Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 23, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-08709Retrospective and projected warming-equivalent emissions from global livestock and cattle calculated with an alternative usage of global warming potentials denoted GWP*PLOS ONE Dear Dr. del Prado, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 10 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please remove your figures from within your manuscript file, leaving only the individual TIFF/EPS image files, uploaded separately. These will be automatically included in the reviewers’ PDF. Additional Editor Comments: 1. Please revise the paper title and improve the readability of the paper title. 2. Please make sure that the format ot fhis paper is consistent with the format requirements of PLOSOne. 3. Please improve the quality of figures. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Using a simple GWP*-TCRE framework together with a set of scenarios/assumptions, the authors presented the estimates for the past and projected contribution of livestock/ruminant CH4 emissions to the global temperature. The GWP*-TCRE framework is a simplified way to better, even not accurate, quantify the global warming potential for short-lived greenhouse gases like CH4. The topic and the results are interesting and useful for informing climate mitigation pathways involving all major GHGs. The manuscript deserve a publication after some revision. My a few concerns are as follows. (1) Warming contribution from CH4 emissions from livestock sector is the main focus of this study. However, the definition of the CH4 emissions used is confusing across the text. “Livestock”, “cattle”, “cattle and buffalo” were all used casually in the current text, though the emission quantity can be quite different. Livestock emissions including ruminant and monogastric ones; cattle (or beef cattle and dairy cows) and buffaloes are ruminants, while sheep and goats are also ruminants that emitted a substantial part of the livestock CH4 emissions; CH4 emissions are also from pig and poultry, especially manure management. In addition, there are enteric CH4 emissions and those from manure management. It is absolutely necessary to clarify in every place of the manuscript what kinds of CH4 emissions (livestock, ruminant, or cattle only; enteric or including manure management) were accounted and used in the calculation of GWP* and their TCRE. It can also be clarified in a paragraph in the Materials and Methods, and used consistently across the manuscript. (2) A lot of scenarios were set in this study to illustrate the effects of CH4 emissions. Readers will probably get lost during the long description between L197 and L261. It is necessary to provide an overview figure or table to illustrate the setups and especially the rational and the purpose. People can come back to the figure or table when read the super long results section. (3) Most of the figures were consisted with a single line or with several subplot presenting similar information. It is recommended to combine some of the figures e.g., Fig. 1 and 3, or improve the quality and the presentation of the figures, e.g., subplots can be combined into one with three bars for each sensitivity period in Fig. 7. Most current figures were not publishable for their current form. (4) The text is unnecessarily long, which reads like a boring report without focus. I would strongly suggest a substantial shortening of the Results and Discussion section, showing only the core findings and information. For example, numbers that do not trigger further discussion or implications could be neglected. Paragraph between L395 and 405 seems redundant (similar information has been presented in previous sections. Furthermore, there are quite some paragraph that cite several papers with too much details. The text should be precise and concise. (5) A few important terms may be mis-used or mis-phrased. For example, it is not clear what does the “sustained” mean. Sustainable? Or constant? L389 “Tier” rather than “tear level”. Reviewer #2: Your research is interesting, but there are still some problems that confuse me. 1.You mentioned that “These differences are hidden when describing the effects of climate mitigation using annual CO2-e emissions and when targets are based on aggregated annual emission rates” in the research, but I don’t understand “the effects” and the reasons for “the effects”. 2.You mentioned that “Sustained annual reductions in CH4 emissions of 0.31% by the global cattle sector would stabilize their future effect on global temperature while greater reductions would reverse historical past contributions to global warming by the sector in a similar fashion to increasing C sinks”. But I don't know why emitting less CH4 emissions (greater reductions of 0.31%) rather than negative CH4 emissions would “reverse historical temperature impacts from previous decades”. Can you provide some level of details about the conclusion? 3.The feasibility of the target (annual reductions in CH4 emissions of 0.31% by the global cattle sector) and the related measures need to be taken, such as a shift to sustainable diets. 4.The blue line (mentioned in line 559, pp. 34) does not appear in the figure 9. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Retrospective and projected warming-equivalent emissions from global livestock and cattle calculated with an alternative climate metric denoted GWP* PONE-D-23-08709R1 Dear Dr. del Prado, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zhaoxia Guo Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors well addressed my concerns. I do not have further concerns. This manuscript is a nice piece that worth to be published. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-23-08709R1 Retrospective and projected warming-equivalent emissions from global livestock and cattle calculated with an alternative climate metric denoted GWP* Dear Dr. del Prado: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Zhaoxia Guo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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