Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 17, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-00199Identification and classification of factors affecting the non-using of safety harness at height among construction workers in TehranPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jabbari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 30 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Partly Reviewer #5: Partly Reviewer #6: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: I Don't Know Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manusript is technically correct. The applied statistics have been well described. the discussion is based on the results mentioned. Recommendations by the authors are evidence based. In my opinion, I believe that the mauscript may be accepted for publication. Reviewer #2: I would like to say that this piece of research aims to find factors affecting the non-use of safety harness at height among construction workers, has a comprehensive analysis to identify the potential and most influential factors out of all. But while reading the manuscript I found that it could be written in a much better way. I am not having the line numbers, so cannot point out the specific word or lines. Following are the comments to best of my knowledge: 1. The language used in the manuscript is not technical, only use the language used in research papers. The English grammer should be checked with a skilful person as there are quite a few mistakes in the whole document. Check each and every statement thoroughly. Try to be consistant with choice of words , like, use 'factors affecting non-use...' and not 'reasons for not using...' as you have used word 'factors' in the title and aim. 2. The introduction needs to be improved. Try not quote studies with authors names. Make your statements clear. Give rationale of your study in detail. 3. There seems no sequence in methods section. Give study design, area, population, tools, data collection, etc. in the appropriate manner. 4. Explain the data collection process in detail. Explain the selection proccedure of participants. 5. In SNA (2.3.1), it is written that the research focussed on the factors influencing the impact of non-using of harnesses. It is that way? I think the whole manuscript is about the factors affecting the non-use of harness and not influencing the impact of.. Please make it clear in the aim of the study and be consitant till the conclusion. 6. Give details of the tool used for semi-structured interview as it is not given anywhere. 7. Take second line of discussion to methods. Rewrite last four lines of first paragraph of the discussion section. 8. Make figure 2 clearer (quality wise) and simplify it, as it not understandable. Try to work more hard on this manuscript. All the best. Reviewer #3: Several issues need to be addressed for this research to have a significant impact. 1. I feel the Introduction could be tightened up considerably? It seems to jump around quite a bit, so I found myself having to go back over previous sections to connect them to what I was reading. It is also repetitive. 2. More description and related study in the field should be added for Social Network Analysis. It should be stated that this method of analysis is appropriate for this type of study. 3. There needs to be a much more detailed description of the sample. How was the sample selected? How large were the organizations? What percentage of the workforce is included? What is the representation of the job categories presented? 4. The lack of any discussions of the practical implications of the findings, especially in light of the potential applicability of the research, is a significant weakness. 5. References (in the text and reference list) should be prepared based on the journal format. 6. This paper would benefit from review by a native English speaker to assist with the sentence construction and spelling. 7. The manuscript is scientifically incomplete and lacks a significant, novel contribution to the field. 8. The quality of figures should be improved. Reviewer #4: This is an interesting study. However, some major modifications are needed: 1. there are several grammatical errors throughout the passage, for example somewhere "lake" is written instead of "lack", 2. The introduction section is too short, a more extensive literature review is needed. 3. Authors wrote that a semi-quantitative approach is used. In this method there should be guide questions, which question did you use? 4. How the participants were selected? They were workers, supervisors, or others? are all of them working at height? how experienced were they? How many participants did you interview?. all these issues should be addressed in the manuscript. 5. please explain the stop point of interviews 6. section 3.1 should be upgraded by examples from your own study. examples of complex coding and categorizing make this section more elaborate. 7. there are many types of harness and PFAS in the market, did you consider the type of harness used by the participants? Reviewer #5: Introduction The innovation of the study needs further clarification. Methods and results Why were 23 people selected? What was question in the semi-structured interview? What characteristics did the selected people have? What were the inclusion and exclusion criteria? The explanations on the MAXQDA software are transferred to data analysis section. It is better to ask the opinion of safety experts through Delphi method or interview to ensure the obtained results. Also, the literature review can be helpful for identifying the items. The demographic characteristics of the workers should also be mentioned, especially their level of education. How is the validity of workers' opinions evaluated? What model is used for this classification? Some items in the design and comfort group are similar. A better classification could be done. For example, individual items, job items, organizational items, device design items, environmental items. It is not clearly explained in method section. What was the input to the SNA model? Your study is qualitative. Where are the quantitative values entered to obtain the weights of the items in the model? Was it based on expert opinion? More explanations are needed for the method and results section. Discussion In the discussion section, the obtained results need to be interpreted. Conclusion In the conclusion section, general results, applications of the obtained results and future studies should be mentioned. the manuscript need the gramatical revision by native. Reviewer #6: The present study offers useful insights to identify the factors affecting the non-using of harnesses among construction workers in Tehran, Iran. However, the manuscript should be revised in the light of following comments: 1. Methods section- The authors have not mentioned the sampling strategy adopted to select the 23 workers. The sampling design has not been explicitly mentioned. The contents/domains of the interview are also not discussed. The Study design and methods adopted are the soul of any study, The authors should carefully address this lacunae. I am sharing some articles for the reference of the authors , wherein the sampling strategy, interview domains etc are clearly mentioned. The authors may refer these for refining their manuscript. https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/1472-6963-14-129 https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fpubh.2022.870880/full https://bmcpublichealth.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1471-2458-11-871 2. Picture quality of Figure 2 can be improved 3. Discussion section- Can the results of the study be generalized to other locations of Iran? If No, then can it be acknowledged as a limitation by the authors. 4. Typing errors- The authors should check the manuscript for typing errors and grammatical consistency. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Rahul Gupta Reviewer #2: Yes: Reetu Paasi Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No Reviewer #6: Yes: TANVI KIRAN ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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PONE-D-23-00199R1Identification and classification of factors affecting the non-use of safety harness at height among construction workers in TehranPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jabbari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 02 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Mohammad Hossein Ebrahimi Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #7: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #7: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #7: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Although many comments have been addressed but it has been repeatedly asked to carefully check the whole manuscript for grammer and use only appropriate research language. The document still lacks that scientific writing. The staements are not connecting at many places and there are repetitions; whether it is introduction or conclusion. There are many minor mistakes which should not be present at this point of time, like, the first paragarph of results has a repetition, please correct them. Reviewer #3: - Cohesion and coherence of sentences (paragraphs) should be considered in the introduction section. - Relevant references should be added to sentences. For instance, in the introduction section, according to the previous explanations, according to the studies, and ... need references. Reviewer #4: The manuscript is acceptable based on the performed modifications. Howover, I can not approve that the manuscript is written and organized based on the journal guidlines. Reviewer #7: Dear author, Thank you for the efforts of the respected author in writing the manuscript. A few points are raised, please note and correct: • Is it better to mention the statistics of occupational accidents in Iran, especially falling from a height, in the introduction? And that it should be explained how the situation of such incidents is in Iran. • It should be explained whether other articles, regulations and references have been checked in extracting the factors, or whether it has been considered only by experts? This is very important. • The benefits of using the MAXQDA software in this study will be explained more. Of course, this is one of the strengths of the study, but it is better to explain it more. • If possible, the quality of the Fig 2 should be improved. • More articles need to be compared in the discussion. • In which of the factors is the position of the cost of buying harness considered? • In which factors is the place of education and instructions important? • Inclusion & exclusion criteria are not clearly stated. It is necessary to complete this part by mentioning the reasons. • Ethical considerations need to be mentioned in detail. • The abstract needs to be organized and completed. • The text needs to be edited by a language expert for ease of reading. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr Reetu Passi Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #7: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Identification and classification of factors affecting the non-use of safety harness at height among construction workers in Tehran PONE-D-23-00199R2 Dear Dr. Jabbari, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mohammad Hossein Ebrahimi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-00199R2 Identification and classification of factors affecting the non-use of safety harness at height among construction workers in Tehran Dear Dr. Jabbari: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mohammad Hossein Ebrahimi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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