Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 12, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-32054The role of scenic context on upright face preference in infancyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kobayashi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers provide specific comments on the methods and analyses used in the study, with suggestions for clarification and improvement. Reviewer 1 notes the need for clearer research questions and organisation of the introduction, consideration of age as a continuous variable, and inclusion of limitations and future directions in the discussion. Reviewer 2 points out potential confounding factors in the interpretation of the results, the need for clearer explanations of the relationship between contextual information and upright preference, and discrepancies between text and figure illustrations. Having made my own assessment of the manuscript, I agree that it would benefit greatly from a clearer statement of purpose and a more tailored introduction. Finally, please also check the manuscript carefully for typing errors. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 14 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: The manuscript under review investigates the role of scenic information in face processing in infants between 4 and 7 months of age. In two cross-sectional experiments, the authors show developmental differences in how scenic information influences how infants process faces. In particular, contextual features seem to influence visual preference in older (i.e., 6-7 months) but not younger (i.e., 4-5 months) infants. The authors discuss this difference in relation to previous findings on perceptual narrowing. Overall, the study design is sound and on a topic that is of interest for the field. I have a few comments on the organization of the manuscript, as well as on the analyses. A good part of the introduction discusses several studies without providing a clear indication of the research questions of the current work, which are described only at the end. Moreover, the first three paragraphs describe the visual preference phenomenon that are marginally related to the topic of the current study. I would recommend to clearly state the research question(s) and extensively discuss the relevant literature (the role of contextual factors in face processing), with only minimal reference to the general development of face processing. Several of these studies are reported in the discussion. In both experiments, the authors split the sample into two groups. What were the exact criteria used for this? Do the authors consider the small age differences between groups as meaningful? Would considering age as a continuous variable be more meaningful for the goal of the study? Why wasn’t age considered as a factor in the analyses on the total fixation times of experiment 1? A p-value of .065 is nonsignificant and should be considered as such. Since a fixed duration was chosen for the stimuli presentation, were there any differences in the total looking time across age groups? Can the authors clarify the reasons to analyze the preference scores for upright images using both an anova and one-sample t-tests? There is also minimal discussion of the results vs. chance level. Could the authors further elaborate whether the missing piece in the stimuli used in Experiment 2 could have attracted the infant's attention, thus influencing the results? Why not use a new set of images without faces to test age differences in the preference for textures (intact vs. scrambled)? Overall, since the study has a cross-sectional design, I would suggest referring to any age-related results in terms of “difference” more than “change”. The discussion would benefit from the inclusion of the limitations of the study and future directions. Several typos are left throughout the manuscript. Reviewer #2: The manusciprt “The role of scenic context on upright face preference in infancy” provided interesting insights into the role of scenic information in face processing and how it is used by infants. The finding that infants aged 6 months or more preferred upright faces in an intact scene, but not in a scrambled scene, indicates that they are sensitive to the surrounding information in face perception. The study also ruled out the potential confounding factor of more distraction by image scramble in 4- to 5-month-olds. Overall, this study highlights the importance of considering the role of surrounding information in face processing, and suggests that infants are able to utilize such information from a relatively young age. I have several comments as follows: 1. Robust upright image preference over inverted ones was reported in 4- to 5-month-olds, no matter the surrounding information was intact (meaning physically aligned with the face) or scrambled. However, the upright preference may not only be driven by the differences in face directions, but also by the direction differences in other image parcels. For instance, the upright image of the human body may have more meaning than the inverted version, even in the scrambled condition. Thus, “the preference score for upright images” could not reflect pure face perception per se, but reflect person and scene perception mixed together. The authors should resolve the issue as it may lead to other interpretations about the missing upright preference in infants aged 6 months or more. 2. Why would the scrambled contextual information diminish the upright preference in 6-month-olds? The authors mentioned a parallel and pre-attentive manner of visual scene scanning to help face detection (Page 24). I did not follow the logic here. The author should address this more clearly. 3. Line 280: “We found a significant negative correlation between age and preference score in the intact scene condition (r = -0.25, p < 0.05) but not in the scrambled condition (r = -0.09, n.s.). ” Inconsistent descriptions with figure illustration. Regression seems to be more significant in the scrambled condition according to Figure 2b. 4. Line 199: Three images out of 7 images were randomly selected for each participant in the intact scene condition. I am curious about the purpose of this procedural design. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-22-32054R1The role of scenic context on upright face preference in infancyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kobayashi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we are please to see that all reviewers' comments have been successfully addressed. Your efforts in improving the paper are highly appreciated. However, before we can accept your paper for publication, we need you to report exact p-values for all values greater than or equal to 0.001 as per journal guidelines. Accurate reporting of p-values is essential for ensuring the reproducibility and validity of research findings. Therefore, I kindly ask you to submit a revised version with the exact p-values. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 24 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The role of scenic context on upright face preference in infancy PONE-D-22-32054R2 Dear Dr. Kobayashi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Anna Sagana, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-32054R2 The role of scenic context on upright face preference in infancy Dear Dr. Kobayashi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Anna Sagana Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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