Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-07828Tau protein aggregation associated with SARS-CoV-2 main proteasePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raphael J. Eberle, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After its careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that convincingly addresses the all points raised by both reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by July 1st. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The work presented by Eberle et al. presents novel discoveries of interest to the field of SARS-CoV-2-host interaction, as well as broader implications to the field of neurodegeneration due to the generation of an aggregation-prone truncation of tau by one of the virus proteases. The authors provide in vitro evidence for a possible triggering mechanism for tau aggregation induced by the SARS-CoV-2 3CL protease (3CLpro), which would cleave full-length tau to generate a pool of fragments, one or more of which would efficiently aggregate. Despite the lack of a more detailed study on the exact cleaving site, the identification of the aggregation-prone fragment, and cell-based studies to better understand the findings, their main claim is justified and supported by the biophysical analysis in the paper. Specifically, Eberle et al. used ThT assays, analytical HPLC and mass spectrometry to report the effect of 3CLpro on tau cleavage and subsequent aggregation. Despite the abovementioned missed points that could improve its appeal to a broader audience, this study provides informative results and interpretations suitable for publication in PLOS ONE, subject to the suggested revisions mentioned below: Major concerns: 1. The abstract may be misleading as it suggests that the study involves all three proteins (tau, TDP-43, and alpha-synuclein) when, in fact, its focus is only on tau. It would be clearer to specify that this study investigates the effects of 3CLpro on tau aggregation, rather than mentioning TDP-43 and alpha-synuclein which were not affected. 2. The results of this study indicate that 3CLpro proteolytically cleaves 2N4R tau and the cleavage is associated with tau aggregation events. However, it would be beneficial to get a more detailed picture, such as which fragment (or at least which peak observed in HPLC analysis) aggregates, by performing ThT assays on the different fractions obtained upon digestion and HPLC analysis. Minor concerns: 1. On page 8, line 237, it states that "2N4R tau consists of 266 amino acids with an approximated molecular weight of 46 kDa." However, 2N4R tau is the largest size human brain tau and is composed of 441 amino acids in length; this should be corrected/clarified. 2. Although the analysis of alpha-syn and TDP43 is limited, an SDS-PAGE should be included to assess their sample quality and purity, as done for 2N4R tau in Figure S1. 3. The Western Blotting with CF633 labeled tau13 in Figure S2A (lane 2) should be improved as it shows almost no reactivity. 4. In Figure S2B, a control should be included to show whether heparin on its own contributes to the CD spectrum. Furthermore, the specific method section for CD is missing and should be added, explaining how heparin signal is subtracted from the experimental data during the data processing and analysis. 5. In Figure S2B, the light gray CD spectrum is claimed to correspond to "2N4R tau filament". Imaging analysis (AFM or TEM) should be performed to support this claim. 6. In the legend of Figure 1B (page 9, lines 263-264), it is claimed that "The inactivation of the protease was treated with 10 µM DSF". However, the inactivation condition is reported in Figure 1C, so this should be corrected. 7. On page 9, lines 271-272, it is claimed that "the monomer concentration and its cleavage are accompanied by the amount of aggregate formation (S3B Fig)". However, this observation could be due to the increased concentration of monomer which, even without being cleaved, could aggregate efficiently. In order to support this assertion, the same assay should be performed in the presence of DSF-inactivated protease. 8. In Figure 1D, it is unclear why the fluorescence intensity decreases upon protease deactivation. If aggregates were already formed, the fluorescence intensity should remain unaltered. The decrease could suggest that the formed aggregates can be disassembled or degraded upon inhibitor addition. To clarify this point, a control consisting of aggregated tau (i.e., induced by heparin) + DSF (without protease) should be included to control the potential effect of the inhibitor itself. 9. The two gels shown in Figure 2C should not be cropped and should ideally be shown in a single gel to observe the concomitant decrease of the full-length tau associated with the increase of the 25kDa fragment. 10. As stated in Fig. 4D, "tau samples containing active 3CLpro yielded higher aggregate-specific readouts than tau samples in presence of inactivated protease". However, the readout appears to be quite similar, and a statistical test should be included to support the conclusions. Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes studies aimed at evaluating the possible induction of protein aggregation by the SARS-CoV-2 3CL protease (3CLpro), which might be relevant in explaining the long term neuropathology induced by infection by this virus. The Authors performed a series of simple, classic, clear-cut in vitro biochemistry studies based on mixing recombinant tau and 3CLpro and following their interaction using SDS-PAGE and HPLC (to detect fragmentation), or thioflavin fluorescence (to follow aggregation), under different concentration-dependence and kinetic regimens. Mass spectrometry was used to further identify the fragments of tau produced by 3CLpro. Lack of effect of 3CLpro on other proteins relevant to neuropathology, such as synuclein, was also established by similar approaches. All these experiments were carefully executed, and adequate controls included. Of course, given the high prevalence of neurological ailments within "persistent Covid-19", this line of research is of potential interest. Having stated this, I find two shortcomings in the manuscript: 1) The ratio of substrate to protease used in these experiments was very high, with a maximum effect when equimolar (10 uM) concentrations were used. Increasing this ratio, to 5, or even 2...resulted in a very substantial decrease of the effect. This casts doubts on the physiological relevance of the results, something that is not acknowledged or discussed by the Authors. Do they envision a set of physiological conditions in which the intracellular or extracellular concentration of 3CLpro are sufficient to cleave tau and cause its aggregation during SARS-Cov-2 infection? Furthermore, the majority of neurological complications of Covid-19 are relatively acute, whereas tau aggregation is involved in neurodegenerative processes (for example, Alzheimer´s disease) which take many years to develop. How do the Authors link a putative 3CLpro-induced aggregation of tau with specific SARS-Cov-2-linked neurological pathology? 2) The manuscript is written in an amateurish fashion (I apologize if the term seems too negative, it is meant to be merely descriptive). A few examples: bullets in the Conclusion section; "Different dementias show a conformationally altered concentration of tau" (a concentration can be high or low, but not "conformationally altered" (line 384); Table 3 in the Discussion, rather than a narrative description of its contents; "...tryptic tau peptides are no longer detectable by 3CLpro into different fragments..." (I understand the Authors mean that 3CLPro, under these experimental conditions, does not generate fragments that, after tryptic digestion, are amenable of identification...)(line 335); Analysis of the tau digestion underwent 3CLpro using mass spectrometrY (????) (line 313); "HPLC experiments with 2N4R tau and inactivated 3CLpro showed that the corresponding tau peak and the peak regions I, II and III are unaffected" (the Authors mean kinetic experiments, HPLC is just an analytical tool, not an experimental approach or design...) (line 310). And many other examples. Finally, I would suggest analyzing peak I and peak ensembles (they are not "individual peaks") II, and III also directly, withouth prior tryptic digestion. That might allow establishing the size of the different 3CLpro fragments generated, and by combining that information with the sequence of their tryptic fragments (combined, in the case of II and III) their complete characterization. ********** 6. 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