Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-31399School Closures Significantly Reduced Arrests of Black and Latinx Urban YouthPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jahn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have received a report from an expert reviewer in criminology who enjoyed the paper but recommends revisions. I concur with this reviewer's opinion and have also reviewed your paper, serving as Reviewer 2. Reviewer 1's comments can be viewed at the bottom of this email. I also have attached Reviewer 1's comments and my report to this email as separate files. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 20 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please note that supplementary tables (should remain/ be uploaded) as separate "supporting information" files [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study capitalizes on a natural experiment resulting from school shutdowns due to the COVID-19 pandemic to measure the impact of policing schools as “hot spots” on racial disparities of youth criminalization. Results are clear and compelling and have important implications for policy. I offer the following comments to potentially improve the manuscript. Methods: Multiple comparisons are made to support the claim that areas around schools are particularly important for the criminalization of Black and Latinx youth—comparisons between pre- and post-school closures, comparisons by race, comparisons by city, and comparisons by age group. Why not also compare arrest density of school buffers zones with arrest density outside of school zones? It would seem to be the most direct comparison to support the overall conclusion. Also, the fixed effects approach is effective for controlling for unmeasured covariates that differ between cities (and season). What remains unexamined here are the potential confounders (or moderators!) due to within-city inequality based on variables that have been tested extensively in criminological research such as social disorganization, resource disadvantage, median income, percent HS grads, % aged 15-24, population density, etc. Indeed, Percent Black and Percent Latinx might even be most relevant here. That said, I think it’s reasonable to argue that an extensive analysis is beyond the current scope, but a supplemental analysis to check for variation, say between school sites within cities, would be a helpful clarification (and/or signpost for future research). Please clarify: Do arrest rates within the buffer zones include in-school arrests? How does this impact findings? Results: The text on pg. 12 (Youth Arrest Rates and Disparities…) combined with Figure 1 is unclear. Is the cited rate of average weekly youth arrest rates of 17.4/100,000 for 2019 meant to represent the average for the whole year? Does that include Jan-Mar 2020? Or does it represent only Jan-Mar 2020 rather than 2019? Also, perhaps I am not understanding what the trendlines represent, but why does the trajectory at the end of 2019 not line up with the beginning of 2020? Most importantly—from Jan-Mar 2020, the trajectory already appears to be heading downward. What could explain it? How do we rule out that the levels after Mar 2020 are not simply a continuation of processes that started in Jan, rather than the school shutdowns? Also – please define IRR at some point in the study. Very minor: Pg. 7, line 106: I appreciate the magnitude of the impact of these findings on health outcomes, but I actually think the authors might be selling their reach here a bit short, as the findings also have implications for economic outcomes (e.g., Pager 2003 – The Mark of Criminal Record), not to mention education, and future criminal justice contact as well. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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School Closures Significantly Reduced Arrests of Black and Latinx Urban Youth PONE-D-22-31399R1 Dear Dr. Jahn, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript. I very much appreciate the thoroughness with which you revised your paper and documented those revisions. You and your co-authors have produced a very interesting study. We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, W. David Allen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-31399R1 School Closures Significantly Reduced Arrests of Black and Latinx Urban Youth Dear Dr. Jahn: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. W. David Allen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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