Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 2, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-21726Targeted randomization dose optimization trials enable fractional dosing of scarce drugsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Strohbehn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ==============================All comments of both reviewers are essential for you to address prior to publication. Please also address the following issues: (a) In the methods section you state that dose level 0 (placebo) will not be assessed. However, Figure 1 reveals that some of your dose-response curves are up to dose level 4 close to 0.20, the efficacy of dose level 0 (Hill parameter "a"). In other words, whenever one of these corresponding dose levels is chosen, then actually the placebo level is chosen, isn't it? (b) Figure 1: The Hill equation is a smooth curve, isn't it? You give the impression of a broken lines curve. (c) Please check and confirm that your R package "DoseDeescalation" meets the criteria of utility, validation, and availability, which are described in detail at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-methods-software-databases-and-tools. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 16 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors proposed an innovative Bayesian dose de-escalation design motivated by the vaccine dose-fractioning during the Covid-19 pandemic. The authors conducted thorough simulation studies to evaluate the operational characteristics of various dose assignment algorithms of this design, as well as their sensitivities to the change of several assumptions. Below are my review comments and questions: - The abstract claimed that those designs can be seamlessly integrated to platform trials, however this point wasn’t discussed or expanded in the rest of the manuscript. Please clarify what authors mean by the “seamless integration”. Does this mean one seamlessly designed study or two separate studies? - I am still trying to understand the benefit of conducting dose-de-escalation trials after a drug is demonstrated to be efficacious. In drug development process, dose-selection/dose-finding also occur during phase 1 and phase 2 studies, which usually involves the modeling of the dose response curves and studying both toxicity and efficacy. Is the proposed design only applicable to scenarios where an early-phase dose-finding study to evaluate efficacy has not been conducted? - Is the sample size of these design pre-specified? If yes, please clarify o what does the authors mean by the stopping rule (line 149) for dose assignment? Does it just mean reaching the pre-specified sample size? o Line 211: “speed of a trial depends in part upon the rate at which subjects are assigned to the correct dose level”. I agree there would be benefits for having higher rate of assignment to the correct dose. However, if the sample size pre-specified, then why the rate of getting assigned to the correct dose level would impact the speed of the trial? o How is the sample size of those studies determined? What recommendations do the authors have for choosing sample sizes? - What is the computation speed for the proposed design? Does that vary by the dose assignment algorithm? ------------------------------------------------------------- Reviewer #2: The authors provided a very comprehensive evaluation on the 5 dose randomization schemes for dose fractional trials via numerous simulation scenarios and assumptions. There are a few areas the author may consider to add clarity in the manuscript 1) Is there any further literature or example (other than COVID) on how the dose fractionation have been adapted in a real trial? I would appreciate if the authors could provide any real trial example in the introduction Section e.g. may be in some disease area that considering dose fractionation trials may be more suitable. 2) From previous literature suggested k =0.7 may be a reasonable relative efficacy target for dose fractionation. I would also recommend the authors may also evaluate both k=0.7 and k=0.8 and to evaluate how results (e.g. probabilities of correctly estimating MDSE, of estimating MDSE less than true MDSE, of underdosing and the error in estimated or true response at the estimated MDSE) may be impacted under all these 5 dose-level randomization schemes. 3) It is unclear what is horseshoe (HS) /positive half of the horseshoe or the horseshoe-plus (HSPI) distribution. Please include more details to describe HS or HSPI. 4) Please provide the rationale on why the four-parameter Hill equation is chosen and is suitable for modelling the dose-response relationship here. Please also consider other parametric dose-response models with fewer parameters (such as the ‘classic’ two-parameter logistic model) for comparisons with the Hill equation. It would be best to include simulation results from another parametric dose-response model (or even considering non-parametric approach for dose-response relationship) for comparison to Hill equation. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Targeted randomization dose optimization trials enable fractional dosing of scarce drugs PONE-D-22-21726R1 Dear Dr. Strohbehn, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors provided detailed and clear responses to all reviewer and editors comments and questions. They also made great additions to the manuscript to clarify those points. I would like to thank the authors for their detailed responses to help me better understand of their work, as well as their efforts to improve the manuscript. Reviewer #2: Minor Comments: Thank you for address the review comments and providing updates on the manuscript Please find the following minor comments: 1) Page 7 lines 171 -172. This sentence discussed about the sum of posterior probabilities equal to 1 and with mean posterior probabilities always equals 1/T could be removed as the same has been discussed earlier in the same page from lines 160 to 161 2) Page 9 lines 204 -205 about the isotonic probability vector distribution. I think these were covered in the supplementary appendix instead of in the main text of this manuscript. Please edit this sentence. 3) Page 9 lines 214 discussing about the choice of K for the relative threshold for efficacy. Please include also your feedback that responded to the reviewer in the manuscript too about k is used ‘depends on situation of each case’, and changes in value of k will only change the ‘edge scenario’ and expected not to change operation characteristics nor the relative performances of the schemes demonstrated in this manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-21726R1 Targeted randomization dose optimization trials enable fractional dosing of scarce drugs Dear Dr. Strohbehn: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Harald Heinzl Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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