SARS-CoV-2 infection by some behavioural habits among 404 health care workers in the Netherlands surveyed online on behavioural during March 2020- October 2020, hence during the first pandemic year. SARS-CoV-2 infection was defined as a self-reported positive NAAT result and/or presence of SARS120 CoV-2-specific antibodies. Several endpoints were investigated by multivariable logistic regression: nose picking, nail-biting, wearing glasses, and having a beard. Self-reported nose picking was he only behaviour significantly associated with SARC-CoVI-2 infection [OR 3.80, 95% CI 1.05 to 57 24.52].

Specific comments

This study is interesting to be published, although some points needs to be address

First of all this study was conducted during the first pandemic year, when vaccines were not available yet and more aggressive yet less infectious viral strains were circulating. The spread of Omicron variant completely changed the scenario. Although HCWs were mostly adequately vaccinated by end of 2021, an increase of primary as well as secondary infections was observed from December 2021 on, with the diffusion of Omicron. Although generally mild, the vast majority of infections were acquired outside health care premises, suggesting that vaccination was not effective in preventing asymptomatic/mild-moderate infections during the Omicron wave. By contrast in hospital, where risk reduction measures (face mask, hand hygiene, social distancing, etc.) were observed, SARS-CoV-2 infections were low. This study reports this critical finding [PMID: 36016284]

This study used serology to confirm past SARS-CoV-2 infection. The ideal would be to swab test regularly (every 3-6 days) HCW in the nose, to detect any asymptomatic positivity.

Discussion

Lines 246: “even though the noseat size of Europeans is above world average”… this seems a n odds assertion

Conclusions (lines 248-250): “Future research could examine ….. e.g. by using saline spray to reduce mucus”. Here it is worth mentioning some relevant studies on disinfectants tested against SARS-CoV-2 in vitro as well as in vivo, to reduce the viral shedding time from patients affected by mild-moderate or asymtpomatic disease (PMID: 36676046; PMID: 36432693; PMID: 36432693)

Reviewer #2: General comments

This interesting study investigated the association between nose-picking, nail-biting, glass-wearing and beard-keeping and COVID-19 infection among healthcare workers in the Netherlands.

The study is well-conceived and conducted with sound methodology and appropriate statistical methods.

The results are presented clearly and subsequent discussion was in line with the study outcome.

Limitations were also well-highlighted.

Specific comments

Table 1 to be re-formatted to include the lateral border

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Reviewer #2: Yes: Joseph O. Fadare

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Revision 1

Point by point response to editor and reviewers

Additional Editor Comments:

1. Please kindly proof read the work for typographical and grammatical errors

Answer: A thorough proof read by the entire author team has taken place, which has resulted in changing the phrasing of several main expressions, such as wearing glasses (instead of bespectacled) and having a beard (instead of bearded).

2. Is this really a prospective cohort study if the data collection regarding behavioral and facial characteristics were collected retrospectively?

Answer: We agree with the editor that our cohort study is a mixture of both prospectively and retrospectively collected data. Therefore we rewrote the following sentence:

“In a cohort study among 404 HCW in two university medical centers in the Netherlands, SARS-CoV-2-specific antibodies were prospectively monthly measured during the first phase of the pandemic. For this study HCW received an additional retrospective survey regarding behavioral (e.g. nose-picking) and facial characteristics.“ (Abstract, page 2, line 48-51)

3. “Participants were categorized into working in COVID-19 patient care and working in non-COVID-19 patient care or not working in patient care” (under the methods: COVID-19 Exposure - Line 109 and 110). Why did the authors categorize the cohort into these groups? The outcome measure is SARS-CoV-2 infection and the exposure/independent variables were nose-picking, nail-biting etc

Answer: In our original publication of the S3 study [reference 6 in the main manuscript, PMID: 34319354] participants working directly with COVID-19 patients were at increased risk of contracting a SARS-CoV-2 infection during the first phase of the pandemic, compared with those working in non-COVID-19 patient care (hazard ratio [HR], 2.25; 95% CI, 1.17-4.30) and those not working in patient care (HR 3.92; 95% CI, 1.79-8.62). Therefore we used the same categories in our current study to be able to adjust for possible confounding of working in COVID-19 patient care. To clarify this, we added the following sentence to the method section:

“Working in COVID-19 patient care and contact with a community member or coworker with COVID-19 were associated with an increased risk of contracting SARS-CoV-2 infection. 6 To be able to adjust for possible confounding of these factors participants were categorized ...” (Methods, page 4, line 111-113)

Reviewers' comments:

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

________________________________________

3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

Answer: We consulted the privacy officer of the Amsterdam UMC and were able to share the data set supporting our results.

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4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Review Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: General feed- back

This study examined the risk to contract SARS-CoV-2 infection by some behavioural habits among 404 health care workers in the Netherlands surveyed online on behavioural during March 2020- October 2020, hence during the first pandemic year. SARS-CoV-2 infection was defined as a self-reported positive NAAT result and/or presence of SARS120 CoV-2-specific antibodies. Several endpoints were investigated by multivariable logistic regression: nose picking, nail-biting, wearing glasses, and having a beard. Self-reported nose picking was he only behaviour significantly associated with SARS-CoV-2 infection [OR 3.80, 95% CI 1.05 to 57 24.52].

Specific comments

This study is interesting to be published, although some points needs to be address

First of all this study was conducted during the first pandemic year, when vaccines were not available yet and more aggressive yet less infectious viral strains were circulating. The spread of Omicron variant completely changed the scenario. Although HCWs were mostly adequately vaccinated by end of 2021, an increase of primary as well as secondary infections was observed from December 2021 on, with the diffusion of Omicron. Although generally mild, the vast majority of infections were acquired outside health care premises, suggesting that vaccination was not effective in preventing asymptomatic/mild-moderate infections during the Omicron wave. By contrast in hospital, where risk reduction measures (face mask, hand hygiene, social distancing, etc.) were observed, SARS-CoV-2 infections were low. This study reports this critical finding [PMID: 36016284]

Answer: We agree with the reviewer that the generalizability of our findings in the current pandemic phase with higher levels of immunity, altered strain transmissibility, and different masking habits, is unclear[PMID: 36016284]. However, identifying and addressing readily preventable sources of transmission remains important to limit in-hospital spread of SARS-CoV-2 and probably other respiratory viruses, both to patients and co-workers, in any epidemic. For this reason, we feel our findings are relevant despite these limitations and underline the importance of preventive measures and proper hand hygiene when working in healthcare. We adjusted the limitation section in the discussion correspondingly. (Discussion, page 8, line 248-254)

This study used serology to confirm past SARS-CoV-2 infection. The ideal would be to swab test regularly (every 3-6 days) HCW in the nose, to detect any asymptomatic positivity.

Answer: In the first phase of the pandemic, when we collected the data in 2020, testing by NAAT (or PCR) was not widely available yet. Therefore, due to scarcity, only symptomatic HCW were tested by using a nasopharyngeal swab. We therefore performed regular serological follow-up to be able to detect also asymptomatic individuals, additionally to self-reported results of NAATs in symptomatic individuals. The used Wantai ELISA total-Ig against S1-RBD has an specificity of 99.6% and sensitivity of 95.4% in mild or asymptomatic cases and 97.5% in severe cases >14 days after the onset of illness. (Report of Dutch Society of Medical Microbiology* and PMID: 33574119) This is close to the sensitivity (97%) of a single nasopharyngeal swab [PMID: 33857405]). Therefore we believe that the rate of false negatives in our population is low. We added the specificity and sensitivity of the Wantai essay to the methods section (Methods, page 4, line 124-126).

* van den Beld M, Report Status of the validation of ELISA and auto-analyser antibody tests for SARS-CoV-2 diagnostics: considerations for use Status as at 15 July 2020. Avalaible: status-validation-elisa-and-auto-analysers_2020715_final.pdf (nvmm.nl)

Discussion

Lines 246: “even though the noseat size of Europeans is above world average”… this seems an odds assertion

Answer: In theory a larger nose might enhance the depth of penetration while nose picking and thus potentially increase the risk of getting infected. However, this is currently not (yet) scientifically proven we removed the assertion from our manuscript.

Conclusions (lines 248-250): “Future research could examine ….. e.g. by using saline spray to reduce mucus”. Here it is worth mentioning some relevant studies on disinfectants tested against SARS-CoV-2 in vitro as well as in vivo, to reduce the viral shedding time from patients affected by mild-moderate or asymptomatic disease (PMID: 36676046; PMID: 36432693; PMID: 36432693)

Answer: We would like to thank reviewer 1 for the useful reference PMID: 36432693) and added the following suggestion to the conclusion: “…treating the underlying cause of nose picking (e.g. by using saline spray to reduce mucus) or using nasal disinfectant spray in SARS-CoV-2 infected individuals to counteract viral shredding.” (Conclusion, page 9, line 272-273)

Reviewer #2: General comments

This interesting study investigated the association between nose-picking, nail-biting, glass-wearing and beard-keeping and COVID-19 infection among healthcare workers in the Netherlands.

The study is well-conceived and conducted with sound methodology and appropriate statistical methods.

The results are presented clearly and subsequent discussion was in line with the study outcome.

Limitations were also well-highlighted.

Specific comments

Table 1 to be re-formatted to include the lateral border

Answer: Table 1 has been re-formatted so it fits the page.

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Decision Letter - Tope Michael Ipinnimo, Editor

Why not to pick your nose: association between nose picking and SARS-CoV-2 incidence, a cohort study in hospital health care workers

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Why not to pick your nose: association between nose picking and SARS-CoV-2 incidence, a cohort study in hospital health care workers

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