Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 4, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-00201The Resource Team: a Case Study of Solitary Confinement Reform in OregonPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cloud, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would be grateful if you could submit your revised manuscript by Apr 28 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please do not hesitate to request for an extension by replying to this message or contacting the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper describes an intervention related to solitary confinement practices in the Oregon state prison system called the “Oregon Response Team”. Triangulating across interviews and administrative data, the authors provide both qualitative and quantitative evidence of the impacts of the intervention for both incarcerated people and correctional staff. A particular strength of the paper are these two facets of the analysis: that the data draw on both incarcerated people and staff, and the interviews and administrative data analysis complement one another. Below, I detail a few ways I believe the contribution and limitations of the study could be further underlined: Background: The paper could be improved with a more extensive discussion of other types of interventions to reduce/end solitary confinement. While the authors note that there have been limited evaluations, it would be helpful to know what those studies found, and how this type of intervention resembles or differs from other kinds of reforms (litigation-driven, DOJ, legislation, DOC-initiated restrictions on length of stay). For example, some reforms focus on particularly marginalized groups, while others focus on the practice as a whole. Would this model if replicated be impactful for an entire system population, or just those who are designated eligible? Data/Methods: Could the authors provide more context for the interviews? What specific questions were asked (e.g., could they append the interview protocol)? As the authors note, this article is meant to describe the program, not offer causal evidence of its effects. Nevertheless, it would be useful to understand why this particular method was chosen, and how future studies could assess the impacts of the program (for example, longitudinal design, comparision groups). Implications: As the authors note, this is an intensive program requiring many resources to replicate and scale. Could the authors provide more detail on how they think this kind of intervention could be replicated or scaled across several prisons or prison systems? Would this work in all kinds of correctional settings where solitary confinement is used? What are the conditions that could make this program more accessible? Reviewer #2: Solitary confinement has been used as a form of judicially sanctioned punishment since the 1820s. Studies highlighting the negative health consequences associated with the use of isolation as a means of managing prisoners were first published in the 1840s. Despite continuing adverse reports from clinicians, psychologists, psychiatrists and non-governmental organisations highlighting the risks associated with limiting opportunities for prisoners to socialize with others, the solitary is widespread across many correctional systems. This is especially true of the US. This submission reports on a recent attempt to implement a Norwegian Correctional Service initiative in the Oregon State Penitentiary, a maximum-security institution. This initiative was designed to improve rehabilitative outcomes for high-risk prisoners—especially those with serious mental illness (SRI). The program was limited to the Behavioral Health Unit (“BHU”) at the Oregon State Penitentiary. The inmates of the BHU have ‘serious and lengthy mental health histories and past instances of violence against themselves or others’. The case study describes and evaluates the work of the Oregon Resource Team (ORT) over a nine-month period in 2021. The number of participants in the study is small. While 44 inmates took part in the ORT trial over the course of the study period, only16 were interviewed. Administrative data could be accessed for all 44. These were supplemented with interviews with 14 correctional staff. The study uses this data to plot quarterly unit-level changes in staff uses of force from January 1, 2016 to December 31, 2021, a time period that includes the period before the implementation of the ORT experiment and its first 12 months of operation. Although the study purports to report on the impact of the ORT experiment on the ‘behavior, health, and well-being of incarcerated persons and correctional staff, and ways to optimize its effectiveness and expand its use’ its major quantitative findings relate to falling levels of violence. Qualitative evidence from interviews is used to assess other positive impacts on the well-being of inmates and (interestingly) staff. It would be particularly useful if the window in which the ORT experiment was implemented was marked on Figure 1. Even so it is apparent that the peak in use of force was in the last quarter of 2018 and that considerable amount of the reduction occurred in 2019 and especially 2020. Perhaps Table 2 could be reorganised to show the change in the use of force between years (eg. 2016, 17, 18, 19, 20 and 21 – the last being the year of the study). More needs to be said about selection into the BHU over this time longer time frame and its operation. More needs to be said about the selection of individuals into the study. It might also be an idea to compare the ORT experiment with the outcomes of its Norwegian counterpart. Were they similar? A great deal of the submission is taken up with analysis of the interviews. These are informative but lengthy. This is an important study which could lead to significant reforms in current penal management but it needs to make sure that the statistical findings are robust and then use the qualitative evidence to flesh these out. Reviewer #3: This is a spectacular piece of scholarship that I am excited to see (hopefully) published. I have very little in terms of edits as it is already well-written and rigorously presented. Just a couple of very small details to consider 1. At several places the authors use numerals rather than spelling out numbers. I'm not sure of the rules/guidelines for this journal but standard APA practice is to spell out numerals (not %) from zero to 11 and then use numerals for the rest. So 3, would be three. Totally minor, and a bit nitpicky. I apologize. 2. The literature review is fairly comprehensive but seems to be missing a new book that came out last year: Surviving Solitary by Rudes and colleagues. I'd consider working that in since the main message is about harm. I did see the citation of several pieces by Reiter though, and that's the other biggie to cite (in my view). Kudos. Thank you for your work and your passion for it. Loved reading this piece. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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The Resource Team: A Case Study of a Solitary Confinement Reform in Oregon PONE-D-23-00201R1 Dear Dr. Cloud, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript after revision. The authors have responded to all of my suggestions, and I think the article will make an important contribution to research on solitary confinement, corrections, health, and public policy. Note that the authors cannot provide the underlying data for several important reasons. They provide sufficient reasoning to be allowed not to share their data publicly, and point people to the ways they can request data from the Oregon state prison system. Reviewer #2: I have ticked No to 4 but the authors have provided good reasons why some of the underlying data cannot be made available. This is an important study and I am happy to recommend its publication following the addition of these revisions. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Hamish Maxwell-Stewart ********** |
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PONE-D-23-00201R1 The Resource Team: A case study of a solitary confinement reform in Oregon Dear Dr. Cloud: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Nasrul Ismail Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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