Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 6, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-33479Fibrinolytic and antibiotic treatment of prosthetic vascular graft infections in a novel rat modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Johansen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Of particular concern is both the statistical analysis/sample size for the different animal groups, as well as the validity of a fibrinous biofilm. Within that context, the lack of an effect of TPA, in vivo, raised some concerns about the nature of the biofilm, and perhaps even the dosing regiment that was used in your model. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Material/implant associated infections are still feared complications after surgery and can have devastating consequences for the patient. Infections of the vascular graft cause morbidity and can lead to death. Improved treatment options of the infection and the biofilm are therefore urgently needed. The authors of the study present a new rat model to investigate prosthetic vascular graft infection and possible treatment options. The model resulted in an infection rate 100% with survival of the animals over the experimental period. They tested the efficacy of tissue plasminogen activator (tPA) in vitro and showed a biofilm reduction of about 30%. In vitro evaluation of the effect of tPA plus antibiotics was not done. They went into the animal model and found a significant but only minor reduction of the CFU after antibiotic treatment, addition of tPA had no effect. 1. Line 56 ff. The cited studies are no all in vivo studies on IVC infection. Please be more careful with the citation of studies. 2. Line 70 ff: The authors explain the sample size calculation. I am not an expert in statistics, but it seems unusual to calculate the sample size only for the treatment group. They used a sample size of n=4 for the control and up to n=18 for the treatment groups. This difference needs further explanation. 3. Due to the comparison of multiple groups, a post hoc test is necessary. 4. Line 184 ff: please provide the values for the control group. Please give the unit for the values. 5. Fig. 2: Please show the individual data points (dot plots as in the other graphs) 6. The effect of tPA is not very pronounced compared to other substances and studies (see Ref 16) and it should be discussed why they used this substance with the low efficacy. 7. In a previous study (Microorganisms 2016, 4, 36, Ref 13) they saw a much higher biofilm dispersal with lower Steptokinase concentrations (500 vs 2500 U/ml). Please discuss this. 8. Why was not the combination of tPA plus antibiotics tested in vitro? This would have provided valuable data regarding the possible effect and might have foreseen the failure of the animal study. 9. Table 1. Please add the information also for the other groups. 10. Fig. 4: not all animals showed a systemic infection. However, in the abstract they mention infection in all animals. Please clarify. 11. Figure legends: Please check the sample size for the vanco-group. It should be n=5 as shown in Fig. 5 and described in the drop-out section. 12. They see a reduction from 6.56 log10 CFU/mL (Control) to 3.50 log10 CFU/mL (V+R). This effect is statistically significant, but is it clinically meaningful? Normally a log3 reduction is expected to show antimicrobial efficacy. This should be discussed. 13. They discuss several limitations and explain the rational for the study design. However, they do not address the limited in vitro effect, the missing antibiotics group in the in vitro study and why they went with this effect to the in vivo model. 14. Please check the separation of decimals within the text. Reviewer #2: General comments This is generally well written and potential valuable paper. However, I have two main concerns. I understand that the authors justifiably strived to use as few animals as possible, but I feel an important control is missing - to assess the impact and integration of the procedure alone by using an uninoculated graft. In addition to weight change the graft and surrounding tissue could be assessed after 10 and 18 days (i.e. immediately prior to treatment and at termination) by H&E or visual inspection. Another criticism is that although the animal model is designed to be a biofilm infection model there is no direct demonstration of biofilm on the untreated control graft. A further control would be to assess for biofilm at days 10 and at 18. If a fibrin coated biofilm did not form might this explain the limited activity of tPA? Confocal or SEM demonstrating biofilm in controls as compared to treated animals would significantly strengthen the manuscript. The grafts could have been sectioned for one piece to be imaged and the other for plate count. Specific comments: 1) It would be useful to provide vancomycin MIC and also to assess, or provide a reference, on whether vanco and rifamp act synergistically or additively. 2) Why was tPA chosen for the animal studies over streptokinase? 3) It would be useful to show (or reference) whether tPA or streptokinase have any kind of antimicrobial activity. 4) can the authors explain why the untreated rats had a higher CFU load on the graft but also showed the most weight gain? 5) Fig. 5. The vanc + rifamp combinations show bimodal distributions. Is this possibly an artefact of plotting 0 CFU as zero rather than as the detection limit? If the bimodal distribution is real is there any evidence of why those particular mice may have cleared the infection from post-mortem exam during dissection? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Fibrinolytic and antibiotic treatment of prosthetic vascular graft infections in a novel rat model PONE-D-22-33479R1 Dear Dr. Johansen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I highly appreciate the additional work of the authors. They increased the number of animals in selected groups and added further in vitro and in vivo data. All my comments are satisfactorily answered. Even though the new in vitro experiment do not highly support the in vivo study, the argumentation of the authors is clear and I agree. Please check/correct the amount of Streptokinase used in the Biofilm assay (M&M): 500 instead of 2500 U/ml as mentioned in the rebuttal letter and in the figure legend. Reviewer #2: The authors have done a good job of doing additional experiments and addressing my concerns. This work will be a valuable contribution to the field. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Paul Stoodley ********** |
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PONE-D-22-33479R1 Fibrinolytic and antibiotic treatment of prosthetic vascular graft infections in a novel rat model Dear Dr. Johansen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Noreen J. Hickok Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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